Xun Ruyu still threw the question to Zhang Wei: "What do you think?"

Zhang Wei said: "Then according to what I just said, there is no need to confess, and there is no need to introduce too much, let the plot push itself down." ”

"In order to increase the watchability, many plots in the early stage should be added with laughter, like a comedy, but not shallow, to put it simply, it is to add some small details when you are filming or running a show, running a group, such as broken high heels, being scolded for doing a show barefoot, but the audience feels good, the director will say good things again, please go back, some jokes that are not particularly funny, but they are very real and close to life. Zhang Wei said: "If you agree to this script, you have to find more laughter when you go back." ”

Xun Ruyu said: "Let's talk about the script." ”

Zhang is afraid to say: "I said simply, that is, in your funny and hard career, you finally approached the male god in your heart, but it is still a bad grade, it is a star-level grade, but you don't care, in order to work with the male protagonist, you will reduce your salary and try to cooperate with the time, for which you are always scolded by the agent, by the way, your entire pursuit process is full of expectations, that is, full of joy, let the audience stand in your position and look forward to it with you." ”

"Finally had the opportunity to cooperate with the male owner.,Get along slowly.,Try to express your good feelings.,But the male owner only treats you as a classmate.,He has a particularly beautiful girlfriend.,The relationship is strong.。 Zhang Wei said: "Don't think vulgar, there has always been no shortage of suitors for excellent men and women, for example, you in the play have someone to pursue, but you just ignore it." ”

"It's still the same sentence, increase the watchability, don't play deep when it comes to love films, make it as if no one can understand it, it's okay to pretend to be petty bourgeoisie, pursue mood, and fiercely exaggerate the pathos of love; or take off your clothes and hard, which is rarely inappropriate! ”

"You know that the male protagonist has an object, but the love in my heart makes you continue to dedicate. In order to avoid the troubles that may arise in a qiē, your dedication is implicit and will not attract anyone's attention, let alone be disgusted. Basically, I lean on the state of young men and women falling in love, don't feel naïve, this kind of naivety is eternal beauty, no one doesn't like it, no one doesn't yearn for it. ”

"Anyway, it's the kind of person who pretends not to see it and looks at you secretly. Like is something that can be seen through at a glance, and hope is always beautiful, although the process is difficult. Speaking of this, he stopped, looked at Xun Ruyu, and Zhang was afraid and said: "You can also not write it like this, we are discussing now, and you can also write the male protagonist as single, in fact, he has been paying attention to you and has been waiting for you...... Wouldn't that be more naïve?"

Xun Ruyu thought for a while and said, "Let's not talk about this first, I want to ask." The film is a tragedy, isn't it?"

Zhang Wei said: "It can't be considered a tragedy, but there will be some tragic circumstances." He also said: "If you want to increase the shock of the film, it is best to add some tragic plots to it, you can check it, people feel that there must be no pure comedy in a wonderful film, there must be a little bit of ideology; Nothing else matters. ”

Xun Ruyu said: "You're right, let's talk about the plot." ”

Zhang was afraid and continued: "First develop according to the main line that the male protagonist has a girlfriend, not long after you and the male protagonist won the meeting, the female flew happily." Looking for Gao Zhi and chasing a lot of money, don't have any extramarital affairs, a third party, and then scold your third party in those plots, there's no need, the center of the story is that you pursue the male protagonist, and everything else can be easily simplified. ”

Xun Ruyu nodded yes.

Zhang was afraid and said: "My girlfriend flew." You jump up and down happily.,Ecstasy.,And then pretend to be sad to comfort the male owner.,This place must be conflicting with a sense of joy.,On the one hand, it's the ecstasy when you're no.,On the other hand, it's the endless sadness when you accompany the male owner.,And then take advantage of this opportunity.,Step by step into the male owner's heart.,And successfully occupy.,So far,The first stage of love is successful.。 ”

Xun Ruyu asked: "The next thing is a tragedy, right?"

Zhang is afraid to say: "Don't worry, chase love, it's your turn to expel this piece, it's not necessary to expel the male owner, you can expel the madman who pursues you, and at the same time it also causes tension to the male owner, this paragraph must be funny, you expel other people's love, for the male protagonist, it is the stability of your relationship, you must find the male protagonist to help, with all kinds of affection, Or the plot of showing off your wealth to run away from the man who pursues you, this place also has to laugh, after showing off your wealth, you feel the loss of money, lament your stupid behavior, try to show that you have to be heartbroken like a miser The money is gone, and it will keep the film easy and simple. ”

"When will you drive away the love of the male protagonist?" Xun Ruyu asked again.

"When a qiē happiness is sublimated, you suddenly find that you are infertile, and the male protagonist's endless dream is to have a child. Speaking of this, he paused: "Actually, I originally wanted the heroine to be seriously ill, but this kind of plot is simply rampant and terrifying, and it can be a little more good to replace it with a slightly weaker infertility." ”

"The heroine found infertility...... Do you think it's better to be infertile or a serious illness that can't be cured?"

Xun Ruyu was very depressed: "Do you have such a chat? I don't want anything!"

Zhang Wei smiled: "The plot needs it, which one do you choose?"

Xun Ruyu said: "I don't think it's good, can you create some misunderstanding and conflict, and the two of them break up?"

Zhang Wei explained: "It's not that you don't make it, it's that you don't have time, the film is so long, you even resisted the male protagonist having a girlfriend, what kind of misunderstanding are you creating?"

Xun Ruyu said: "You go on." ”

Zhang Wei continued: "Two people are together to have a future, and you suddenly found that you couldn't give the male protagonist a future, and after thinking about it, you started a showdown and said to break up...... In this place, we must not be particularly vulgar and let you run away alone and feel sorry for yourself or something, boring, just say simply and directly I can't have children, I can't love you, goodbye. ”

"Of course the male protagonist disagrees, but your attitude is very resolute, to drive away from love, this is a conflict between two people, you want the male protagonist to leave, let him have a future life, but I am reluctant to give up, not so much to break up, but more like playing a petty character, here is the second part of chasing love, you chase away love. ”

"The male protagonist doesn't do it.,Change him to start pursuing you.,Trying to make you change your mind.,This place is where he's chasing love.,Chasing your love.,And then,You're full of contradictions and push away from the male owner while caring about the male owner.,And see him from time to time......"

Zhang was afraid that halfway through speaking, Wang Changchang suddenly interrupted: "Damn, such a great plot and such a long story, isn't it better to make a TV series? ”

Zhang was afraid to look at her: "Anyway, it's a script, you give money when I write it, you have money to invest, you can shoot anything." ”

Wang Chang pondered: "Write it for me, and I will give 100,000." ”

Zhang was surprised and said, "One hundred thousand?"

Wang Changchang glanced at him: "What do you want? It's not for you, it's for 100,000 yuan to film." ”

Zhang is afraid to take a sip of beer: "Go on, strictly speaking, this section is actually not a tragedy, if you want a real tragedy, I can add it, so that you can really chase love, expel love, and even use your life as a price." ”

Xun Ruyu thought about it and said: "For now, I like this story very much, please go back and write it down, the big frame is this, the end one, and some specific details, let's think about it then, okay?"

Zhang is afraid to say yes, as long as you are satisfied.

Xun Ruyu turned around and took out the purse, and took out two stacks of money in it: "Twenty thousand, it is considered an advance, you give me the book before New Year's Day, and we will discuss it together." ”

Wang Changchang shouted: "Add me a role, add me a role." ”

Zhang was afraid to look at the money and speak: "I'll give it when I write it." ”

Xun Ruyu said: "You deserve this money, so I thought of such a good story for you, even if you can't shoot it, as long as you write the script, the money is yours, and when you finish writing the script, I will make up the rest for you." ”

Zhang was afraid to think about it, took the money and said thank you.

Xun Ruyu said: "To be honest with you, I have seen at least eight writers or screenwriters, some are, some are arrogant, some are old-qualified, you are the only one who is willing to give me a script with his heart, just rush this point, I spent this money." After a pause, he added, "No matter what you write, I've spent the money." ”

Zhang was afraid to say: "If you say that, I am under pressure." ”

"Don't be pressured. Xun Ruyu suddenly looked at Wang Changchang with a smile: "She is still single and hungry and thirsty, if you don't dislike it, you can find her to relieve pressure." ”

Wang Changchang hurriedly said: "What is not disliked? Where am I not good?" As he spoke, he got up and flashed the black silk: "Do you see it?" Just my long legs, my small waist, and my breasts, what's wrong? He still dislikes me? Why?" As he spoke, he asked Zhang Wei: "Do you dislike me?"

Zhang was afraid to cough: "Actually, I don't have pressure at all, no pressure at all." ”

Yu Jiao smiled and asked, "Why don't you look at her? Isn't it good-looking? This leg is very good, big and tall and long legs, I like it when I look at it." As he spoke, he pretended to touch Wang Changchang's leg.

Zhang Wei said: "Let's actually talk about work, so what, after the work is over, I am full, so I will withdraw first." ”

"Don't go, let's change places for a while, can't we four beauties accompany you?" Yu Jiao smiled and looked at Zhang Wei: "You don't like men, do you?"

Zhang was afraid to say: "Just think I like men, goodbye." "Take the money and sit on the edge of the kang.

Wang Changchang smiled and posted it: "Great writer, you are very unfriendly to the people, it's not good." ”

Zhang was afraid and grinned: "You didn't see me kill people, otherwise you must think that I am very close to the people now." ”

Wang Changchang was stunned by what he said: "Have you ever killed someone?"

Zhang Wei continued to smile: "How fresh, in this society now, if you don't kill a hundred or eight, who is embarrassed to say that he is a man?"

Wang Changchang heard that something was wrong and asked, "Who did you kill?"

"It's people like me. Zhang was afraid to slowly put on his shoes, put away the money and stood up straight and said: "I'm good at using sniper steps, but I don't play very well, and I always have to die a few times before I can get a headshot." (To be continued.) )