Five Modern Chinese Poems: Farewell to the Dead Water and the Snow Falling on the Land of China Love the Life BrigFive Chinese Modern Poems: Farewell to the Dead Water and the Snow Falling on the Land of China Love the Life Brigs Teaching ObjectivesKnowledge and Skills: Learn to appreciate the musical beauty of poetry through the teacher's guidance and reading.

B. Through the teacher's analysis and appreciation, learn to appreciate poetry from the aspects of poetry imagery and form.

Taste the language and perceive the unique style of new poetry. Process and Method: Reading aloud and analysis training are carried out through the teacher's guidance, reading analysis and appreciation.

Emotions, Attitudes and Values: Stimulate students' patriotic interest and guide students to establish a correct outlook on life and values.

The focus of teaching is to guide students to taste the connotation of poetry and appreciate the artistic characteristics of poetry. , guide students to grasp the overall writing intention of the whole poem from a broad perspective.

Teaching difficulty: To help students interpret the work through the specific analysis of the artistic conception of the imagery. Teaching time: class time (the first poem is used as the key explanation) Teaching content and step 1, the introduction of young people generally like literary works, especially poetry.

Because young people are vibrant, idealistic, enthusiastic, and imaginative, some people say that poetry belongs to young people.

It is precisely because of this that generations of poets are endless, and many genres are colorful. Especially since

Since the birth of new poetry on the eve of May Fourth, great achievements have been made through the poets' continuous exploration, development, and creation of new poetry, a new literary style.

2. Studying "Dead Water" (New Rhythmic Poem) and Writing Background In the history of the development of modern history, there is another master who will hear a lot.

We may know the story of his case, but in addition, for the

The "Crescent Faction" is also an indispensable central figure. He is one of the explorers and founders of China's new metrical poetry, and he requires metrical poetry to have three beauties: musical beauty (the beauty of syllables and melody), painting beauty (the use of words to reflect the visual beauty of Chinese hieroglyphs), and architectural beauty (symmetry of stanzas and neatness of sentences).

He is good at using deep intellect to control fiery emotions and standardize rich content with neat poetic style.

We might as well use his poetry collection "Dead Water" as a metaphor for his creation:

"Beneath the 'backwater' lurks a volcano. There are also different theories about the time and origin of the writing of "Dead Water".

The general view is that he could not bear the discrimination he suffered as a Chinese and wrote many patriotic poems.

He returned from the United States with longing and expectation for his homeland, but he was extremely disappointed by the dark reality of the poor life of the people under the rule of the Beiyang warlords, and he cried out:

"I'm coming, I'm shouting: It's not my China, it's not right~" It is this kind of love and expectation that is cooled by reality that lays the emotional foundation of this poem.

, board book design, writing features () sustenance (metaphor) and symbolic sustenance: a ditch of stagnant water completely loses its vitality of social reality, the poet's resolute negation of reality, a clear critical spiritual symbol: the American society, the dark Chinese reality of the Beiyang government.

() The use of irony: The poet borrowed from Baudelaire, one of the founding fathers of Western modernism

The idea and technique of "ugliness is beauty" creates an atmosphere of irony to expose and criticize ugliness and sorority.

Beauty and ugliness are intertwined to form a contrast, resulting in a novel and unique expression effect. The more beautiful the ugly is written, the more disgusting it is, which makes the reader reflect on the true feelings that the poet wants to express, and enhances the charm of thought-provoking.

The language of painting is beautiful, and "Dead Water" was originally written about a ditch of smelly water, but the language used has very vivid colors.

These brilliant colors are like oil paintings

"Painting Beauty". , Extended reading "One Sentence" Wen Yiduo has a sentence that is a curse, there is a sentence that can light a fire, don't look at the five thousand years, you have not said it, you can guess through the silence of the volcano, maybe it is suddenly enchanted, and suddenly a thunderbolt exploded in the blue sky:

"Our China~" This is what I say today, you don't believe that the iron tree blooms, there is also a sentence you listen: When the volcano can't help but be silent, don't tremble, stick out your tongue, pause, wait until a thunderbolt explodes in the blue sky:

"Our China~" Third, learn "Farewell Kangqiao", writing background Xu Zhimo (,) a representative of the Crescent Poetry School in Haining, Zhejiang.

Many of his poems tend to be mysterious, hazy, sentimental, and decadent, but there are also excellent works with fresh language, appropriate metaphors, and a soft and bright style.

"Farewell to Kangqiao", which is selected from "Tiger Collection", is favored by readers for its harmonious syllables and beautiful artistic conception.

Talented, lively poetic style, he has tried a variety of poetic genres, and can flow freely and express a lot of content without leaving

The tone of "gorgeous" is the smart and elegant Xu Zhimo. As Mr. Zhu Ziqing said:

"He is a water of life that jumps and splashes day and night. "He took it

The "Jinan" plane was traveling from Nanjing to Beijing, and was suddenly caught in heavy fog in Dangjiazhuang, a distance from Jinan, and the plane caught fire in a mountain and was unfortunately killed.

"Quietly I go, just as I come quietly, I wave my sleeves and don't take away a cloud. The verses in "Farewell to Cambridge" have become his chèn.

He literally melted into one

"Cloud" was only a year old at the time. It is generally believed that this poem was written by the poet on his way back from his third trip to Europe in the autumn of that year. That is, one summer at the end of the year, Xu Zhimo quietly went to Kangqiao alone to find his British friends, but none of the British friends he was familiar with were there, only Kangqiao, which he was familiar with, was quietly waiting for him, and the scenes of his past life were re-displayed in front of his eyes", "On the day of the moon, on the way back from Marseille by boat, facing the turbulent sea and the vast sky, he recorded his personal feelings of returning to Kangqiao.

Play the soundtrack recitation, and the teacher will guide the reading. Pay attention to the rhythm and affection of the poem. Then let the students read the text freely.

, grasp the gist of the article () through reading the poem, what kind of thoughts and feelings do you think the poem expresses, boil down: parting feelings.

The whole poem uses the emotional ups and downs of parting Kangqiao as a clue to express the deep affection for Kangqiao's attachment () Tips: Since ancient times, it can be said that there are countless parting poems that everyone is more familiar with, and what poems do you remember, clear: Luo Bingwang's "Yu Yishui Gives People a Must":

"Don't Yan Dan strong men here. In the past, people were gone, and the water is still cold today. Wang Bo's "Send Du Shaofu to Shuzhou":

"Parting with the king means that it is the same as the eunuch. The sea has a confidant, and the end of the world is like a neighbor. Wang Changling's "Furong House Sends Xin Gradual":

"The cold rain and the river entered Wu Pingming at night to send off the guests of Chushan Lonely. Luoyang relatives and friends asked each other, a piece of ice heart in the jade pot. Li Bai's "Gift to Wang Lun":

Li Bai was about to take a boat, and suddenly heard the sound of singing on the shore. The water depth of Peach Blossom Lake is not as deep as Wang Lun's love. Inspiration: If we compare these poems with Xu Zhimo's poem, what is the difference between the object of farewell, it is clear: generally parting poems parting are people, and this poem parting is not people

The farewell object of "Clouds in the Western Sky" shifts from the world to the natural scenery, jumping out of the cliché of cold and noisy, giving people a fresh and elegant feeling.

These objects (clouds, etc.) embody the poet's feelings, and this kind of object with the poet's feelings is the image of the poem.

How the poet chooses imagery to express his feelings is the part that we want to focus on. The first stanza describes the scene of quietly arriving and leaving Cambridge, which sets the lyrical tone for the whole poem.

In the second stanza, the willow trees on the shore are reflected in the Cam River, and the poet's feelings of infinite joy and affection are soaked.

In the third stanza, the water and weeds of the River Cam pour out the poet's eternal love affair with Cambridge. The fourth verse writes about the clear pool under the elm tree.

The poet blends into the scenery and integrates all the nostalgia into the scenery of Kangqiao. In the fifth stanza, the poet's feelings have reached a climax, and he fantasizes that this long artemisia holding a pole will go to the greener place of Qingcao to find him

"Rainbow Dream"

"Singing to the Stars". Section 6: The poet returns from fantasy to reality. Quietly play the sheng flute of parting, and taste the melancholy of parting in silence.

The poetry is still restored and immersed in silence. Verse 7 echoes the beginning. The rhythm is the same, but the change of words and phrases is combined with more sorrow that cannot be separated.

() This article is unique in the choice of imagery, please find out what the images in this article are, and make it clear: clouds, golden willows, soft waves, green wattles, green grass, starlight and other natural scenes.

, key points and difficult breakthroughs () repeatedly recite "Farewell Kangqiao" to do key appreciation. Read aloud which verse or line of the poem you like the most and why you like it.

The main takeaway: Section 2: A

The word "gold" expresses the unique color formed by the sunset shining on the willow tree, compares the willow tree to the bride in the sunset, vividly writes the beautiful posture of the willow tree in the sunset, and also writes the poet's strong and gentle love for Kangqiao.

Section 3: Willing to be a water weed expresses the poet's infinite nostalgia for the River Cam. Section VI

"But I can't play a song" Why can't I play a song, read four, five or six verses and think. To boil down to the main point: because the Kang River is so beautiful that the night, the starlight, the water plants, the golden willows, the clear spring in the deep pool, and the dream made of the rainbow" "Quiet and harmonious.

The silence and wordlessness at this moment is formal, and an affectionate parting song is the most beautiful farewell to Kangqiao. The poet's state of mind has been integrated with Kangqiao, forming a unique artistic conception, and the author is reluctant to break this unique atmosphere, so

"Can't play songs".

What is the dream of "looking for dreams", reading and thinking exchange speeches and comments Summarize the main points: Hu Shi said that there are only three big words in Xu Zhimo's outlook on life: love, freedom, and beauty.

It is indeed Xu Zhimo's voice in one sentence is a life of loving himself, loving others, and loving society. () How to understand the poem's ingenious and unconventional conception boils down to the main points: first, the poet avoids the farewell object of the general parting poem.

It wasn't people who made him part, but that

"The clouds in the western sky" give people a sense of freshness and elegance, and secondly, the poet creates a special atmosphere for parting.

in order to

"Gently"

"Quietly"

"Silence" creates a silent and silent environment, eliminating causes

The heaviness of "wounding and parting" adds to the ethereal component. Third, a unique choice of imagery.

The poet avoided ordinary objects such as high-rise buildings and traffic around the people who saw them off, and chose natural scenes such as clouds, which avoided the fireworks in the world and created a sense of freshness.

Where is the musical, painting and architectural beauty of "Farewell Kangqiao", and the rhyme rhyme is: come, Cai Niang Yang Shaking, Grass Rainbow, Dream Trace, Song Xiao, Bridge Come, Cai.

The first and last stanzas are similar in meaning, and the rhythm is the same, constituting the structural form of loop echo. The beauty of painting refers to the choice of colorful words in the language of poetry.

The beauty of architecture is the symmetry of the stanzas and the neatness of the sentences. There are seven stanzas, two sentences per stanza, and the single and double lines are staggered and arranged in a grid, and they are also neat and uniform in terms of the number of words, giving people a sense of beauty.

Summarize the artistic characteristics: ,, the idea is ingenious and unconventional. ,、The artistic conception is vivid and full of flowing picture beauty.

The pursuit of personal freedom and nature shows the spirit of the times since May Fourth. , Writing features () The beauty of the picture Seven stanzas of the poem almost every stanza contains a picture that can be drawn, giving people the enjoyment of visual beauty.

One of the expressions of the picture is that the poet uses colorful words to create a series of vivid and vivid artistic conceptions, such as the clouds gently beckoning to the west sky, the reflection of the golden willows on the banks of the river in the Kham River, the swaggering aquatic plants under the water of the Kham River, and the green pools full of floating algae under the shade of the elms.

The second expression of the beauty of the picture is that the poet uses words with strong action, such as

"Beckoning"

"Rippling"

"Swagger"

"Crushed"

"Wandering"

"Wave" and so on make each picture a dynamic picture, giving people a three-dimensional feeling. The poem is like a Chopin's serenade.

The arrangement of each verse of four lines and one stanza is staggered, and the number of words in each sentence is basically, and the words (with eight-character sentences in between) are neat in the uneven changes, and each verse rhymes and changes the rhyme section by verse, pursuing the fluctuation of syllables and the sense of melody.

furthermore

"Gently"

The repetition of overlapping words such as "quietly" enhances the light rhythm of the poem. The first melody of the poem has a subtle bouncing, as if the poet is walking on tiptoe, and the first stanza of the poem is musically like a joyful melody played with a full bow played by a violin, and the last stanza of the poem echoes the sentence pattern of the first stanza similarly, giving people a dreamlike feeling.

Extracurricular exercises: Talk about your understanding of Xu Zhimo's poems and write a small article of three or four hundred words.

Fourth, learn "Snow Falls on the Land of China", play the music "Ballad of the Great Wall", the Great Wall of China, and the outside of the Great Wall is the hometown.

Sorghum fat, soybeans are fragrant, and gold suffers less. Since the great calamity, adultery, plunder, and suffering, when the suffering, when the suffering, he should run to other sides, and his flesh and blood have been separated, and his parents have been mourned.

Toothless and unforgettable, hatred and hatred day and night, I just want to go back to my hometown. Everyone fought back desperately, even if the Japanese slaves were strong. The Great Wall is thousands of miles long, and outside the Great Wall is the hometown, and the hearts of 40,000,000 compatriots are as new as the Great Wall.

This "Ballad of the Great Wall" is written

After the "918" incident, the people in Northeast China were homeless and determined to fight together to recover the lost territory.

So the song "Snow Falling on the Land of China" by Ai Qing that we are going to learn today is based on Japan's war of aggression against China.

When was this poem written, (student) year, month, day, night. At this time, the Lugou Bridge Incident had broken out, and the full-scale War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression had begun.

, the author and the origin of creationAbout Ai Qing, we are no strangers to Ai Qing, and we learned his "Notice of Dawn" in junior high school.

Ai Qing (), formerly known as Jiang Haicheng, is a modern poet from Jinhua in Zhejiang. He is the author of "My Nanny in the Dayan River", "I Love This Land" and so on.

Ai Qing's poetry is majestic, melancholy and sentimental. The poet came to Yan'an, and since then, the style of poetry has turned tragic and high.

Ai Qing is a poet who has had an important influence on Chinese new poetry, and is praised by the Chilean poet Neruda

"Chinese Poetry Champion". , reciting and feeling the soundtrack (Xun). Prompt the speed, intonation, pause, and stress to pay attention to when reciting.

Point out the key words: deaf, descendant, unkempt, violent, crouching, gnawing, famine supplement the knowledge of the flow of speech, analyze what the whole poem () what is written in the whole poem expresses what kind of mood the poet has, and expresses the suffering of the Chinese people caused by the brutal war of aggression and the heavy mood of the poet who worries about the country and the people.

() So how do you write about the suffering of the Chinese people caused by the war of aggression, and choose several types of people to describe the farmers (homeless) in the northern forests

"Where are you going?" the subtext was

"Where can you go,") There are unkempt young women in southern awning boats (who have lost their families and husbands) and countless of our elderly mothers, and there are settlers who have lost their livestock and land.

The relationship between them is not juxtaposed, the first two types of images are categorical images, and the last type of images are general images with a general meaning.

Their desolate and miserable condition is manifested

"China's pain and disasters are as vast and long as this snowy night~" () In the poem, the poet also mentioned that he found out a passage of the poet's self-expression.

What is the use of writing like this,

"Tell you, I am also a descendant of peasants," "My life is as haggard as your life," linking himself with the suffering and fate of the vast number of peasants, and writing about this suffering more profoundly and truly.

() end

"Can the weak poems written by me in the night without lights give you a little warmth," shows what kind of feelings the author has, pure feelings.

I dedicated a pure heart to the suffering motherland. () in the text

"The snow is falling on the land of China, and the cold is blocking China", "These two sentences appear four times in the poem, please talk about the role of these two lines in the whole poem from the perspective of emotion and text structure.

Explicit: Note the musical structure of the poem: the opening sentence

"The snow is falling on the land of China, and the cold is blocking China", "The narrative tone of the flat and low pouring out forms the whole poem."

The "main theme" is then carefully arranged in three sections by the poet and the land

"People" The farmer who drove the car in the forest in the north and the peasant woman in the canopy boat in the south were lost

"Their fertile fields".

The dialogue between the "settlers of the land" continues to deepen in the outpouring of grievances and forgiveness, which is unforgettable

"Coldness" and abstract generalization:

"China's road is so rugged and muddy."

"China's pain and calamity are as vast and long as this snowy night" highlights the symbolic meaning of the poem.

Between these three movements, the main melody phrase is constantly repeated, gradually pushing the poet's sad and melancholy emotions to a climax.

And the last sentence gives people a feeling

"A little warmth" is like an aftersound, intriguing reverie. It appears four times, it is the clue of the poem's feelings, the sad and depressing feeling runs through the whole poem, and at the same time, this repeated aria deepens the sad and solemn atmosphere, which makes people cry when reading.

In addition, these two sentences are also the skeleton of the whole poem's structure, and the portrayal of various images is carried out along these two sentences.

Snowy forests, snowy rivers, snowy grasslands. Learning "Love Life", the author introduced the index finger, whose real name is Guo Lusheng, who was born in the year

Persecuted during the Cultural Revolution for rescuing teachers who had been beaten up. When he went to Shanxi, he joined the factory as a worker, joined the army in the year, was demobilized, and worked at the Beijing Institute of Optoelectronic Technology (due to schizophrenia caused by strong stimulation in the army, he was admitted to a psychiatric hospital and discharged.

He's in

During the "Cultural Revolution", he began to write the poem "Believe in the Future", which was criticized by Jiang Qing by name. His poems have been copied by friends and intellectuals, widely circulated throughout the country, and have far-reaching influence.

Even in a psychiatric hospital, he did not stop creating. He is a natural, even fatalistic poet, pure lyricism reflects the common style of Jiangou, and is closely connected with the spiritual pulse of the young generation at that time, the poetry language rhythm is sonorous and easy to recite.

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There are also many mediocre and timely works in the works of the "Cultural Revolution", but they cannot hide the rebellious element in their nature, and his inspiration is revealed in those widely circulated poems.

After the "Cultural Revolution", the poems were more profound, looking for strength in silence. Representative works: "Love Life", "Believe in the Future", "This is Beijing at 4.08", etc.

、Basic interpretation of the content of the gist of the content:

"Love life" is the content of the repeated chant. It is divided into two parts: (stanza) expresses a kind of attachment to life and love (stanza) further expresses the specific expression of love for life and shapes the lyrical protagonist

The image of "me". The idea of this poem: first use

"Kudzu"

"Weights"

"Wild Grass and Paths" are imagery to show their determination not to be afraid of difficulties, and then launch the protagonist

The image of "me":

"Wandering",

"Beggar-like" with

"Barefoot",

"Bare Back" highlights the wandering of the mind. Although the environment is so harsh and difficult, the belief in my heart remains the same: believe in the future and love life.

Artistic characteristics: The most prominent features are the monologue style of profound thoughts in simple and unpretentious words, a large number of metaphors,

The asana of "four lines and one section". , comprehension, inquiry, appreciation, this poem selects those objective images with pain and sorrow, such as

"Climbing Kudzu"

"Bitter Rain"

"Wild Grass Trail"

"The hardness of the edges and corners of the stone"

"The Thorn That Stands in the Way"

"Winter Blizzard"

"Summer Poison Day", etc. These images are the true power of the poet, pervading all things, and these images are full of inner quality and tension through the form of the poet's deep and sad thoughts, rich thoughts and feelings, and a unique poetic space.

The poem, written shortly after the end of the decade of upheaval, is a companion to Believe in the Future. They have influenced an entire generation, and it was "Believe in the Future" and "Love Life" that encouraged many educated youths to live tenaciously when their lives were extremely difficult and their ideals were close to shattering.

With extraordinary perseverance and strength, perseverance and enthusiasm, the poet tells us in an almost tragic tone, no matter how difficult life is, no matter how bumpy the fate, we must become more and more frustrated, persevere, endure humiliation, bear heavy burdens, challenge fate to realize the value of life.

All this reveals the noble and solemn proposition of the poet:

"Believe in the future and love life" ~ The poet once wrote in another poem "Book Jane":

"We should always keep in mind a truth, whether in happy or bitter days, our hearts must always look forward so that we will not lose the courage to live""""A very striking feature of this poem in the extraction of imagery is to choose more objective objects with pain and sorrow

"Climbing Kudzu"

"Bitter Rain"

"Wild Grass Trail"

"The hardness of the edges and corners of the stone"

"The Thorn That Stands in the Way"

"Winter Blizzard"

"Summer Poison Day" and so on, these images seem to come easily, but in fact, the poet's true power is full of nostalgia, these images borrow things to carry feelings, allegorical in form, with great inner quality and tension, and fully construct the deep and sad whole poem, deep and rich thoughts and feelings, and a unique poetic space.

This poem is a consistent artistic style of index finger poems, tragic but not sad, dignified but not heavy, emotional but not sentimental, confused but not confused, is a cry in pain, a call for blood, a tearful smile, and a song of tenacious and progressive life~ Learn "Brig" 1. Import "Brig" is a hazy poem.

What

"Hazy Poetry",

"Hazy poetry", also known as the New Poetry Movement, is a product of the New Poetry Movement, because it uses overall symbolism in the art form, and is opaque and ambiguous

"Hazy Poetry". To study this kind of poem, we should focus on experiencing the imagery in the poem, because it is the fusion of the poet's subjective reason and objective image.

Like Lu Xun's most famous verses

"Sending cold stars to Quan does not notice me, I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood" and

"Heng Mei coldly pointed to the thousands of people, bowed his head and was willing to be a son of a cow", which created a rich connotation of imagery and gave birth to unforgettable affection.

The "Brig" we learn today is a representative work of the contemporary female poet Shu Ting's hazy poetry. The emotions and mentality expressed in the poem are not only the poet's self and personality, but also the indescribable things that are commonly felt by young people, which are worthy of our careful appreciation.

2. About the author: Shu Ting, a contemporary female poet, was born in Quanzhou, Fujian, in Shima Town, Fujian, and grew up in Xiamen.

I didn't graduate from junior high school

"Cut the queue and settle down". When he began to write, his poems were already circulating among the educated youth. After returning to the city, he worked as a temporary worker: a cement worker, a car stopper, a sizing worker, and a solder worker.

He began to publish poems in the folk journal "Today", and officially published his works in "Poetry Magazine" in the same year. The editorial department of Fujian Literature and Art has been discussing her works for nearly a year, and the discussion involves a series of fundamental issues related to new poetry.

He is currently a director of the China Writers Association and vice chairman of the Fujian Branch of the Fujian Writers Association, and has won the National Poetry Award twice.

He published poetry collections "Brig" and "Selected Lyrical Poems of Shu Ting and Gu Cheng", and published "Singing Iris" and so on.

"The Brig" is a poem with the same title as the poetry collection, which shows its importance. 3. Perceive the whole poem as a whole: first read the whole poem and talk about their understanding.

(The teacher will not comment) said the ancients

"Poetry without attainment" is to allow each of us to have our own understanding of poetry. Because the poetry is too transparent, the poetry is too exposed, and the language is too clear, the aesthetic space of the poem will be reduced to a projectile land, and the reader will also turn around in the unobstructed boredom of the poem.

So how to make our understanding of poetry as close to the work as possible, we must first get close to the author and understand the author's writing background.

Let's read Shu Ting's

The love story of "Grandma Wolf". Shu Ting often puts images together in pairs, which may be said to be a characteristic of her poetic thinking.

What is a brig, what does a brig mean, and what are the images that appear in pairs in this poem, let's read this poem again with these questions.

Dial: Someone said

It is possible that the "brig" refers to the poet himself. She used the brig to pour out her longing to the endless stretch of shore.

Sometimes the ship meets the shore and sometimes separates from the shore, and there is a coast to have a ship's voyage.

"Brig" means the poet's psychology that love and career stand side by side but are different. The pairs of triumphant imagery that appear in the poem include the left wing, the right wing, the storm, the lamp you, my voyage, the sight fog, the wind yesterday, the shore today, the farewell of the ship, the encounter, and so on.

Rather than expressing inner conflict or complex feelings, the twoarms are eager to communicate, look forward to friendship, and pray for communication and understanding.

Read the

"The Love Story of Grandma Wolf" Do you agree with the above opinions, how do you understand the poem

"Shore",

"Wind",

"Storm",

"Lamp" and other imagery, (refer to the answer:

"Kishi" symbolizes the destination of women's love

"Wind" means a sense of urgency of the times

"Storm" alludes to the extraordinary times that the poet and his contemporaries experienced

The "lamp" is associated with light and faith

"Fog" symbolizes the weight of life"") pointing: allows students to have multiple understandings, because the rich connotations of the imagery itself show multiple understandings.

Students' answers do not have to be consistent, they can justify themselves, and we aim to train imagination and association.

4. Teacher's summary: The language of this poem is natural and smooth, and the emotions contained in the poem are dignified and delicate, with both strong personal exclamation and vague social feelings.

The last four lines of the poem:

"Not afraid of the ends of the earth, how can you be in the morning and evening, you are on my voyage, I am in your sight" has been widely circulated and quoted.

In the past year, Shu Ting has been invited to the former West Germany, France, the United States, Italy, the Netherlands, the United Kingdom, India and other countries to participate in a variety of poetry meetings and cultural activities, and France, the former West Germany, the former East Germany published a variety of poetry translations.

Her poems have been translated into English, German, French, Romanian, Yugoslavia, Sweden, the Netherlands, Italy, Australia, Japan, India, North Korea and many other countries.

Her "Motherland, My Dear Motherland" won the National Outstanding Works Award for Young and Middle-aged Poets, and the poetry collection "Brig" published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House won the first National New Poetry Outstanding Poetry Collection Award.

The year and year were initiated by the "Lhasa Evening News" and the "Star" Poetry Magazine respectively

Shu Ting was selected twice in the "Top Ten Most Popular Young Poets in the Country" voting election. I hope you will enjoy her work today, so let's read the text aloud and freely based on our understanding.

Postscript: I am more satisfied with this lesson, when appreciating the poetic imagery, the key is to let the students say more, and the teacher only clicks.

In this lesson, students are not very interested in the content and it is easy to understand, so it is advisable to supplement extracurricular content and increase the capacity to stimulate students' interest.

Attached: Shu Ting:

The love story of "Grandma Wolf", she is one of the representatives of China's hazy poetry trend in the century. Years later, she claimed to be a poet

"Grandma" level character. In a recent conversation with the Shanghainese writer Chen Cun, she said that whenever she attended a literary party, she sat with a smile and played among the young people

"Grandma Wolf",

"I'm marrying you like elopement," is a traditional Chinese couple, as one of the two spouses is famous, and the spouse who introduces him or her is often called him/her

"Mr. So-and-So's Wife" or

"Mr. So-and-so". When it comes to the poet Shu Ting and her husband, I simply sing a contrarian tune, and if I want to say Shu Ting, Chen Zhongyi's wife or more directly, Chen Zhongyi's wife is Shu Ting.

This is not a false reason: Shu Ting has swan songs such as "To the Oak Tree" and "Brig", and the literary theorist Chen Zhongyi also has "On Chinese Hazy Poets", which can be called a unique book in contemporary research on hazy poetry, and the head of the household is written in the household registration book

"Chen Zhongyi" Shu Ting can only be attached to

"Tail". As Gibran said:

"Husband and wife are like strings on the same piano, they vibrate harmoniously in the same melody, but they are independent of each other. "Chen Zhongyi is tall and big, looks general, dresses casually, and is so simple that it can no longer be simple, wooden, almost roundabout, and belongs to the inner show type.

He taught at a university and was a well-known poetry critic in the province. Originally, he attended some provincial and national poetry seminars, and since he married Shu Ting, he has been squeezed out by Shu Ting.

They live together on a street in Gulangyu, and they can look at the street by pushing the window. In the same literary circle. When he first broke into the rivers and lakes, friends in the Ludao literary circle gathered, and everyone spoke loudly, but Chen Zhongyi was silent and silent.

Shu Ting secretly observed, if it was the opponent, it would be him. Whenever they cross the sea and enter the city, they attend meetings as writers and critics

"I will enjoy the same river water with the stern of the ship." Although they like each other, no one wants to express their hearts first. After seven or eight years, the old man couldn't look at it, and finally tied the pair of men and women together with red silk threads.

One day of the year, Shu Ting returned from a trip to the Three Gorges, and before she could shake off the dust along the way, Chen Zhongyi was already standing in front of her like a stump

"The four eyes are facing each other," there is a sharp heart, why do you need to point it, Shu Ting said

"Okay" is not hazy at all, this pair of golden boys and girls who are years old and old (Shu Ting said that they are old) walked hand in hand on the brig of love.

On the day of the wedding, Chen Zhongyi got up against the cold wind and walked for a few minutes to pick up the bride. Shu Ting's meeting gift is to twist a hot towel to iron the handful of hot towels on the back of the groom's head all year round

"Standing upright" towering. The old man brought a bowl of four purse soup eggs and handed them to his hairy foot son-in-law Chen Zhongyi, swallowed two according to the rules, and left the remnants for the bride.

Shu Ting swept away the empty bowl with egg soup and made her father silent:

"Today, I am still the daughter of your Gong family, and I can't waste it. "Mr. Gong prepared a small cart for the joy of marrying a daughter (there are no motor vehicles in Ludao) to transport dowry, clothes, manuscripts, longan, dates, needles, threads, and brains.

The procession was completed in a minute's march through the side streets as far as the eye could see, and the men and women entered the cave room. After a long time after marriage, the two of them went shopping and were bumped into by Shu Ting's two little sisters back then, and quietly dragged her aside for interrogation: You knock on your friends, and Shu Ting is happy to bend over like a prawn.

A few years later, Shu Ting recalled that the major events in her life were so hastily and hastily always a little regretful, so she counted Chen Zhongyi:

"I'm marrying you like elopement~" Chen Zhongyi wittily countered:

"Then how about you elope in the future, I'll brag about it," B, from Cinderella to Aunt Gray, it is rumored that Chen Zhongyi fell under Shu Ting's pomegranate skirt and formally proposed, when Shu Ting did not forget to pinch him, the three chapters of the covenant: one does not do housework, the other is a small couple, and the third is free to make friends.

Chen Zhongyi didn't say half of it

The word "no". Probably don't dare. But overnight, Gong Shuting became Chen Gong's queen

The "three chapters" are not chapters, and they are purely on paper.

"Don't do housework", Shu Ting originally dreamed of being an idle cloud and a wild crane, and she was dedicated to writing poems, but she was expected to do this after marriage

"Writer" became

"Sitting at home" has been upgraded again

"Home". The week is divided between elderly in-laws, sick fathers, husbands who are not good at housework, and naughty sons.

Only about one-seventh of them belong to themselves. Hit my son when he got up after school

"Little Emperor" Zhang Luo sorted out his schoolbag for breakfast, took advantage of the washing machine to sweep the floor and wipe the table, and thought about what to buy in the vegetable market in the morning, what soup to cook at noon, and what dishes to cook at night.

Friends and readers usually have to visit

"Look at the clock and talk" (I'm afraid of making a mistake in cooking). Originally, I could communicate with Wenyou, but now I have to change to telephone contact.

To her embarrassment, there were often phone calls that came at an inopportune time (she was stir-frying), she had to put down the pot and spoon, turn off the gas, pick up the microphone, and said without asking Zhang San and Li Si:

"I'm sorry, but I'm going to say there's smoke in the pot. "It's as busy as a spinning top. Signing of the year

"Don't do" has long been reformed to

"All inclusive". The so-called

"The little couple lived alone" is even more joking about how she can bear to let her elderly in-laws not enjoy the joy of family with strong traditional virtues

"Freedom to make friends" is even more fantastic, and even a cough is under the noses of a family, let alone another one

"Trailing dog" hour tracking (son is a dog) free to settle in, the only new furniture when she got married, a large desk because of her

"Unaccustomed to it" was transferred to her husband, and she had to lie down on a desk with a broken lock, a drawer that could not be closed, and her feet were shaking

"Wait for the poem". Today and tomorrow, she unknowingly put it

The word "poet" is lost in firewood, rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea. Occasionally, I remembered that I wanted to draw a match and find it, Shu Ting said humorously, oh my God, then I knew that the price of a box of matches had risen to a dime.

In the face of Chen Zhongyi's nuisance, she could only admit it. Their desks were close to each other, and her husband, who was not very tidy, piled up lectures, manuscripts, and other things in a mess from time to time, and occupied her desk by attacking the city and plundering the city.

Seeing this, Shu Ting unceremoniously deported him. Shu Ting loves to collect stamps with beautiful patterns, hiding them in a small box, and Mr. wants to send letters, just for convenience, and sometimes even steals and robs.

Annoyed, Shu Ting fired at her husband:

"It seems that you have eaten me for the rest of your life. There is more resentment in the words, but there is more pride.

"We never had a fight because we knew each other well and we both loved literature. We took literature as a belief, so he was very supportive of my writing. Shu Ting said to the author.

The moon sets and the sun rises, and Shu Ting has changed from Cinderella to Gray Sister-in-law, and from Gray Sister-in-law to Gray Aunt. Shu Ting said:

"I try my best to be a good daughter, a good wife, a good daughter-in-law, and a good mother, so I have to treat myself badly. ”C、

"Marriage is a lottery", Shu Ting won the lottery, like many Chinese and foreign literati have a habit when writing articles, Shu Ting loves to collect various different types of manuscript paper and use it.

I like to use long essays and group poems with sparse squares, and I like to use long strips of white paper to make drafts with fine line spacing, and I like to use long strips of white paper, and the long strip is like the form handed by the wronged person in the ancient opera, shaking his hands, singing and chanting lightly while spreading his hands, and there is an inexplicable pleasure.

Her poems are written in one go, and the dragon flies and the phoenix dances, and she laughs at herself: The small one is like a bean, and the big one is like a melon, and the horse is not chic.

Chen Zhongyi is known for his simplicity and honesty, and his thoughtfulness and diligence towards Shu Ting are beyond the ability of ordinary husbands. He was the first reader of Shu Ting's poems, and often criticized her poems with the eyes of a critic.

Don't forget to criticize when you replace praise with criticism. In the monograph "On Chinese Misty Poets", a section is devoted to commenting on Shu Ting's poems.

The reason why they held each other for seven or eight years was that the fish did not move and the shrimp did not jump, Chen Zhongyi was afraid that she would not be able to climb Shu Ting, Shu Ting was because her poems and people were in the whirlpool and limelight of the times at that time, and she was afraid of affecting Chen Zhongyi.

There is a poem as proof:

"I stand straight," the ideal makes the pain shine, this is the last word I entrust the olive tree to leave to you. "In a word: they are all afraid of hurting their beloved.

After marriage, they shared weal and woe. Shu Ting reacted strongly during pregnancy and vomited incessantly. It is said that seeing the thrill can improve his condition, and Chen Zhongyi runs to the library every day for many days.

Shu Ting suffered from severe lumbar spine disease due to overwork when she was young and cut the team, the rattan chair was broken, and it was uncomfortable to sit, Chen Zhongyi first reinforced Shu Ting with wire, and Shu Ting's feeling was still not good, and she wanted to buy a new one.

Chen Zhongyi searched all the shops on the island but couldn't buy them. At this time, a Japanese friend visited, and inadvertently learned about the incident, saying that he wanted to give Shu Ting a pair of leather chairs, and Shu Ting immediately declined.

In the evening, Chen Zhongyi went home and heard about the ambition of the Changguo people, and the next day he crossed the sea to Xiamen for a day, and finally came back with two high-backed leather chairs, and did not forget to report the good news to his wife:

"Each bargain price is two yuan and five~" Shu Ting is delicate and wears deep myopia glasses. She prides herself on family affairs

"In Christ" sometimes

"Lord" is hard to flatter: she often has to press the wrong number of numbers. You can't make a phone call without making two or three recalls.

She is also vague about numbers, and ten thousand and ten million mean something to her. Sometimes Chen Zhongyi made fun of her lack of faith, and Shu Ting retorted:

"In the past, literature was my faith, but now you and your son have become my religion, what else do I believe," Shu Ting has written poems for a year, but there are only more than one poem in total, which shows that her creative rigor is not to win by quantity, and the heavy yoke of housework makes her unable to concentrate on writing is also a reason.

Chen Zhongyi

"Outside the Lord", the things outside the Lord are very hard, and Chen Zhongyi has to cross the sea to go to school to attend classes and do his studies, all at night.

As for the publishing house, newspapers and periodicals, pen meetings, book publications, etc., Chen Zhongyi covered all of them. People joked that he was the life secretary of his wife.

The Collected Works of Shu Ting published by the publishing house were all selected, copied, cut and pasted, reviewed and proofread by Chen Zhongyi.

Shu Tingle should be the shopkeeper. Shu Ting said:

"Chen Zhongyi is a husband with a strong sense of responsibility. A sage said:

"Marriage is a lottery ticket, a man's bet is freedom, and a woman's bet is happiness. "Shu Ting has won the lottery.

Their lives are still colorful. In his spare time, he plays football, jumps rubber bands, and plays with his son

"Eagle catches chicken" on Sundays, a family of three or shopping, or outing, visiting friends or watching movies, go to the restaurant every three or five days to enjoy the delicious taste of the current food, full of food, and enjoy the joy of family.

Shu Ting is sickly: waist disease, stomach disease, neurasthenia, Chen Zhongyi's thoughtfulness towards her Shu Ting is reluctant to say more, she has already turned the feeling of love into poetry: I must be a kapok near you as the image of a tree, standing with you" "We share the cold wave, the wind and snow, the thunderbolt, we share the fog, the drift, the rainbow, as if they are separated forever, but they are dependent on each other for life.

"When the snobs slandered, attacked, and even slandered Shu Ting's "Singing Iris" as an erotic poem

"Young grandma has nothing to do after eating, and she writes poems", Chen Zhongyi tried every means to relieve her worries and give her comfort and strength.

Chen Zhongyi does not touch alcohol, cigarettes, or tea, except for books, Shu Ting only needs to pay three yuan to the small hair salon every month to wash Chen Zhongyi.

It is rare for a poet to sing poems through the ages, and finally a husband Shu Ting like Chen Zhongyi who can get it and affordable can only be met but not sought.

Home is a welcoming haven. The boat of love is anchored in this harbor, and Shu Ting can face the stars and moon, the headrest, and the waves into dreams and poems.

Shu Ting said

"The husband is a rat, the son is a dog, the zodiac sign is not a cat. I live with a big rat and a small dog, and I can barely live in Longdeshu. ”

"Enough" is true

"Reluctantly" is just a poet hiding his wealth and not revealing his humility. Postscript: Through reading and analysis, students deeply understand what is patriotic and what is true love for life, which is enough.