In the dark theater, only the fluorescent light of the screen shines, reflecting the faces of the seats under the stage.

Not everyone in the audience who attended the premiere came because they liked the movie, so when the screening was first held, the theater was still noisy. However, as the plot progressed, it soon fell silent. Then it turns into rhythmic laughter.

Although the story of "33 Days of Broken Love" is about broken love, it is indeed a comedy. However, unlike ordinary comedies, its laughter is more reflected in the lines, so there are few plots that can make people laugh, and more of the kind of laughter with a bit of literary spirit.

Although Mu Ming was also watching the screen, her energy was not focused on the movie. Not to mention how many times he watched this movie in his previous life, he has also watched the sample four or five times since the post-production was completed. In addition, he also participated in the whole filming process, so I really can't arouse any interest now.

Therefore, after listening to the audience's reactions and having some bottom in her heart, Mu Ming put the focus of her attention on the lens expression of the film itself, the editing context, and the transition form of the film itself.

There is no doubt that "33 Days of Broken Love" is a movie made with the filming techniques of a TV series, and all the shots are in the service of advancing the plot. For example, in the opening three couples of men and women who broke up, there is a shot similar to the exit of the full screen when watching a video, and for example, when Wang Xiaobei was first introduced, the photos that fell were all just for the sake of the plot.

Then, the transitions of different plots in the whole movie are also more stiff, and there is a feeling that this episode is over and the next episode is about to begin. Like the different plots of the gold worshipper girl and the rich second generation, the arrangement of dates, and the golden wedding of old couples, the connection is scattered and incoherent.

These are problems in the framework of the film's layout, and in terms of plot, there are also some flaws. The main line of the story is that Huang Xiaoxian spent 33 days to get out of lovelorn and start the next relationship. But Huang Xiaoxian, as the heroine, has too many branch plots, which makes the interaction and emotional progress between the male and female protagonists too fast.

In the end, the confession of Wang Xiaobei and Huang Xiaoxian, from the perspective of a movie, is naturally a happy ending. But as far as the plot itself is concerned, especially the relationship between the two, it is a bit reluctant.

It's always easy to see someone else's shortcomings, and it's always difficult to see someone else's bits. So since we were in elementary school, our teachers taught us to look at each other's strengths. The grades should be compared with the good, and the conditions should be compared with the bad.

But if you want to learn and learn from others, you really have to pick on the shortcomings.

While finding fault with the movie, Mu Ming thought in her heart how this shot would be handled and how this plot would be designed if she shot it herself. Although my current ability may not be able to play better, but this little by little practice, there will always be improvement.

"Hahaha......"

A burst of laughter interrupted Mu Ming's train of thought, and the plot of the movie progressed to the point where Wang Xiaobei took Huang Xiaoxian to make a big fuss at the wedding venue and "framed" her ex-boyfriend. I have to say that listening to Wang Xiaobei's long list of words that don't contain dirty words, but can make people can't help but boil with anger, I really feel it.

This plot is one of the several climaxes of the whole play, and it is also the biggest laugh from the audience so far. There was another climax of laughter before when Huang Xiaoxian and Wang Xiaobei were counted down by the eldest king. Wang Xiaobei's last little cheap flying action was filmed at the time, and it was played by Wen Zhang on the spot, which really showed the "cheapness" of the little man on Wang Xiaobei's body to the fullest.

Looking at the big boss on the screen who was choked by Wen Zhang, Mu Ming couldn't help but pull the corners of her mouth for a while. has always watched the mouth cannon of the big boss, and rarely saw the mouth cannon of others, and Guo Jingfei was also suffocated.

If it's possible, I really want to put Guo Jingfei, Lei Jiayin, Guo Degang, and Hua Shao together to make a scene, it's hard to say whether it's good or not, but it should be very exciting.

After this plot ends, the movie enters the second half. Wang Xiaobei tried his best to get Huang Xiaoxian to agree to share a house with him, and then Huang Xiaoxian finally heard Wang Xiaobei's confession after educating the rich second generation and listening to the old couple's explanation.

"I promise you, Huang Xiaoxian. No matter what happens to you in the future, there must be me around you. Huang Xiaoxian turned around with her mobile phone and saw Wang Xiaobei with a serious face coming slowly.

This is a different ending from the original book after discussion between Bao Jingjing as a screenwriter and Teng Huatao as a director.

The Good End！

But in the case of Mu Ming, he was not very satisfied with this ending.

Everyone likes the happy ending, and Mu Ming is no exception. "At the end of the story, the frog prince and Cinderella live happily ever after...... "It's cheesy, but it's also healing."

The world is already so difficult, why do you keep making yourself uncomfortable?

However, Mu Ming hates the kind of ending that forces a happy reunion regardless of the progress of the story. It's like "Heartless Mage" written by himself, Mu Ming likes crescent moon, Zhang Xianzong, and Lao Yue, but he still let them die.

Or else?

The crescent moon persuaded Lao Yue to give up her unintentional possessiveness, and Lao Yue persuaded Zhang Xianzong to return the territory to Gu Xuanwu, and the two of them found a place where no one was around, and lived a happy life where you farmed and you weaved, and you carried water to water the garden.

What's the matter, do you want a few more people to hold hands and dance for you at the end?

Huang Xiaoxian and Wang Xiaobei are too similar, to be precise, Wang Xiaobei is an upgraded and strengthened version of Huang Xiaoxian 2.0. Can two people like that be together? Absolutely. However, it will never be so simple to be together.

Therefore, this ending may not be what Teng Huatao wants. It's just that, considering the needs of the audience, the two of them were still forced together.

"Eh, the movie is over, why do you keep your head down?" When the movie ended, the lights turned on, Wan Qian shook her somewhat stiff neck, and just saw Mu Ming who was motionless with her head down, so she patted him lightly.

"I'm thinking. Mu Ming said quietly.

"Thinking about what?"

"Think about love. ”

"Ha!" the young lady laughed disdainfully, and continued to ask, "So, what have you thought of?"

"Tsk......" Mu Ming pursed her lips, shook her head, stood up and said, "It's a pity that I haven't been in love, and I haven't thought about anything." ”

“……”

Are all the little boys who owe it like this?

At the end of the film screening, there was another wave of interviews asking for audience evaluations. I don't want to think about it, most of the audience present are fans of a certain starring role, no matter whether the movie is good or not, they can boast without changing their faces.

By this time, most of the stars who came to cheer had already left, and the audience began to slowly withdraw. Mu Ming said goodbye to Miss Wan Qian, and was about to say hello to Teng Huatao and Chen Rong to leave, but was called by Chen Rong first.

"What, Brother Chen, is there anything else?" Mu Ming said curiously. At this time, if this uncle doesn't hurry back to prepare for the final propaganda and prepare for tomorrow's midnight show, can there be anything else?

"Introduce a few of you to each other. Chen Rong smiled and said, "Don't say I don't take care of you, but it's all in the circle." ”

Mu Ming raised her eyebrows, how could she inexplicably feel like she was about to come out.