Disadvantages of atmosphere shaping

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In the 20th chapter of the book, there was always one place that was criticized by readers, and I changed it again and again, but it never worked. Pen Fun Pavilion www.biquge.info just another reader said this question, and after saying that, it was lost, and I was so miserable that I couldn't help but study those chapters again.

In fact, a plot of ups and downs in those chapters roughly says that the protagonist's mother died, and the protagonist wanted to avenge her, and after killing the enemy, he saved his mother. I wrote this plot in the traditional way of a novel, that is, to create an atmosphere first, first to create a sense of tension in battle, the mother fights the enemy in order to protect her child, and finally dies in battle, and then the atmosphere is full of the sadness of death, the expression of the protagonist's feelings. Writing like this is laborious for the author, but disgusting and uncomfortable for the reader. The more successful, realistic, and immersive the atmosphere is, the more unpleasant, disgusting, and easy it is for readers to watch it. After all, online novels are different from traditional novels, readers don't have so much patience, they are impetuous, impulsive, vulnerable, and can't withstand a little blow, so this kind of plot can be avoided, and if it can't be avoided, it must be written quickly, don't create an atmosphere, let the reader's disgust be reduced to the lowest point, and make it easy for them to accept such a sad thing.

Writing online novels, in fact, many times are written for readers, and if readers don't like something, then they must not touch it. A lot of times we're not actually writing novels, we're pleasing the reader, he's a parent, and if he doesn't please him, it's hard for him to pay. In this fast-paced era, people are under a lot of pressure, and reading online novels is a way to be relaxed and happy, and if they feel depressed in the novel, it is equivalent to driving them away. This is also why Guo Degang can open a cross talk special session that is full, and no one specially charters a venue for others to buy tickets to come in and listen to sad and bleak stories. The former sounds relaxed and happy, and there is a market demand, while the latter feels heavy when he hears it, isn't it looking for guilt when he goes in.

To play sadness, you must be in the realm of a master to be able to afford it.