Chapter 447: Don't complain about it

Tianman began to develop in a blowout in all aspects, and after getting busy, He Chen hadn't paid attention to the comics of the island country for a long time.

The gods who He Chen kidnapped from the island country are persevering, always paying attention to the comics of the island country, and perhaps the language of their hometown makes them more friendly. And there are a lot of stalks that belong to the island country style, which makes them have a very strong sense of substitution.

Recently, Soniko released a very popular local manga, which was really loved by Inoue Yuhiko and Ruzuki Group, but it also caused controversy among others.

"This author is very good, very thoughtful, and looks very feeling!" Inoue Yuhiko was full of praise for this comic, and shared this comic with everyone in the assistant DM exchange group.

However, Ken Obata and Yoshihiro Tomiyasu were very disgusted with this work.

"The pace is good, but the content of the story is so bad, there may be highlights at first, but after watching it for a long time, it will be disgusting. ”

"Boring works. Everyone's senior brother Ye Xiaoyu made a brief comment, he had no interest in such works.

"Is the atmosphere of your school so open?"

Gao Yang suddenly bubbled up, expressing curiosity about the campus life in the island country.

"Haha, Gao Yang, do you want to go to Dongying to 'collect wind'? Qiu Yun is here......" Tian Shi let out a gloating expression, mixed with the expression of a good ship.

This is after the final episode of "school-days" was broadcast, Tianman's newly added chat DM Niang expression, a DM Niang held an unknown object with a round mosaic, showing a happy Honkai smile, and took a good boat. Drift farther and farther away......

It seems to be in order to show a sense of existence. Qiu Yun also posted a cute expression at the right time.

Curiosity about Gao Yang. Eiichiro Oda's strong rebuttal: "Please don't get me wrong, our side is definitely not like this!"

"This is the world of a man's dreams!" said Inoue wistfully.

"Perverted. "Li Meng and Inoue are absolute opposites, in terms of gender and even comic style, they are completely different.

"It's good, but it's just a follow-up, and he follows Inoue's very popular "Genius Ping Pong Girl" in the island country, well. also 'borrowed' from Li Meng's "The Prince of Tennis", it can only be said that he has a good vision, and he also has some brains and strength, but if you want to talk about the real level, you can't see it. Ken Obata commented from an objective point of view.

Inoue also seems to want to change to this kind of expression and carry out the "gentleman" to the end.

However, there are also many people who oppose it, and such works completely abandon the story, and rely only on that kind of content to support the story, which is simply abandoning the basics. Even if it's hot, it's only for a while. Can't be a really good manga.

So, this matter was stabbed to He Chen.

This era is the era of Tianman、Huaxia exported comics,It's the era when Chinese works are translated into foreign languages.,Unless there are individual excellent works that can arouse the interest of Chinese readers in reading.,Qualified to be translated,No one cares about anything else.。

And this work is also just serialized, although it is super popular in the island country, but in terms of content, it is not qualified to be translated at all.

In other words, the translation is purely to find a spray.

He Chen didn't learn Toei, and after Inoue sent him the comics, He Chen directly threw them to Asamiko and asked her to translate them for herself.

Inoue only sent 5 words, not much, Asamiko, as an island country, has been cultivated by He Chen here for so long, and she is extremely proficient in both languages, and she can definitely translate the language in that story in the most appropriate way.

No matter how bad the comics are, He Chen will not be angry with the comics - he will not be upset with the author of the comics.

After reading this comic, He Chen was angry, but not to the author of this comic, nor to this comic, but to Inoue Yuhiko.

He actually wanted to change this style?

If he stood in front of He Chen, He Chen really wanted to use a ping-pong racket to pull out his brain and purify the inferior thoughts inside.

This work is also a story about table tennis, with a very strong name, called "Phoenix Butterfly on the Table".

As the assistants commented, this author is very "visionary" and very creative, and he can be regarded as the culmination of YY - but this is the style of the online article ten years ago!

The author is well versed in the way of YY, the beginning goes straight to the topic, the refreshing rhythm, and a picture makes the audience feel the protagonist's "compulsion" rushing towards him, and at the same time pulls out a suspense that arouses the reader's interest in reading.

Germany, an office.

"Do you really want to refuse the invitation of the professional team and return to Dongying?

Garden Yang Yu (protagonist - should be translated as phoenix butterfly): "I am here to inherit the strongest table tennis from my mentor in Dongying!"

Pulled out separately, except for the weird name of the protagonist, there is no slot.

But...... Germany, Dongying, professional teams, the strongest, table tennis, these are all connected to look at it, and there are so many slots that people don't know where to start for a while.

But that's just the beginning!

"I'm Rika Otsuka, a first-year high school student, a perfect beautiful girl who shines nobly and shines even a bird......"

"Just take a walk is a tide of confessions and conversations.,All the boys in the school are my fans without exception.,It's not easy to be the first beautiful girl in the school......"

"I want to be the pearl of the palm of a handsome and super rich man, and my dream is to live in a gorgeous and shiny house like a princess in the future!"

This is the first female character to appear, and it should be regarded as a heroine.

A strong smell of Mary Sue made He Chen powerless to parry.

"Since I'm all about table tennis, I can't afford to waste time in associating with your impure opposite sex...... Lost company!"

This is the first encounter between the female protagonist of Mary Sue and the male protagonist of Long Aotian.

WTF!

A Mary Sue is already unaffordable, plus a dragon Aotian...... Poisonous in!

Such a familiar style made He Chen have to doubt. Could it be that the author has come to the Chinese online literary circle to study? And only learned a little bit of YY?

"Dongying also used to be a big table tennis country!"

"The Golden Age of Table Tennis!" Under the leadership of 13 world champions, Dongying has reached the top of the world table tennis!"

Why does this sound so familiar?

Did you get the wrong script?

If you replace Dongying with Huaxia. The slightest sense of disobedience is wooden!

He Chen suddenly had a feeling of "complaining and you will lose". Could it be that it is because in "Genius Ping Pong Girl", Huaxia was written too powerfully, which stimulated them?

However, He Chen didn't think it was wrong, because it was a fact!

I remember that after a certain game, the coach said to Zhang Mowang: "Didn't you say that it would be good to concede two points?"

Zhang Demon King said, "Forget! Didn't you let me pull it?"

The coach said, "You have to skim this ball." ”

The demon king said, "What are you doing here?" I'm afraid she won't be able to take it!"

This is something that even they don't dare to YY, and that's how Huaxia plays in international competitions.

Therefore, He Chen always thinks. The theme of table tennis is not popular in China.

So he took a trick and let Inoue Yuhiko exert his interests, put on a coat of "cute", and then let him start writing from Dongying, set Huaxia as the big boss, and use the audience's sympathy for the weak, as well as a refreshing feeling of being a boss, under the double stimulation, it will prompt "Genius Ping Pong Girl" to skyrocket in popularity when it enters the Huaxia chapter.

Inoue Yuhiko is in this world, although he has gone a little far on the road of gentlemen. But his level gradually came into play under He Chen's tutelage. Although it seems to be a daily work of "cute", if you look closely, you can feel that the rhythm of the game is not weaker than the blood boiling of "Slam Dunk"!

This is a fusion of the "royal road" and "moe system" of the masterpiece, if you only rely on selling cute, want to be designated as the image representative of the Chinese Table Tennis Association? want to expand the surrounding to various fields? Want to achieve the current popularity?

It's just a joke.

"Are you so enthusiastic in high school as you are here? The first time I saw a man, he was ignored by others, and he took off his clothes and seduced him in class?"

He Chen pointed to a plot and asked Asamiko.

Asamiko's face was flushed, and she nervously and anxiously defended: "Chen-kun! That's not the case! Even a very open girl over there would never dare to take off her clothes in front of countless people in class! Please don't be misled by this author! I think this author must not have gone to high school!"

The poor author was immediately labeled by Asamiko as having never gone to high school.

This is not only a table tennis theme, but also a fusion of "deliberate spoof roaring body", as well as a strong secondary feelings.

"A first-class table tennis player can foresee a little future!"

"I'm gambling with my life on table tennis!"

Killer ball skills emerge one after another, not only copying some of the skills in "Genius Ping Pong Girl", but also "borrowing" skills from "The Prince of Tennis", such as the legendary "Tezuka Field" - Are you afraid of returning the ball with automatic pathfinding?

There is also a BUG skill that is absolutely impossible to save zài - zero chipping!

Playing table tennis and playing a zero-style chipping ball!

FUCK!

Tennis can also take advantage of the first time before landing in front of the net to intercept the net!

But the ping pong ball has to wait for it to bounce once!

If you don't bounce up, you can't touch it!

And if it doesn't bounce now, isn't this an invincible chipper?

That's a yarn!

integrates so many elements, and gives the protagonist such an anti-heaven hanging, at first glance, it may still be a little fresh. But in the long run, due to the lack of his own story, he only sells meat to support it (saying that Bichi is "cute" is simply insulting the word "cute"), and he will definitely be aesthetically fatigued.

This is a common problem with low-end YY works.

So, he only learned a scratch of the surface. (To be continued......)

PS: I can finally complain about this work...... It's so cool!

Sit back and wait for 50 words to cut it in half, if "Phoenix Butterfly on the Table" can be popular, then the Japanese comic industry is really finished.

Omitted, the "Saint Seiya", "Psychic King", and "Grandson of the Slippery Ghost" of the Kingdom of Heaven who were cut in half.