Chapter Eighty-Six: Details

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It's late again.

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He Chen's previous comics, novel settings and world views can easily gather popularity in the early stage. But this one Conan is different, it doesn't have that kind of amazing highlight. And it is also a very niche suspense reasoning type in China, serialized for more than half a month, and the results have been tepid, and even the unprinted chapter that has been completed cannot be compared.

"I said, boss, why don't you take the usual path? What is not good about drawing, painting such a niche subject matter as reasoning and suspense. The editorial department filled, and gradually shared the pressure of Zhuang Bufan, seeing that Conan's grades had not been able to go up, Zhuang Bufan spit out bitterness to He Chen.

"Meters, Bonwe!" thought of the advertising slogan, and He Chen blurted out.

Zhuang Bufan wondered: "What are you talking about?"

"......" He Chen smacked his lips, there was no Meters, there was no advertisement, no one knew if he wanted to say a stalk. No one understands that loneliness.

"Don't you think this story is good?"

He Chen still had doubts about his adaptation ability, for fear that if he accidentally went wrong and ruined a classic, then he could only commit suicide and apologize to Gangchang Aoyama.

"It's not that it's not good-looking, but the story is quite exciting, and it also fully reflects the comics' expression. For example, if you draw the first roller coaster murder case in the first drawing, if it is a novel, because you want to describe the details, as long as you pay attention to the part that the author focuses on, it is easy to deduce, but in the comics, if you don't expose the woman at the end, no one will notice that the necklace around the woman's neck has disappeared. This kind of need to pay careful attention to the details of every picture in the comics, and the moment it is finally revealed, is more exciting than reading a novel!"

Zhuang Bufan spat and said excitedly to He Chen, it seemed that he was very satisfied with this comic.

He Chen put down the tablet, stood up with the phone, moved his body, and said, "Then what do you think is wrong?"

“…… But aren't the men in black you arranged a little too far-fetched? For example, isn't the Ferris wheel better and more convenient than a roller coaster? And even the people who smuggle firearms dare to blackmail, but because they just left the scene of the crime, they don't dare to kill the protagonist, which is a bit unreasonable. And that method of killing, the speed of the roller coaster is very fast, and there is vibration, even a gymnast may not be able to do it, right?

Zhuang Bufan asked.

Who knows what Teacher Aoyama Gangchang thought at that time, He Chen couldn't answer, he could only say: "I dare to write because it's impossible, otherwise do you want me to write a textbook that teaches people how to kill people?"

"Hehe, of course not. Zhuang Bufan laughed twice, "By the way, are the Fox and Conan you wrote above true or fake? Seeing that the above introduction is so awesome, I want to see it." ”

“…… True and false, false and true, inaction is everywhere and there is nothing. He Chen was vague.

"If the first one is still exciting, the second one is a lot worse, the level is too low, the case is very simple, it's not exciting at all, it's just that the protagonist was slammed up, and it looks unpleasant, but Xiaolan, aren't you the gossip palm heir set up?

"......" He Chen didn't know how to gossip, so he only changed his name, and the comics didn't change at all, and he kicked his legs when he was supposed to kick them.

"Don't you think it's nice to watch long-legged beauties kick?"

“…… Hey, when you say that, it really makes me think Xiaolan is pretty too. Much more beautiful than the ones you drew before, gentle, powerful, beautiful, single-minded......"

"Ahem!"

He Chen coughed vigorously twice before pulling the dead fat man back.

"The third case has a bright spot, Conan has lost his prestige because of his small body, and everyone no longer believes his words. The doctor gave him a voice changer, and in the future, he probably wanted to use it to imitate other people's speech, so as to hide people's eyes and ears and solve the case. But the suicide of jumping after fixing the knife with ice cubes is a bit too pitiful, and ordinary people may not be able to stab people to death with a knife, not to mention this backward jumping suicide hair, even if you practice the butt to the backward flat sand and goose style, it may not be able to do it so accurately. And Conan's kick, Mao Goro's landing point is too accurate, how can he just faint, just take two steps back, and just sit firmly on the sofa......"

"Well, it's good to look good if it's fake, otherwise everyone will use this trick, and the court sentenced me to an abetment to murder, then I didn't die unjustly. He Chen didn't care.

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In the past, every time He Chen got something, he would always be sneered at by various media, I don't know if it was because he was slapped in the face by He Chen every time, and he was beaten too hard, so that Conan's grades were mediocre, and it didn't cause them to fall into the well, as if they didn't see it, Qi Qi ignored He Chen.

Although the system is being upgraded, the prestige function is still working as usual.

He Chen looked at the prestige of his system and was slightly dissatisfied, when he didn't need you to advertise, one by one he was like a cat, and he came up when he smelled fishy;

Liang Xiaoqiu is a writer of suspense and mystery novels, and Chinese suspense and mystery novels are not well-known in the world, so that they have a low status in the traditional literary circles in China -- they can't make enough novels, and they can't stand up.

The online literature industry is fast food literature, and suspense mystery novels, which need to be savored word by word, cannot attract the attention of those who like fast-paced online texts.

So the suspense mystery novel has become a thing that the uncle doesn't hurt and the grandmother doesn't love, it has no status, it can't make money, and its thinking is slowly ossifying, and it feels as if the classic novels have been written abroad, and they have fallen into a dead end where they can't write anything.

Liang Xiaoqiu likes to write novels, prefers the tense and exciting atmosphere of suspense and reasoning, and after writing a few well-evaluated novels, he slowly ossified into his own routine.

He is not a person who is at ease, he wants to seek a breakthrough, but he has never been able to find the gap with those top suspense mystery novels.

By chance, he heard that someone on the Internet had drawn a mystery comic, and in the spirit of seeking a breakthrough, he didn't care if it looked good or not, so he read it first.

"It turns out that this is a comic, the story is pretty good, but this reasoning is too child's play, it feels like it was deliberately to cater to it, and all the detection methods of those police officers were lost to school?"

While watching, Liang Xiaoqiu complained. There are not many comics, and every time they are either too obvious, they can be seen at a glance, or they are an afterthought, and the most important clues are not given until the end.

It's obviously quite general reasoning, but there is always a force pushing Liang Xiaoqiu to take a serious look, what is it?

Looking at the comics, you can express all the qiē in the picture, but in the novel, you have to put a lot of effort into writing, neither too prominent, nor too secretive.

"That's right! Details!" Liang Xiaoqiu was suddenly startled, and then overjoyed, he finally knew why he had been stagnant.

He pursues the shaping of atmosphere and the oppression of tension in transition, but he ignores the most important point of mystery novels - details!

It is precisely because of his deliberate desire to shape the atmosphere that he deliberately dilutes the clues, and sometimes he doesn't even write them, that the atmosphere comes out, but it makes the reader lose interest in reasoning!

A door slowly opened for him.