The full support of the famous writer Sakurako

3 hours ago: Sakurako commented on my journal "[Original] Main Content of Intelligence Power (with Notes)", "I don't read it, I think the literary talent is small, and the sinking "boat" Fang Jue Sea breeze is high'!

A quarter of an hour ago: Shen Zhou will not be too humble, many of my understandings have indeed reached a unique and exclusive situation, inspiration also has an inexhaustible state of wind and sea rain, if there are conditions, non-stop ten years and write not enough thoughts and feelings, so Shen Zhou will be so pity that time is not waiting, will interpret time with an intelligence force, I myself have even thought that what I am wasting is not only my personal time, but the Chinese literary world I have not yet touched the outer edge of the literary world!

5 minutes agoMe: That's why Shen Zhou screamed on July 22, 1995: I want to write more, I want to write more, I want to write well, write out and write out, and write the breath in my chest! If I was just for personal petty, I wouldn't be so anxious! I said that I didn't want to occupy too much of your time, or I didn't control it.

Sakurako: Speaking of your chapters, I would like to add that your "chapters" are not so much like "chapters" but rather like "sections". If you want to re-establish the "chapter", I am afraid it will be more difficult, and you will have to perform major surgery on the structure. If you want to change this situation, you can choose any of the following three options: 1) change "chapter" to "section", 2) order "chapter" by capital number "one, two, three, four", and 3) order "chapter" by Arabic numerals "1, 2, 3, 4". In this way, there will not be too much embarrassment and awkwardness in the structure. I don't know if my opinion is right or not, just for reference. If not, just ignore it. Forgive me for being blunt!

2 hours ago,Send to Sakura:In the pen fun pavilion www.biquge.info the general division of the chapters is different.,Each chapter is 3000 words up and down is the big stream.,The chapter is summarized with a volume.,There can be a part above the volume.。 In this way, the sunken boat will combine your guidance and build a shelf on the structure. There's no problem with that, and I have no one in the company who has the ability to plan unilaterally.

5 minutes ago, Sakurako: It's okay to make adjustments after the overall creation is complete, and of course it's better if you have your own certainty. In this way, we can avoid going astray from the crowd. Support you!

1 hour ago, Sakurako: There is no shortage of famous literary teachers in Sichuan, and Guo Moruo is one of the representatives. Maybe one day our brother Shenzhou will also become famous in one fell swoop! Because I have seen a brilliant dawn from your "Intelligence Power"!

10 minutes ago, sent to Sakurako: Your words are too powerful! The sinking boat has been delayed for too long, and it is already forty and six, before it starts again, and I will not be able to give it time, as long as I am not too ashamed in front of you in the future, I should be content.

3 hours ago, Sakurako: Brother Shen Zhou: Came to your homeland and attacked your "Intelligence Power", I think your writing skills are very old, and you are undoubtedly a good writer. The wedge also leaves suspense, ** is not small, and it has the attraction of making people chase it down, and I believe there will be hope. Because of the wandering and sightseeing, I couldn't talk about the specific feelings. However, there are two feelings that can still be said: one is that I feel that your topic is not very ideal, there is no suspense, and it fails to leave room for creativity; second, it is plain, intuitive, and not very literary; and third, there is the ambiguity of "engaging in intelligence" (according to the meaning of your beginning, it seems to have the meaning of emotional violence), and there is a feeling that the text is not on topic. The second is that the length of the chapter is too short, it is difficult to express a more complete story capacity, and after reading it, I feel that the story of each chapter is too urgent, and it seems to stop before it is finished, and the next chapter fails to follow the story of the previous chapter and shows "crossing", too "montage". I'm not a critic and I haven't perused it, so I can't talk about anything substantive. But the overall feeling is good. I thought it was very promising!

1 hour ago, sent to Sakurako: Thank you, Sakurako, your opinion is very valuable to me, and Shen Zhou can understand your sincere concern and sincere criticism. Will definitely pay attention to the correction. For more than half a year, you are the only famous person who has specifically instructed me in this study, I hope I will not disappoint your guidance, and I also hope that "Intelligence Power" can make us have a deeper fate.

05-1001:04 Shen Zhou sent to Sakura: Shen Zhou had the mentality of trying it last weekend, and accidentally "Intelligence Power" was reviewed on the www.biquge.info Chinese of the Biqu Pavilion on May 9, Shen Zhou was not ready, and he wanted to hit the www.biquge.info of Biqu Pavilion in the next part, but this time it had to change. It is a pity that the intelligence power will also deviate farther away from pure literature and increase some readability. What's even more struggling is that it is extremely difficult for novices to survive in the Biqu Pavilion www.biquge.info, especially for people like me who have too heavy work responsibilities, and I can't get any income from writing, so I have to go to work to cut food, and it is even more difficult for me who can't take a job off. In fact, Shen Zhou is also dreaming of becoming a full-fledged writer in Guangdong like you. You are an expert, where should I go, please Sakurako teacher for guidance, Shen Zhou is grateful!

4 hours ago, Sakurako: I'll take the time to read your "Intelligence Power". I believe you can succeed!

05-1001:47, Sakurako: I'm also an amateur writer, and I've never been engaged in a day's professional creation, and I've been crawling hard outside of work. The heart sank in, and finally something came to fruition. From a provincial writer to a national writer, along the way, he has also experienced an extremely difficult process, but outsiders don't know the hardships. You are from Sichuan, and Guangdong has a special love for Sichuan people. At least in recent years, Guangdong has created two migrant workers and working girls for Sichuan, and they have become influential young writers. One is Zhou Chongxian, who only has just begun Chinese working in Shunde, and after turning him into a writer, he arranged to work as a reporter in Zhongshan Daily; the other is Zheng Xiaoqiong, a Sichuan sister who works in Dongguan, and after training and mature, she was absorbed as an editor of the monthly magazine "Works", an organ of the Guangdong Writers Association. With your ability, who dares to say that one day you will not become a great writer in Guangdong?

7 hours ago, sent to Sakura: Thank you Sakura, Shen Zhou had to make a dream of writing fun pavilion www.biquge.info first, and then continue the dream of a modern writer, Shen Zhou's heartfelt heart is still in pure literature, and if the information is written, it will change some of its original intentions, but it will not become a fantasy work.

2 hours ago, sent to Sakurako: Shen Zhou wants to post your message in the log to publicize it, and attract some popularity to Shen Zhou, can you allow it?

10 minutes ago, Sakurako: As long as you think it's useful.

5 minutes ago, Sakurako: Of course, maybe I started earlier (I started writing literature in elementary school, and I started publishing in high school), and maybe you will be more hopeful than me to become famous. I wish you success!

1 minute ago, sent to Sakurako: You really have high expectations, Shen Zhou must grasp himself well, not arrogant or discouraged, but within the upper and lower lines. Good night Sakurako, the sinking boat has taken up a lot of your time, and it will be over. Goodbye, we'll meet the next opportunity!