Chapter 216: The Difficulty of Fighting Poetry

Everyone was stunned, what does Su Huai want to write now......?

The reporters of Radio 11 were suddenly boiling, and the cameras were all aimed at Su Huai's hand, is Mr. Su going to 'fight poems' on the stone tablet!?

The so-called "fighting poetry", this is a kind of game between poets and friends in this time and space, if there is a poet in a scene or shop, another poet reads it, feels bad, you can also leave a poem with the same theme next to it.

The two poems are juxtaposed, and the author of the first poem judges for himself, and if he feels that the other party has won, he erases his own poem, and vice versa.

Because this kind of "fighting poetry" is judged by the original poet, which is completely subjective, it is just a gentleman's dispute, usually only used for entertainment between friends, or a handover ceremony for the old poet to praise the newcomer.

If poets who don't know each other, rashly leaving fighting poems is tantamount to self-inflicted humiliation.

Unless...... The level of the person who left the poem far exceeds that of the original poet and can be his teacher...... Achieve overwhelming advantage......

Su Huai and Dongshan Ji Jinding Race Poems are still unscored, how dare he leave a fighting poem in the Snow Waterfall named in Dongshan Ji!?

Does he have the self-confidence to make Higashiyama Ji bow down?

Hu Yinan, Han Yuanjun, Jin Babu and others all glanced at each other, and they were all secretly suspicious.

Isn't it, isn't it...... Is this the purpose of Su Huai's insistence on going down the mountain before the game is over?

Could it be that this person not only wants to win the top poem, but also win the remaining two named poems?

To know...... The difficulty of this fighting poem is not only that your new poem is better than the original poem, but also that the structure of the original poem should be exactly the same, not one more song word, nor one less word.

This greatly limits the performance of the poet......

Generally speaking, the person who can win the fight poem is usually a few levels better than the original author to do it.

To be in "a faction of Changchuan erupting ridges, flying springs pouring out suspicious silver, angry waterfalls hanging like white rainbows, raising eyes and flying snow. What kind of courage does it take to leave your own poems on the edge of such a radiant sentence......

When everyone was in shock, Su Huai had already written his title with a brush - "Wangtai Mountain Snow Waterfall".

Every time Su Huai wrote, Zhang Min sang loudly next to him:

"The sunshine incense burner produces purple smoke, and the waterfall hangs in front of the river ...... from afar"

Zheng Guiyang and the others were stunned when they listened, and they couldn't help but secretly praise in their hearts, good poetry!

But Jin Babu was unconvinced and shouted: "This sentence has a meaning, but where is there an incense burner on this stage?"

Everyone also had this doubt in their hearts, but they heard Ji Qiaoqiao shouting sweetly: "Look up~"

Everyone looked in the direction of Ji Qiaoqiao's fingers, only to see the peak at the top of the waterfall, surrounded by smoke and clouds, and then remembering the sentence just now, the scene in people's sight suddenly changed wonderfully.

Isn't the peak on this snow-capped waterfall like an incense burner standing on top of the sky?

It rose up clouds of white smoke, misty between the green mountains and blue sky, and turned into a purple cloud under the light of the red sun. This not only renders the mountain peaks more beautiful, but also makes them more beautiful.

Then look down and move your eyes to the waterfall on the mountain wall, the sentence "look at the waterfall hanging in front of the river" seems to come out of my heart, "hanging in front of the river", this is the first image of "looking", the waterfall is like a huge white line hanging high between the mountains and rivers.

The beauty of the word "hanging" lies in the fact that it turns movement into stillness, vividly showing the image of the pouring waterfall in the "distant view", and completely expresses the miraculous power of nature.

Wow...... It was a transformation of words, and without this verse, they would not have noticed the beauty of this mountain peak.

In the admiration in their hearts, everyone's eyes looked down from above, and just saw the magnificent waterfall, Su Huai's last two lines of poetry were written from the pen again.

"The flying stream goes straight down to 3,000 feet, and it is suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days~!"

The audience who looked up at the waterfall all said "wow", because it was also a waterfall, but Su Huai's poems led them to appreciate this snow waterfall, which had never been beautiful.

Flying down 3,000 feet!!

The word "flying" depicts the scene of the waterfall gushing out very vividly, and "straight down" not only writes the high and steep mountain, but also can see the urgency of the water, and the high altitude falls straight down, and the unstoppable state is like in front of you.

However, Su Huai was still not satisfied, and then wrote a sentence "It is suspected that the Milky Way falls for nine days", he really wants to fall out of the sky, amazing soul.

These four sentences may seem simple, but they are moving.

The majestic incense burner peak is hidden in the clouds and mist, and the waterfall is like flowing straight down from the clouds, falling into the sky, which is naturally associated with the Milky Way falling from the sky.

Although the metaphor of "suspected to be the Milky Way falling for nine days" is peculiar, it does not come out of thin air in the poem, but naturally arises in the portrayal of the image. It is exaggerated and natural, novel and real, so as to vibrate the whole article, making the whole image more colorful, majestic and magnificent, which not only leaves a deep impression, but also gives people room for imagination!

It's really a strange sentence, made by heaven!

Han Yuanjun's face changed suddenly, and he said in a low voice: "The most important fifth character of this seven-word poem is to sound, I thought that Dongshan Ji's "Waterfall Qufu", spray, doubt, pull, and give four words, it is enough to be absolutely enough, I didn't expect Su Huai to go to the next level......"

Jin Babu also nodded with a gloomy expression:

Yes, he used the word "sheng", not only wrote the incense burner peak "alive", but also faintly showed the scene of the smoke clouds rising and floating in the mountains. The image of the word "hanging", the word "falling" is also very exciting, it vividly paints the majestic momentum of the abrupt and huge currents in the sky. It's really hard for me to imagine what this poem would look like without those three words......"

Hu Yinan also exclaimed: "Compared with Dongshan Ji's "Waterfall Qufu", 'there is a long river gushing ridge, the flying spring is pouring out the suspicious silver man, the angry waterfall is hanging like a white rainbow, and the eyes are also sprinkled with snow. Although the scene is not small, it still gives people a sense of crampedness......

Compared with Su Huai's poems, these four sentences of Dongshan Ji are all waterfalls, waterfalls, which seem very solid and very stilted, and they have been going around and around but the momentum is not small, but they are not smart and open.

Compared with Su Huai's kind of inside and out, tangible and spiritual, unrestrained and ethereal, it is really far away.

This fighting poem is strictly based on the rules and sentence structure of the original poem, and Su Huai can write a "Snow Waterfall Poem" at the level of a named poem, although everyone admires it, but after all, it can still be imagined.

Wow wow wow......

But no one expected that in such a weak state, Su Huai would actually carry out a poem in accordance with the sentence pattern of Dongshan Ji's "Waterfall Qufu" and write this "Wangtai Mountain Snow Waterfall", which does not mean that Su Huai is stronger than Dongshan Ji, but that he is far away from Dongshan Ji several levels...... (To be continued.) )