No. 043 The book is ruined, but the outline is still there
Appendix 3: Outline of the work
Title: Water is not warm moon
Characters: Old Short (He Zengjing), Short Lady (Tao Lifen), Short Lady (How Short), Short Girl (Little and Weiwei), Wang Erye, Wang Lady (Li Xinghua), My Brother, He Si, Tian Kaice, Tian Tian, Tu Qifeng, Chu Chu, etc
Plot:
1). Clues: A small family looks at the big society, the whole book takes the He family as the bright line, that is, the main line, the Wang family as the dark line, that is, the secondary line, and the Chen family as the line of 'hidden and sometimes appearing', a total of three clues, just like the stonemason hitting the sharp nest eye, the situation decided by the three lines, and jointly deduce the different customs, customs and stories of the melancholy ditch.
2). The twenty-eight-year-old man, and Li Xinghua met each other on a moonlit night in Tofu Weir, and they had great changes in each other, and the drama of the water was not warm from Chapter 0017, which really began.
Li Xinghua led out the holders of the four secret scrolls, five flowers appeared one, a thousand tendons are rare, Qiu Luzi entered the village, the long wildebeest came out of the needle, and the transformation of "Blue Sun Warm Jade Smoke" was completed under the joint promotion. Since then, the jade girl has become prodigal, and twenty-two kinds of craftsmen and not listed among them are coversmiths, lifters, pot tinkerers, tofu sellers, and fried ones, all of whom have had an affair with it.
The old dwarf finally opened his mind, and married the great beauty Tao Lifen under the subtle operation of the secret master Zhen Pozi, and with the addition of the dwarf lady, the eternal life house can no longer be calm, and it has begun to be lively, and there are troubles and disasters. The old dwarf doesn't know the goods, and he doesn't know that the dwarf lady is a much more advanced double-flower female treasure than Li Xinghua, which is beyond the records of the four secret scrolls. The incomprehensible and the unbelievable keep finding the eternal dwelling.
After Wang Erye and others were driven ashore from the tofu weir by their father, they used improper means behind them to make the business of slaughtering pigs and selling pork popular, accounting for the majority of the local area, not to mention robbing a lot of business from other places. The opponent did what he liked, and sent Fan Yimei and other pretty women with strange female treasures to bait frequently, and finally the time was ripe for the other party to make a move.
With a white belly and a red knife, I can't imagine that it is easier for Wang Erye to kill people than to kill pigs, because it is not the first time for him. The Wang family has a secret method that no one can imagine to destroy the corpse, and no one can find the slightest clue when he kills people again and again, and Wang Erye acts even more arrogantly, ranking first in Longwang Town, and his prestige is spreading farther and farther. attracted more ** masters to enter, more and more strange things were found out, and more and more strange events were planed out. The Flying Rock Bay incident, the golden duck, the electric zombie, things gradually became out of control.
After the dwarf lady Tao Lifen entered the Eternal Residence, it was like a demonic suction from the mouth of the giant snake, and all kinds of people were rolled into it one after another, and the Immortal Residence became the active center of the Sorrowful Valley. The temptations are frequent, the short lady is inexplicably unchaste, and the infinite scenery of Li Xinghua is eclipsed. There are short people in the mess, and there are short girls. Not long after the birth of the three children of Changshengju, disasters struck one after another. The old man was paralyzed, and the short lady used her mother's great ability to survive again and again, but she still reached the limit of her ability.
Misfortune is not a single line, ** characters gather in Feishi Bay behind Sorrowful Village, Qiu Luzi has no intentions, incarnated as Zeng Yifu and Xiong Qiduan mixed in it, spreading that there are bigger treasures buried under the immortal residence. The turmoil in the valley became more and more intense. The situation is out of control.
The Chen family used to live on the back of the sorrowful ditch, like a master in the world, the matter has come to this, the Chen family can no longer be silent and forbearing, my brother can't care about the age is too young, and resolutely swept into the center of the vortex. After this in-depth, I realized that the water in the chaos was deeper than the nest of the tofu weir, and the coercion of the Chen family was just like a dark cloud covering half of the sky, and the grace of the Chen family's drizzle only benefited this half. Behind the chaos, the Chen family's rival, the incomparably powerful Jian Luogou Jian family, stretched out his hand in secret!
Brother's experience and backing are complementary, not the opponent of the Jian family, but the brother is not defeated, he does not hesitate his reputation, categorically dissociates from the Chen family, the father is so angry that he is going to die, the brother said, "My Laozi, I have already understood, this is the life of the Chen family, I have the right to choose how to die! "Father understands better, he has already decided to give himself completely, how can he forcefully stop my brother? Brother used his supreme courage, with the courage to be consumed by mortal bodies as immortals, in a way that neither they nor himself could imagine, entangle all the troubles to himself, and end them together with his own life!
¥。 My brother's early death has matured my body and mind, and my brother's sacrifice has won me the most precious thing in the world for my growth -- time! During this period, the vitality of Wang Erye, who was missed by my brother when he closed the net, plummeted, and when he stole the single-family long-lived house at night, he shamefully died under the crotch of an ignorant child. The Eternal Life Residence is no longer what it used to be. The dwarf lady reluctantly left behind her young children and the paralyzed old dwarf, and disappeared without a trace. Changshengju has entered a difficult time, and his father has been hit hard by the loss of his son, and he has neglected to take care of Changshengju. The dwarf and the dwarf girl supported the old dwarf, crossed their fingers to live, and finally reached the age of little and micro in their early teens. Weiwei is very ghostly, and colluded with human traffickers to put himself into the tofu weir and fake his death under the eyes of the old dwarf, but in fact, he sold himself, and the life of the immortal residence was finally able to be maintained with the support of the dwarf.
After my brother went, the melancholy ditch returned to the ordinary, not much different from other villages, but I am no longer me! My memory has always been good, even the things that are less than three years old can be remembered clearly, but after I woke up from the pain of losing my brother, I found that I was several years younger than my memory, I obviously remember that I was four years older than the short man, when I could write, he had not entered the belly of the short lady to report for duty, but I didn't pay attention, he was two years older than me! It was too tricky.
¥。 After the separation of Wang Erye's body, Wang Sanye, who had been unknown, slowly showed his grandeur. The old dwarf was miraculously able to walk slowly, but he had an argument with Secretary Tian Kaice, and they fought to bring Tian Tian and the dwarf closer and closer. The life of the dwarf is broader than that of the old dwarf, he wants to find Weiwei to repay his innocence, he wants to be stupid to the person who abandoned the family to ask for a family, before learning that his sister is also a five-flower, when the little thing about being beaten by her teacher has not been exposed, his life has a little empty, he grasped it, and left home firmly, and there is only one old and one young in the eternal life, and it is difficult to prevent someone from targeting it.
The atmosphere of the world has changed greatly when the water is not warm and the moon has changed greatly in the generation of dwarfs, and the bowl beans and beans have grown up......
- The plot should be very long, but the sinking boat is very short of time, and it is not very mature to write more ideas, and there must be a way to the near place of the book, please allow me to list it here first.
- Because it is a three-line progression, the outline plots listed above will be interspersed with each other, and they will not be written out in practice, and the above order will not be fully observed. It is also common to break out of the outline in writing, please understand.
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Shen Zhou must say: This book is very different, not only testing the wisdom of the author, but also testing the reader's ability to accept, and it is also a difficult problem for Biquge to www.biquge.info this platform!
As Teacher Cui Daoyi said: Let the moral and high-spirited see the prostitution, let the wise see the wisdom, let the benevolent see the evil, and let the affectionate see the will!
As far as this book is concerned, readers of the average level, if you look at it, you will have a good time, and you can't see the heavy ideas I had in mind when I wrote this book.
First, I am trying to combine pure literature and popular literature, and there is no longer a clear distinction, which is a delusion.
There are many things in the world - they are very strict and solemn, but they look funny, ridiculous and even obscene. This phenomenon itself is a mixture of elegance and vulgarity. This phenomenon is the basis for the coexistence of the elegant and the vulgar. The purpose of the creation of this "Water is Not Warm Moon" is this, mortals can see the vulgarity by themselves, and the vulgarity is also pleasing to the eye. The wise person can also know elegance and elegance when he goes deep into it. can make those who have a heart frightened, and let those who have no heart be stunned, this novel has power.
Second, this book is written about social phenomena and people who have changed into entities, which is very different from real people, but readers will not see it that way.
I am a person who is too strict, strict with myself to the point of being boring, absolutely strict in my personal behavior, and I will not indulge myself. But this novel looks very affectionate, just because I changed the social phenomenon into a woman writing about it, and put her in the position of a snake guts. The polluter is represented by several men, the woman is owned by a strong man who is not very knowledgeable, and the other woman represents another calamity. The urine bucket is the magnifier, Wang Erye, my family, the group dwellers, the officials, the public, etc. have become the background of people, and the Changshengju, Tofu Weir, Sorrowful Ditch, a bowl of water, Longwang Town, and even the killing col have become the background of the environment, and the changes in China in recent decades have become the background of time.
Third, the brushstrokes of this book will go straight to the roots of men (male treasures) and women's roots (female treasures), but they are definitely not erotic and inferior.
In the novel, it is inevitable that men and women love each other, and this is just a façade. Inside the sinking boat, this is the intertwining of different social phenomena. It is the collision point, cataclysm point, and breakthrough point of reaction that is impregnated and assimilated and infects the next generation. Analyzing the process is like attaching importance to the theory of catastrophe.
It is difficult to grasp the description of Huan and love, so I try to replace it with the description of the change of scenery, in the hope of producing a musical symphony effect and the romance of the scenery. These descriptions, which avoid sensitive organs, can win clothes without revealing their bones, and carry the appropriate atmosphere with the confluence of literary style, which is also a presentation of the essence of words.
Please help the editors greatly and support it, so that the third book of Shen Zhou must be completed. Thank you!
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PS: The water is not warm to the moon, how a pity it is to be planted, look at this outline, you will know. The water is not warm and the moon is buried, and whoever unravels the sinking boat will probably not have a bright day, and the literary prosperity of the main country is likely to be a century later!