A revision of Chapter XVII.
Sorting out the plot today, I read the manuscript from the beginning, and found an embarrassing and abrupt place in the seventeenth chapter.
That is, the doctor came out and asked what the relationship between the crystal and Lin Zangfeng was, and the crystal directly said that it was Lin Zangfeng's wife, which was a bit abrupt here, so I modified it and added a few words to make the crystal's sentence natural, but the specific gist was not changed.
If you are interested, you can go back and take a look at it again. (Chapter 17, Let's Go Home) (ps, a small modification that does not affect the plot, but the modification will make the plot more comfortable.
Of course, there are already book lovers who have already spit in the back of this chapter. Well, I'm sorry to you guys here.
I've modified. See you tomorrow ^ω^.
A revision of Chapter 17 in "The Return of the Lovers at the End of the Night". I am hitting it in my hand, please wait a moment,
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