One person counts short, two counts long
Yesterday I wrote a chapter related to the game and received a lot of comments from readers, who were either puzzled, opposed, or thought that the author was poisonous.
At first, the author wanted to refute it, explaining that he had written it with consideration.
For example, the protagonist and Chen Tao's team have never cooperated, so let's do a game to run in first, and then talk about further things after seeing that the cooperation is happy.
Another example is to explain to the reader that although the protagonist's current situation is not very good, it is completely different from the state that he may be abandoned by the company at any time when he has just crossed over, and there is still a certain amount of time to be consumed.
For example, I want to spoil a lot of my own immature ideas about this line directly to readers, so as to alleviate the "poison point" that everyone thinks.
But after looking at everyone's comments and thinking carefully about each statement, I found that I couldn't refute it, because what everyone said actually made sense.
Limited by my writing, readers may be in a state of blindness to what I write, especially some long-term plots.
And this touch elephant is different, everyone knows that this is an elephant, but when you touch it, you feel that it is not any part of the elephant, but other objects.
So the doubts are yes.
Of course, this is not the point, I think one person is short, and two people are long, which is my deepest feeling after reading everyone's comments.
My own knowledge is limited, and this is a parallel world, and there is no complete world line to follow.
So I'm especially afraid that at the beginning, the protagonist will throw away a bunch of works and quickly become a superstar, and then the novel will collapse in 200,000 words.
The protagonist is cool, and the reader is also happy, and then the author finds that it is too cool and there is nothing to write.
In other words, each of my deductions may produce countless bugs.
This is where the reader's advice comes in.
For example, when I write an essay, I firmly say to myself, "I must not write and copy the plot of a novel, there are too many people to write, and I don't feel comfortable writing anymore."
But I ignored that as far as the plot of Xianxia Game is concerned, it is difficult to stand without the support of literary works and other publicity.
The so-called obstacle is not visible to Mount Tai, which is the case.
The reader just clicked and I understood.
This can be regarded as a mistake that newcomers can't take into account the overall situation when writing, and they can only do their best to change it in the future.
One of the interesting things about online novels is that the words written down are spilled water, and no matter how miserable the plot is, it must be filled with tears.
It's best to be able to come back.,If the circle doesn't come back, the author can only say that it's to pay tuition.,I won't do it again next time.。
The number of discussions has increased for a while, and I don't have time to reply one by one, so I hope you will bear with me.
Rest assured, I have carefully read every comment.
Finally, it's impossible for a work like Sword and Fairy to be popular in any universe hahaha.
Then the author went to write the next chapter.