Chapter 227: Writing the Script, 1/4

Aunt Chen was invited to come forward and guide the children in person, which really made the whole family feel excited.

After dinner, while the children were doing their homework, Su Linglu and Sister Mei were in Mr. Su's study to deal with the company's affairs.

Yue Yi and Aunt Chen worked together to analyze and re-create and write each scene of the entire stage play.

With Aunt Chen's help, it is naturally much easier to write, especially the dialogue and action scenes in each scene, and having an experienced senior like Aunt Chen to advise from the side naturally makes things a lot easier.

Of course, when Yue Yi admired Aunt Chen, Aunt Chen actually admired Yue Yi in her heart.

Although Yue Yi is still very stiff in the writing of the repertoire, his writing skills are still very good.

And the learning ability is very strong, many places can be thoroughly understood, and you don't need to say anything more to be able to understand the specific details.

"No, no, no, these conversations are not good, you have to design them from a child's point of view. ”

"Yes, that's a lot better, you can feel it when you read it yourself. ”

"And these details must also be written, how the scene of this scene is arranged, and which characters should appear. ”

"That's right, here, a good stage play, not just a few simple words, but also dance and songs. ”

"Well, that's right here, it's a lot better, these places need a little polish. ”

"Yes, yes, it looks a lot better this way, and since you want to anthropomorphize, you have to write about these anthropomorphic scenes and animals. ”

Under Aunt Chen's guidance, Yue Yi quickly mastered the skills and wrote the script of the entire stage play well.

While reading the script written by Yue Yi, Aunt Chen used her pen to draw some circles on it.

"Here, here, and here, these places still need to be modified, and specific words need to be used. ”

"Also, because it's a kid's show, and most of the kids don't have professional training, it's as simple as possible. ”

"Well, compress some of the content, shorten the process of changing some scenes, and shorten the dialogue. ”

"Try to keep it simple and straightforward, and these little details that you have to pay attention to. ”

Aunt Chen's requirements are still quite harsh, but fortunately, Yue Yi is still patient and can accept all opinions.

After complicated deliberation and several revisions by Aunt Chen, all the scripts were finally finalized.

Then, Yue Yi hurriedly went online and sent the script to Fang Dazhuang.

"The script is relatively simple, you see, if you have enough time, you can draw all the original paintings as soon as possible. ”

After Fang Dazhuang browsed the script, he was really deeply attracted by the script.

After reading the whole thing, there was no need to explain anything at all, and the picture depicted on the script immediately jumped on the page.

It can be said that the whole script is very vivid, and it looks very intuitive and simple, even children can understand it at a glance.

After reading the script, Fang Dazhuang immediately sent a message to Yue Yi: "Mr. Yue, rest assured, I will definitely rush out as soon as possible." ”

Yue Yi also replied: Hehehe, don't be too anxious, you try your best, if it doesn't work, it will be the same if you take it to the company during the day tomorrow.

Seeing the message sent by Yue Yi, Fang Dazhuang replied with great certainty: rest assured, I promise to rush out overnight, and go to the company tomorrow to polish.

After replying to an "OK", Yue Yi also began to get busy, and he planned to prepare a song for the stage play.

In fact, Yue Yi did not intend to let the three little girls of the Su family participate in the competition for the protagonist.

Because there are other more important performances to be arranged for the three little girls, and that is to have them sing a song at the end of the stage play.

This is not only to give the children more exposure, but also to make the whole stage play have a very interesting ending.

While they were thinking about what song to use, the three little girls had finished their homework and broke into the room together.

Jumping into my aunt's arms together, the three little ones looked very happy.

Yue Yi smiled and asked, "What's wrong, why do you look so happy? Can you tell your aunt and father?"

The three little ones looked at each other, and then they were even more happy, but they didn't answer their aunt.

"Auntie, Auntie, guess, guess why Yunyun, Xinxin, and Xuanxuan are so happy. ”

"Yes, yes, aunt, hurry up and guess. ”

"Ha, I want my aunt to guess. ”

After listening to the words of the three little guys, Yue Yi squinted his eyes and thought for a while and said, "Oh, do you want my aunt to guess?"

After thinking about it, he said, "Is it because the three of you finished your homework for today quickly, and there are no mistakes?"

Seeing that my aunt and father had guessed wrong, the three little girls immediately clapped their hands happily and shouted.

"My aunt guessed wrong. ”

"Ah, my aunt guessed wrong. ”

"Ha, I guessed wrong, I guessed wrong. ”

Yue Yi smiled and hugged the three little guys and asked, "Okay, my aunt can't guess, can you tell my aunt?"

The three little girls leaned on their aunt's arms affectionately, and then you answered me word by word.

"Actually, it's like this, just now Grandma Chen told us about the script written by my aunt. ”

"Ah, and then we see that the birds, uncle, can talk. ”

"Ha, Xuanxuan decided not to play Snow White, Xuanxuan wants to play Apple with Xinxin. ”

As soon as Xuanxuan's words fell, Yunyun also smiled and said, "Hehehehe, Yunyun wants to play the little tree outside the house." ”

Hearing that the children took the initiative to play supporting roles, Yue Yi knew that it should be Aunt Chen who did the work for the children.

Obviously, Aunt Chen didn't really want the three little sisters of the Su family to be too showy, and it was also to avoid causing trouble to Yue Yi.

After all, the idea of the stage play was proposed by Yue Yi, and now Yue Yi is also responsible for the script.

If the three little girls of the Su family are allowed to play the starring roles, the parents of the classmates in the class will definitely have some opinions.

Aunt Chen didn't want the three little angels of the Su family to be excluded in the class, which would affect their harmony with their classmates.

Unexpectedly, Aunt Chen's idea coincided with herself, and she was indeed an old artist.

Seeing that her aunt and father were in a daze, the three little girls were suddenly unhappy, and slapped their aunt and father together and shouted.

"Auntie, what's wrong with you, why have you become as stupid as Xuanxuan?"

"Ah, did Xuanxuan infect her aunt and father with her stupidity?"

"Ha, Xuanxuan cast a spell on her aunt, and her aunt became stupid. ”

"Hee-hee-hee...... Hahaha......"

The happy laughter of the little girls pulled Yue Yi's thoughts back, and then hugged the three little girls tightly and said, "Oh, my aunt is dominated by anger." ”

"Hahahaha......" The laughter echoed throughout the Su family's small building, whether it was Aunt Chen, who was busy in the kitchen, or Su Linglu and Sister Mei in the study, they could hear it clearly.

Hearing the children's laughter made the corners of everyone's mouths unconsciously rise, and a smile naturally appeared on their faces.