"It's a good story, Fang Jun. ”

Akiko, who once again carefully read the sketch in his hand, raised his head this time and said to the other party.

Her evaluation of "One Punch Man" was not unexpected by Fang Ye.

"But if that's it, you want to get a good ranking in the 'World One Comic Awards'......"

As she spoke, she turned to look at Orihime and said, "In my opinion, I'm afraid it's impossible. ”

Her words are full of routines, and as the editor of "Weekly Shonen Jump", she is undoubtedly qualified in terms of speech.

"Qiuzi, I think Fang Jun wants to know what is still flawed like me?"

Orihime Asagami asked softly with a face as usual next to her.

"This sketch should just be the NAME of your work, right, Fang Jun?"

After seeing Fang Ye nodded, Qiuzi smiled, "Our editorial department has to read thousands of submissions every day, and even if it's just such a simple NAME, you can see how well the contributor is able to draw." ”

She patted the sketch at hand, "I honestly say, Fang Jun, this story you conceived is very interesting, even eye-catching, but your painting skills are not worthy of such an excellent plot."

Not to mention that I took it to participate in this 'World One Manga Awards', I just wanted to be serialized in our "Weekly Shonen Jump" and couldn't pass the review meeting. ”

She looked at Fang Ye, whose expression on her face didn't seem to have changed, coughed lightly, and continued, "I'm telling the truth, Fang Jun. I can tell from this NAME that you should have just learned to draw, and there are a lot of mistakes that only novices can make in the outline of the lines and the proportions of the figures, which is your biggest problem now, and you must be aware of this. ”

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Yes, you said it well, Akiko......

At this time, on the other side, Orihime Asakami, who was smiling and listening to Akiko's final conclusion, thought so in her heart.

In fact, when she was in Fang Ye's ward, after reading this sketch, she had already come to the same conclusion.

The story of the manga is excellent, but Fang Ye's drawing skills are ...... Even if she combines her impression of the character design draft that Fang Ye used to assess at the beginning, Fang Ye's drawing level is at most on par with that of a cartoonist who has just debuted.

And such a hero fighting manga with an excellent plot, many action storyboards, such as the first big climax - the duel between the protagonists Saitama and Boros on an alien spaceship, can not depict the ideal fiery battle scene without extremely superb drawing skills.

is enough to match the drawing skills of the story of this work, and Orihime Asagami knows that there are only a few senior manga artists in the entire Toei manga industry who can do it.

As for Fang Jun, he obviously needs more time to practice and grow.

The reason why she didn't choose to say it when she was in the ward was nothing more than to appreciate Fang Ye, and at the same time, she also carefully considered the heart of a man who had just stepped into the comic world.

Sometimes a man's dignity can be insignificant, and it can be higher than the sky.

This is true of the men of Dongying, and even more so of the men from China.

So letting Qiuzi, who is a senior editor in the comics industry, say these words, it must make Fang Jun more acceptable.

A smart woman like her, if she is really willing to think about a man, will always find a way to do her best.

She looked at Fang Ye quietly, but her heart was more complicated than the other two people present.

It was the first time she cared so much about a man who was still a stranger to her.

When did it start?

With the memory, a trace of waves appeared in her eyes.

It should be that after she was killed by the murderer Izo, she passively triggered the ability that the nine-tailed cat right gave her and saw the terrifying world.

At that time, although her body was split to pieces, her soul survived because of her ability, and in a strange world with only black and white, when she thought that she had escaped the disaster of life and death that Master Ashiya Michiman said, she saw countless ghostly spirits appearing from the thick gray fog around her.

Facing a fresh human soul was like suddenly dropping a bloody piece of flesh bait from a group of hungry sharks, and countless sneaky people seduced by the fragrant smell of the soul surrounded her in an instant.

will be bitten and eaten by them, afraid that it will be in the next moment.

Even if it was her, she could only desperately call for help around, but even her mother couldn't sense that her life and death crisis had just begun.

Although she could see the reality outside of that black and white world, and she could see the murderer walking towards the last survivor with a knife, she knew that the other party was just a poor man, about to become a new ghost under the knife.

At that time, no one could save her, but when the ghostly black hands finally couldn't help but reach out to her from the thick fog, gradually entwining her soul, a light suddenly appeared.

She opened her eyes wide and saw that in the outside world, the Chinese student faced the murderous ghost warrior who was slashing, and just punched out, and smashed the other party to pieces!

The earth-shattering power of the fist did not stop, and even the world she was in, the ashes-like fog suddenly let out a wail, and the ghosts gathered around her body were torn in half and turned into thick smoke.

In the continuous sound of loud sounds, all the evil spirits seduced by her were destroyed, as if an invisible and powerful force crossed the border like a storm, swept away the undead, and rescued her from a desperate situation.

In a moment of shock, I clearly saw that the man seemed to be surrounded by layers of dazzling light, like an angry god, venting his invincible power to the world.

She didn't understand what was going on at the time, but when she was truly resurrected and returned to the human world, everything became clear after the clues provided by Sakaki converged.

There is no doubt that it was Fang Ye who saved her at that time, and it was the other party who helped her truly survive the catastrophe of life and death.