I happened to see a book review today, and I suddenly wanted to say something. Whether it's a book or a protagonist.

First of all, if you have any opinions, just mention them, except for swearing, etc., even if they criticize me, I almost never delete book reviews. And then this time it's not maliciously hanging people out, but I just want to defend myself, and I think everyone may have such doubts.

(I can't help but complain today, as an old bookworm with more than ten years of book age, this protagonist is really unpleasant.)

Don't help the protagonist explain in the text, we are readers, readers are God's perspective, and they will have their own judgments after reading the plot, and the unlikable protagonist will only accumulate in the impression left for a long time, and it is integrated into the twists and turns of the protagonist's personality and plot, not once or twice by chance, it is useless to explain it every time you help him, it will only waste time and water words, but this is also a mistake that many new authors will make.

Instead of this, it is better to design more plots to make the protagonist look handsome, and the kind of pretending to slap his face is a bit too much.

At present, the protagonist gives a character impression of turtle hair, cowardice, laziness, impulsiveness, likes to make bad jokes that are out of place, and is a bit selfish and pretending. The most important thing is that there is no growth, the more you live, the smaller you get, the early protagonist can see the efforts and persistence of ordinary people, and the current plot has not shown this aspect for a long time.

This protagonist is getting more and more eccentric, although I read this book for the ship's mother, not for the protagonist. But it's really a very regrettable thing that the protagonist of a book becomes the biggest failure of the book. ）

Among readers, not everyone who reads a passage wants to come over and think about the past, think about the thoughts of the protagonist, so I can't explain it.

And then the protagonist is not likable.,It's probably not very unpleasant.,After all, it's just an ordinary person.,There's no gold finger on your body.,Compared to the ship's mother, it's incompetent.。

There are too many pretending to be forced to slap the face, compared to the starting point of the text, does the protagonist really pretend to slap his face?

Let's not talk about the above.,This book is a daily life.,The first thing everyone likes to read must be the interaction with the ship's mother.,And then I really need to describe a lot of the protagonist's efforts.。

If you don't describe, it doesn't mean you don't. The book mentions what the role of the admiral is, to give the ship a better life, and it has been said that the protagonist strives to build the town guard mansion better. Or do I want to write intrigues, and then the protagonist cracks them one by one. I've already said a lot of the article, the protagonist withstands the pressure outside, resists malice, and doesn't let the ship's mother attack every day, but lives happily. These just don't focus on it, after all, everyone doesn't want to watch that kind of plot.

Lazy too, the admiral doesn't do things, let the ship's mother do things? I've already written that when you go out, the protagonist is doing things, but the division of labor is different.

Instigated this, the ship's mother bullied people, and then did the protagonist ever fail to help? Is there such a chapter? Or is it the chapter of recent prestige? It's not that the protagonist doesn't dare to fight back, but he hasn't yet. In addition, you can't just hit people at the slightest conflict, so that prestige is difficult to do.

The protagonist has become eccentric and has not grown, so there should be none. I remember I wrote, at the beginning, there was no way to substitute for the ship's mother. And then later, I describe that the protagonist tries to show friendliness and intimacy even when he meets a new shipgirl, isn't this growth?

I can't remember all of them, maybe there are, don't talk about this, try to pay attention.