Thoughts on an unexpected ending
It all started with English class. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info
When the teacher was teaching the text, he mysteriously said to us, "This text will be very unexpected." You can also read it after class. β
What kind of text is it? I'll summarize that text in a nutshell.
An American GI falls in love with a pen pal he has never met, and when he returns from the war, he travels to New York to meet the pen pal he has never met. They had made a pact before: they had to bring red roses on their chests.
So the GI went to look for his wife, and at this time a charming chick walked past him - but she completely ignored the GI, which made the GI feel very disappointed. At this time, a very ugly, fat, and very old woman appeared in front of him with a rose on her chest (the soldier's heart was almost broken at this time)
Still, the GI stepped forward and greeted the old woman. Later, I found out that it was the eldest girl who was testing him, and deliberately sent an old woman to explore his reality. I found out that the man really loved herγγγγγγ So they were together.
What I want to say isγγγγγγ Where is unexpected, is it good to play dog blood dramas like this?
Speaking of the unexpected ending, it is still the work of O'Henry. It was an amazing feeling. In terms of online novels, there are really few good works with unexpected endings at the moment. I think "Gensokyo's Custom House" is well written, and the ending is generally novel, both unexpected and reasonable.
If I were to write this, it would be something like this:
The soldier saw the old woman, and the old woman took him to meet the girl. As a result, the soldier with a mother-love plot fell in love with the old woman. But the old woman's husband was not pleased. The big girl felt the malice of the world and committed suicide angrily. Later, my husband found out that the old woman who had lived with him for more than ten years turned out to be a man, and divorced angrily. In the end, the unsuspecting soldier lived with the shemale Yakumo Purple. happyend, sprinkle flowers and sprinkle flowers~
This is called unexpected, this is called exciting.