learned that the essay questions for this year's college entrance examination in Liao Province were written by Su Yu, and netizens coaxed. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

"The author can't write it himself, so my brother will write another essay. ”

"Haha, write another one, I want to have the feeling of the previous one. ”

"Speed to an article, didn't you write your own essay last time, but I have to come this time. ”

"The first part was so joyful, I laughed to death. ”

"If we don't write well, we candidates don't want to. ”

“……”

Netizens appealed, and some old writers also paid attention to it, this kind of thing, in their opinion, is a piece of cake for Su Yu, it depends on whether he is willing to write it.

What's more, he was able to write it last time, and this time it should be no exception.

Seeing that the voice of netizens was very high, Su Yu did not refuse, there is a ready-made, why not do it?

This essay question is a college entrance examination question in a certain province in the previous life, and there is really a full-score essay, and the candidate is called "Jiang Xinjie", who is talented in language.

Soon, Su Yan sent a microwave at the request of the majority of netizens.

[Death of the Red Rabbit

In the twenty-sixth year of Jian'an, in 221 AD, Guan Yu went to Maicheng, was defeated and captured, refused to surrender, and was victimized by Sun Quan. His mount, the Red Rabbit Horse, was given to Ma Zhong by Sun Quan.

One day, Ma Zhong went on a table: the red rabbit horse went on a hunger strike for several days and will soon die. Sun Quan was shocked and urgently visited Jiangdong famous scholar Boxi. This person is after Bole, and it is said that he is proficient in horse language.

Ma Zhong led Boxi back to the house and went to the trough, but when he saw the red rabbit and horse lying on the ground, he couldn't stop neighing. Everyone was puzzled, but Bo was happy to know it. Boxi dismissed everyone, stroked his back and sighed: "In the past, Cao Cao did "Turtle Although Shou", 'Lao Ji is in charge of a long way, and his ambition is thousands of miles. The martyrs are in their twilight years, and their hearts are strong', I know that Jun Nian is the grace of General Guan and wants to go from it to the ground. However, Lu Fengxian Baimenlou died that day, and he didn't see you so dependent, why did he live up to your ambition of a thousand miles today?"

The red rabbit horse neighed and sighed: "I have heard it, 'The bird is dying, and its song is also mourning, and the man is dying, and his words are good.'" 'I am fortunate to meet Mr. Today, I can tell you from the bottom of my heart. I was born in Xiliang, and then Dong Zhuo obtained, this person flew high, killed the young emperor, and Wolong bed, he was really a thief, and I hated it deeply. ”

Boxi nodded and said: "Later, I heard that Li Ru offered a plan and gave you to Lu Bu, Lu Bu is the first brave general in the world, and everyone said, 'Lu Bu is among the people, and the red rabbit is among the horses.'" 'I want to live up to the king's ambition. The red rabbit horse sighed: "The public is wrong. Lu Bu is the most untrustworthy, he killed Ding Yuan for glory, assassinated Dong Zhuo for beauty, voted for Liu Bei and seized his Xuzhou, and beheaded his marriage envoy by Yuan Shu. 'People without trust, they can't stand', and such dishonest people are on the same level, which is really a great shame in my life! Later, I returned to Cao Cao, and although his subordinates were fierce generals, no one could be called heroes. I am afraid that in this life I will only be humiliated by the hands of slaves, and I will die between stables. Later, Cao Cao gave me to General Guan, and I once saw his martial courage in front of the Tiger Prison Pass, and saw his kindness and righteousness on the White Gate Tower, and admired him for a long time. General Guan was also overjoyed to see me and thanked Cao Cao. When asked why this was the case, General Guan replied: "I know that this horse travels thousands of miles every day, and now I am fortunate to have it, and if he knows the whereabouts of his brother one day, he can see it in one day." So is the integrity of the people. As the saying goes: 'Birds fly far with the phoenix, and people are virtuous and of high quality.' 'I dare not repay him with death?'" Bo Xi heard this, and sighed: "Everyone says that General Guan is an honest man, and what I heard today is true." ”

The red rabbit horse cried and said: "I don't want to eat Zhou Su's Boyi and Shuqi's high righteousness." Jade can be broken without damaging its whiteness, and bamboo can be broken without destroying its joints. Scholars die for confidants, people exist because of integrity, and I am willing to eat Wu Su and live in the world?" Bo Xi cried loudly and said: "Things are like this, how can people be worthy?" Quan Wen also cried: "I don't know that Yun Chang's integrity is like this, now this loyal and righteous person is harmed by me, what face do I have to see the world?" 】

As soon as "The Death of the Red Rabbit" came out, netizens were stunned.

it, it's different from the previous one.

It's also too mature and too formal.

But.

This is an article that really shows the skill of writing.

Some experts in classical philology were dumbfounded.

Nima: We've studied classical literature all our lives, and we can't write articles with this flavor.

Many literati commented and marveled.

"Based on the familiar story of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled the touching story of the red rabbit horse who died for integrity, highlighting the theme of 'true heroes must speak of integrity', and expressing the ambition of choosing good and following in life, and only being honest is the vision, so that the theme of the article is intended to reach a higher level. What is even more commendable is that the author uses the ancient vernacular proficiently, understands clearly, and writes brilliantly, and his sophisticated language skills not only make many candidates unable to match, but also difficult for experts in the study of classical literature to be able to stand out. ”

"After reading this essay, it is amazing. One is the novelty of the story. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled the touching story of the Red Rabbit Horse's death for integrity, and his imagination is really rich. The second is to be ambitious. The article personifies the red rabbit horse, so that in the dialogue with Boxi, it shows the praise and disapproval of Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo, and Lu Bu, and realizes the theme of "true heroes must be honest"; The third is that the language is old. The whole article uses the ancient vernacular, which is scattered and intricate, clear and clear, and the writing is flying. ”

"I guess not only do ordinary teachers don't know and can't understand it, but even I, a teacher who teaches classical literature, don't understand everything, some have seen but haven't used it, and some ancient characters don't know at all. I consulted the information and made annotations, and the annotations alone were full of 4 pages! Regardless of whether it was him who wrote the question, his composition was very pertinent, writing about the harmony between man and nature, the harmony between man and heaven and earth, and he used his special language and special words to freely express such a theme, which is amazing! The style of writing is worthy of great praise, it is not the prose style of the Tang and Song dynasties, but the ancient literary language, which has the characteristics of the body and the characteristics of the prose, is very good at descripting, the style is just right, and the characteristics are clumsy, real, Shen, I have the impression that this style of writing is closer to Yang Xiong in the Han Dynasty and Zhang Taiyan and Lu Xun in modern times. Whether it is his ancient characters or allusions, he uses them very smoothly and naturally, which shows that this cultural cultivation has been internalized into his own things. ”

"Gege must be very fond of reading, and has read a lot of books, I really didn't expect that a busy person like him would find time to read. It is inevitable that such a person will have this achievement. ”

"I've never seen someone who works so hard, although we can't see his efforts, but from his writings and his words, we can clearly feel it. Reading not only allows you to understand yourself more and more, but also allows others to understand yourself. ”