The composition was finished before the first class ended, Yan Fei simply handed in the composition, and then took the Chinese textbook as a guise and continued to observe the white dinosaur. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

The big-eyed teacher returned to the podium with Yan Fei's composition, and when he opened the text, he picked up the next few pages. As soon as I saw such a long composition, I was immediately satisfied.

So she sat down quietly, began to bow carefully, and carefully read the essay from beginning to end, and then it was very obvious that there was a trace of confusion on the face of the big-eyed female teacher......

Crocodile? What kind of animal is that?

A giant beast of more than ten meters, or a group?

The big-eyed female teacher raised her head and looked at the classroom, and couldn't help but fall into deep thought......

The monster is more than ten meters away, with its head on the podium, and its tail must be able to reach the back wall of the classroom, right? No, it seems that this classroom is still a little bit unfitting, right?

Such a large group of monsters, and they hunt collectively, what kind of animals can be hunted to keep them full?

What the hell is a sail sawfish? It can grow to seven or eight meters long, and it looks like a big sword with serrated teeth in front of its head?

The poor Chinese teacher felt that his head had become a mess - in this town, no one has seen Jurassic Park, and most people don't know that there are still dinosaurs on Earth. And girls are not as curious as boys, and will take the initiative to read some books with strange monsters......

So, now this teacher is very confused!

The writing style is good, but Yan has never forgotten it, and she has read a lot of books under the coercion and temptation of the girl. The writing is also very deliberate, and the description is as if he is in the scene, just watching those monsters prey on another monster - of course, Yan Fei just watched and wrote, otherwise he would not have written more than the number of words.

But the teacher really doesn't know how to evaluate this essay, I asked everyone to write about a familiar animal, this monster, is it really familiar to you?

Until the end of class, the teacher's big eyes were still confused.

Originally, in composition class, if a student submits an essay early and writes well, the teacher will use it to motivate other students. But today, she decided to change this habit of hers. Anyway, they all just started school, and the students were all freshmen, and they didn't know that I had such a habit.

Comforting himself, the young Chinese teacher took the essay and walked briskly towards the office.

After seeing a familiar female teacher in the office, she quickly took the composition and asked the female teacher to help her see how the essay should be graded.

The gray-haired female teacher who helped read the essay was not too young, and she had devoted most of her life to education. However, having rich teaching experience does not mean that you will learn biology well.

In the end, I gave a comment on this composition: "Rich imagination, fluent language, and brilliant writing." But the essay is not on topic, it is true that this kind of student is a little clever, but we should not encourage him to write essays like this. Because the teacher of the college entrance examination will not give him a high score because he made up something wrong. So you have to dispel his grandstanding as soon as possible......"

Seeing this, the big-eyed female teacher reminded her in a low voice before the female teacher said something even more unpleasant: "It was Yan Fei who wrote this composition." ”

"What? Yan Fei, which Yan Fei?" the gray-haired female teacher was surprised.

"It's the boss who raised cattle, Yan Fei. The big-eyed teacher replied affirmatively.

"Oh, it's him!" the gray-haired governess groaned, recalling the fragrant beef she had eaten during the summer vacation. "Boss Yan's imagination is still good! The genius's thinking is different from that of us ordinary people, no wonder he can bring the villagers to get rich. And this style is not bad, in the end, it is a person who can be the boss, and the writing really makes people feel immersive. ”

"Special talents should have some special treatment, he can find time out of his busy schedule to attend classes, we should encourage him a little. You can give a high score for this essay for the time being, and then look at other essays he wrote later. Although he may not necessarily take the college entrance examination, but when you need to be reminded, you still have to remind him appropriately, we can understand him, it doesn't mean that those teachers who change the college entrance examination will also understand, you can grasp this yourself!"

All right!

The big-eyed teacher took the essay and fell into deep thought again.

So how do I remind you?

Remind him to write about cows next time he writes about animals?

But there are too many people who write about cows, and at least thirty of the hundred students in a class are old scalpers in the family. Moreover, among these 30 students, there must be 10 essays, all of which have the sentence 'bow down and be willing to be a son of a cow' -- in the remaining 20 essays, there must be 10 essays that 'Lao Ji is determined to be a thousand miles away', and the remaining 10 essays are 'Lao Niu knows that the sun is setting late, so he does not need to raise his whip and kick himself'.

To be honest, after teaching for several years, every time I see such an essay, the young female teacher feels that she can smell cow dung......

By the way, I heard that Boss Yan still has tigers, so you can remind him to write about tigers.

After thinking about it, the big-eyed female teacher returned to her desk and solemnly wrote a comment on it with a red pen: The sentences are smooth, the writing is extraordinary, and the description is immersive, good!

Then put on the score, fifty points.

The high school essay has a full score of 60 points, and I don't know how the teachers score it elsewhere. However, in this high school in Sanchahe, the general essay score is relatively low, and the normal score of more than 40 points is a good essay. If you can score 50 points, it is a good composition among good compositions.

Yan Fei, who was pretending to be sleeping with his head covered, but was actually staring at the white dinosaur, didn't know that one of his compositions had caused so much trouble to the young female teacher who met for the first time.

Of course, no one else will see this composition, even if it is for others to see, most of everyone thinks that Boss Yan has a strange idea.

So no one would know that if this short essay of a few hundred words was shown to paleontologists who study fossils, it would probably make some people feel like a treasure, and by the way, it would cause some controversy.

I don't know how many paleontologists and how many years they will have to work hard to reach the conclusions written in this essay, such as the migration of sail saw rays, the living habits of crocodiles, and their completely different appearance from those studied by existing paleontologists.

It's a pity that now, this essay is fifty points, and this is because Boss Yan's face is big enough. If another student writes it, most of them will have to be glared at by this teacher with wide eyes and viciously reprimanded, so that he can honestly write about cats and dogs that everyone knows in the future......