Sitting next to the computer, there are countless pictures in my head, as well as plots, and explosive points, but I just don't know how to express it, and my brain is already messy. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

Originally, Xiaobai was very good, even a little stinky and beautiful, and he felt that his writing was quite good, and everyone supported it.

But a book friend said, Xiaobai, the plot lines you wrote really don't have a sense of substitution, so when I don't have the slightest motivation, I feel a little confused, it turns out that I still have so many shortcomings in what I wrote.

The book friend's suggestion was to ask me to take a look at the director, or the best director, how to increase the sense of substitution, but Xiaobai is Xiaobai, I studied it painstakingly for two days, and found that the harvest is indeed there, and it can even be written similarly, but this does not have Xiaobai's style.

I believe everyone has seen the last chapter sent yesterday.,That is, the chapter of the evil girl and the rotten egg.,The lines in it add a lot of your own feelings.,Maybe it's my own meaning from the plot.。

I don't know what everyone thinks, because Xiaobai himself has no bottom, for fear that everyone thinks that Xiaobai writes like this, it is too watery, and there is even a suspicion of the number of words.

So, I hope that all of you who have already read the last chapter will give me a little advice, do you think this water is not water, is it okay? Leave your opinions in the book review, okay? If I can, I will also focus on this aspect in the future.

Also,The four chapters that Xiaobai is in arrears of.,It's not okay next week.,I'll catch the three more on Saturdays and Sundays.,The rest of the chapters owed.,Pay it back next week.,Maybe I can give a surprise.。

Okay,That's it.,Finally, ask for a recommendation.、Collection、Reward、Evaluation of Shenma.,This is also everyone's support for this book.,Thank you.,Thank you.。

Respectfully for Xiaobai (be sure to comment on it!!)