Closing remarks 2

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The end of the book, in fact, according to the original concept, this ending was closed earlier, the new immortal world part and the subsequent plot were omitted, the demon world part was not expanded, and the heavenly dao part was not expanded.

Because the results of the book are not good, the editor said very tactfully and objectively a long time ago, suggesting that he finish the book and open a new book, but I have been writing it until now before it is finally finished, which can be regarded as a double attack of obsessive-compulsive disorder and procrastination (covering my face).

Since last year, I wanted to end it as soon as possible.,Can't write too long of water.,So a lot of plots didn't dare to spread out too much.,There are a lot of plots and settings that didn't dare to be written later;A lot of spells have been designed.,But it's not used much later.,The fight plot has also been reduced a lot (I'm not sure if you like to see too much fighting.,So try to simplify it.,Haha),The detailed process of opening up a new fairy world has also omitted at least 100,000 words.,Counted,It's really saved a lot of words.。

But until now, a complete story has finally been presented, with a beginning and an end, and the final explanation for each important character, so you can finish the book with peace of mind.

If you only talk about the process, this book is very happy to write, and I have gained a lot in the process of writing, I can feel that I am improving little by little, at least when I look back now, I know what I wrote well and what I didn't write well.

For example, when I look back at the first dozens of chapters later, I don't feel ideal, if I rewrite the beginning now, many places and many details will not be handled that way, and some plots will be written in a different way.

But as I said earlier, now that time has passed too long, the chapters can't be modified, and the later plots are all extended down the previous plots, so the imperfect places can only exist imperfectly, and become the cornerstone of the growth road.

When I wrote this book, I set the goal for this book: no collapse, no major bruises, no poisonous spots, no obvious big grooves.

That's what I think I did.

As for the problem of bad grades and data, I was relieved later, thinking that since the goal of this book is not to collapse, I will ignore the grades first, at least write the story of the book completely. So later, I didn't care about the grades, I didn't care about the full attendance, and I didn't look at the rankings, and I only buried my head in the code every day. Later, my heart became more and more calm, but I really gained a lot in the process.

Thank you for not disliking my turtle speed, or have friends to chase more votes, let me feel very happy, any small support is really the biggest motivation to stick to the code word every day, really, thank you very, very much.

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In addition, let's talk about the storyline in bits and pieces:

First, about the Holy Emperor Yao.

Although the goal of this book is to have no hard flaws, I later found out that there is still a bug.

It is about how many people are in the harem of the Holy Emperor Yaozheng, this question was not considered clearly at first, so according to the mindset, it was written that a Holy Emperor would definitely have many harems and many children.

Later, I wrote and wrote, and I felt that Yao Zheng's character should be forbidden. ? It is more reasonable to want to be connected, he has not had any concubines for a thousand years, and he is not close to any woman, and even the former chief envoy Qing Fan recommended himself to Xi Pillow was coldly rejected by him, because he was just waiting for that person.

This would be better.

But I didn't think it clearly at the beginning, and when I finally thought of this when I finally thought of it, there was no way to modify the previous one, so I could only make a mistake.

In addition, there is a logical drawback to this setting that will be wrong.

Later, it involves why Yao Zheng didn't pass the throne to his biological son, instead of passing it on to the heroine, no matter how you say it, how you explain it, in fact, I feel a little far-fetched in my heart, but if it is set at the beginning that Yao Zheng has no concubine, let alone any children, then, he wants to pass the throne to his only blood descendant, who is his sister's child, then this matter is very logical, and there is no need to explain it anymore.

This is the detail that was not thought out at the beginning.

Second, about the frosty night.

It's a character that surprised me later.

At that time, when the outline and characters were first set, such a person was not envisaged.

He appeared in this world silently, his first few appearances didn't even have a name, I thought he was a supporting character, but he was persistent, as if he had his own soul.

After that, the direction of the story is almost out of the author's control, his mind is strong enough to reveal the story, affect the author, at first, Ben arranged his mortal ending, but the characters in the story and the people outside the story can't bear to let him die, so he changes his fateful ending.

He fell in love with the heroine in the story, but I couldn't give him the best results, some were destined from the beginning, and some were because of identity and ethics, so they could only live up.

So I can only say through the mouth of the master that in this world, I will always live up to the deep love of some people.

But he just jumped out of my outline and inserted such a character into the entry for what was originally an important role. Then he strung together the storyline of the second half of the story and drove the development of the plot.

I recalled it a long time later, when he first saw the heroine, the heroine was holding a heavy sword called chopping wood, and it was his first appearance.

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Then a few days ago, I suddenly understood that this character is actually a figure that I am missing in my heart, and it is my subconscious that slowly materializes him as a character in the story, perhaps, it was the kind of person I hoped to meet in the hazy haze when I was a little girl, powerful, reliable, and trustworthy.

Such a person has never appeared in my life.

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So the story ends here.,It's also the end of my own mental journey.,In the first half of the story,I always thought I couldn't write a good emotional drama.,In fact, it's just because the projection is not deep enough.,The handsome young man named Ji Li, whom the heroine saw at first glance, didn't come out of my heart.,It's set for the sake of setting (and as I said earlier,It's a hastily modified setting),But the role of the later frost night,Silently emerged from my subconscious.,It's a real illusion and embodied image.。

Thanks to this character, I have a deeper understanding of how characters should be written, and thanks to this character, I feel that characters really have souls.

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The next book is still a light-hearted story, with a framework and some details, and I will try to open a new book as soon as possible, and I hope I can still get your support.

I take the story seriously and treat the characters in the story with sincerity.

Finally, thank you again to all the book lovers.

Love you guys.

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