When he got off work, Liu Kewei proposed that today be the weekend, so let's have a meal together. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

Cao Zheng and She Guanjiao froze, smiled and nodded in agreement.

She Guankan picked up his mobile phone and made a call, saying that he was eating out with his colleagues for dinner, and he didn't have to wait for Cao System and him.

"I rented a three-bedroom apartment with Xiao She and Manager Bing," Cao explained to the fat man, "Each person lives in one, and today it is Xiao She's girlfriend's turn to cook." ”

Before going out, Liu Kewei picked up the printed draft of the main outline that was thrown aside by the fat man, folded it and stuffed it into his pocket.

The four of them went to a restaurant near the food court and found a table to sit down.

Liu Kewei ordered a few dishes and ordered two bottles of beer.

"Today is Uncle Duan's first day of work, and it is also the first time that the four of us in the planning department have eaten together, so I invite you. Liu Kewei picked up his wine glass, "Come, have a drink first." ”

After a few words of greeting, Liu Kewei took out the outline from his pocket and handed it to Cao System: "This is the main plot outline proposed by Uncle Duan today, you two will take a look and give some opinions." ”

The fat man opened his mouth to say something, but was stopped by Liu Kewei.

She Guankan leaned over and looked at the outline with Cao Zheng, a total of only a few thousand words, and the dishes were basically finished before they were all served.

"The structure of the story is huge, and I like it. Cao Zheng smiled, "Gods, demons, immortals, Buddhas, people, ghosts, these so-called six realms really look like there is something like that, and the contradictions and conflicts between the six realms are also very reasonable and clear, I like this story very much, it is very deep, and I don't see anything too bad." ”

She Guan nodded: "I like the short stories of most of the scenes, especially those few battles, I feel that I can see the outline of the scene in front of me when I close my eyes." Uncle Duan is so powerful, much better than the backstory of the game we made in Xiamen. ”

"Can this be compared? We didn't have a copywriting plan at the beginning!" Cao Zheng defended, "Lao Liu and Xiao She and I were colleagues in Xiamen before, and Manager Wang was our main planner at that time, and he took us to Hangzhou. ”

"That's right, this doesn't look like a professional copywriter or not. She Guankan echoed.

"When I first saw it, I thought the whole story was very good. Liu Kewei touched his chin, "But Uncle Duan doesn't seem to be very satisfied, to be honest, I don't usually read novels, maybe my personal opinion is not convincing, so I want Uncle Duan to listen to Lao Cao and Xiao She's evaluation." ”

The fat man seemed to be stupid: "Are you deliberately comforting me? The progression between several links is obviously very far-fetched, and you still think it's good? If someone else writes to me like this, I will definitely not be able to stand it, and I will laugh and scold if I don't do it." ”

Liu Kewei's face was straight, pointing at Cao Zheng, pointing at She Checkpoint, and finally pointing at himself.

"Lao Cao has been in the industry for 5 years, Xiao She has been in the industry for nearly 2 years, and I Liu Kewei has been in the industry for 6 years. We are professional game planners, but we didn't see the details you mentioned. Liu Kewei put his arm around the shoulder of the fat man, "I read it again after you pointed it out, those points are indeed a little awkward, but I really didn't care too much about it before." Do you want to know that the aesthetic level of our game players is higher than that of Lao Cao, Xiao She, and me? Not to mention how many people will pay attention to the plot, even if they do, how many people can see these problems? It is estimated that there are not 10 percent!"

The fat man looked at Liu Kewei in disbelief, then retrieved the outline from Cao Zheng's hand, rubbed his eyes and looked at it again.

"I talked to you before, and others you like may not like it," Liu Kewei said with a smile, "Now I want to tell you that what you don't like may not be liked by no one." You are too obsessed with the flaws of the details and are the quintessential perfectionist. Believe me, if you jump out of your subjective emotions, you will definitely be able to do a good job. ”

At this point, this topic can be regarded as over, and the next thing needs to be thought about by the fat man himself, and Liu Kewei doesn't plan to say anything more.

The fat man is not a fool, he may have been accustomed to looking at problems from his own standpoint, but when he heard Liu Kewei say this, he understood, and the strong entanglement and resistance in his heart basically dissipated.

Of course, this does not mean that the otaku man has completely given up his previous position.

The problem still exists, the flaw is still the flaw, but after focusing on the overall situation, the flaws in those details are no longer shocking, and they are just a trivial part of the ointment.

It can definitely be done well, it has been done well, and it is trying to do better. These are the three conclusions that Liu Kewei wants to tell the fat man.

After eating, Cao Zheng and She Guankan said goodbye and went home, and Liu Kewei asked the fat man if he wanted to go to the Internet café again.

The fat man said that he had made an appointment with Wakazakura to buy a futon or something, otherwise he would have to sleep on the sofa in the living room at night.

"You really made an appointment with her to go shopping?" Liu Kewei's expression was a little unnatural, "Then I'll go to the Internet café by myself." ”

"You're thinking too much, it's just buying something at a time. The fat man said disapprehantly, "Let's go together, otherwise it's really a little embarrassing to be alone." ”

Liu Kewei pouted and said, "Cut, I don't want to be a light bulb." ”

"Are you jealous with this expression and tone?" the fat man couldn't help but laugh, "I say that you think too much, I'm not a casual person who is attracted to a strange girl." ”

"Then you still make an appointment with someone to go shopping on the first day of work?" Liu Kewei said nonchalantly.

"It's just going shopping together, don't you know I'm an otaku?" the fat man was a little crazy, "I'm a fat man who has been at home for seven or eight years! Don't you understand that the second dimension is the spiritual realm of otaku? Anyway, I don't remember how long I've not liked a girl in the real world, it seems like the last century." ”

At this time, the fat man's mobile phone rang, and it was a strange call.

"Uncle Duan, where are you?" After connecting, Ruo Sakura's cheerful voice sounded in the microphone.

"I just finished eating, and I'm with Lao Liu, and we're near the Zhongxing Food Court. ”

"Oh, then you can wait for me at the entrance of the food court. There was also a colleague from the programming department who wanted to buy something, so I asked him to come along. Wakazakura squeaked, like a fast-billed sparrow, "By the way, you must know each other, it's your roommate's car." ”

Hung up the phone with a promise, and the fat man said to Liu Kewei with a strange face: "She said that the car also needs to buy things, so she will come over together to ......"

"What do you want to say?" Liu Kewei asked puzzled, "Look at what you are talking about, you must know that there must be something that has not been said." ”

The fat man shook his head and didn't speak, he just had a premonition inexplicably.

still remembers what Liu Kewei said before, "It's a buddy in a dormitory, and it can be regarded as fat and water that doesn't flow into outsiders' fields." ”

…… If you can't do it, you really can't say it accurately.

After waiting at the entrance of the food court for about a quarter of an hour, Che Guanglong and Wakazakura walked side by side. The fat man looked at it in his eyes, his surface was silent, and the premonition in his heart became clearer and clearer.

After greeting each other, the fat man smiled and asked, "Che'er, what do you want to buy?"

"I didn't want to buy anything. Che Guanglong said slowly, "It's just that I can't get used to eating breakfast here, and I want to ask which store near Wakazakura has porridge in the morning......"

Wakazakura said, "I said that the porridge nearby is expensive and unpalatable, so it is better to cook it yourself in the morning, and it just so happens that I also like to eat porridge, so I brought him to buy cooking utensils." Do you want to be a partner?"

"Okay. Liu Kewei happily interfaced.

The fat man pouted, "It's no problem to partner up, the question is who gets up in the morning to cook porridge? ”

The three men, you look at me, I look at you for a long time, and then shake their heads together to indicate that they don't want to get up early.

"I wake up early. Wakazakura looked at the expressions of the three of them, shook her head helplessly, and said, "I'm in charge of cooking porridge, but you have to take turns cleaning up the pots and dishes!"

"No problem. The three replied in unison.

So the four of them went to the easy to buy supermarket, but it was not far, and it was only a few minutes away.

It's a large supermarket with a lot of space inside, and it took four people a long time to buy all the supplies they needed.

Everyone was carrying large bags and small bags, and they felt a little tired as soon as they left the supermarket.

"Find a place to sit and have a drink. Che Guanglong proposed.

Wakazakura turned her head to look around, pointed to a nearby restaurant and said, "Go to Pizza Hut?"

"Poof", Liu Kewei said with a smile, "Just finished dinner, you want to eat pizza again?"

"Pizza Hut also has a lot of drinks, okay?" Wakazakura glared at Liu Kewei.

The fat man scratched his head, he hadn't been to Pizza Hut, and he didn't know what was sold inside, so he followed the other three into the store all the time.

"Welcome to Pizza Hut!"

"Welcome to Pizza Hut!"

……

As soon as they entered the door, the restaurant attendants who passed by nodded and smiled at them.

"This is a foreign company, right?" the fat man asked Liu Kewei, "It feels a bit similar to KFC McDonald's." ”

Liu Kewei sneered again: "Yum Catering's and KFC are brothers. ”

The four of them found an empty table and sat down, and Che Guanglong raised his hand to greet the waiter.

A young woman in a restaurant overalls approached.

"Hello, what do you need?" the girl bowed slightly, her voice soft but nice.

The fat man subconsciously looked up.

The simple ponytail, the dignified face, and the slender and slender figure may not be eye-catching in every detail of the appearance, but when combined, it makes people feel that there is almost no flaw to pick out.

Especially when she smiles at you kindly......

The fat man's appreciative gaze stayed on the girl's face for a long time.

Needless to say, no need to do anything, even just staring at her quietly like this, the mood can be cheerful and happy, this feeling...... How long has it been since you experienced this feeling that you haven't experienced for a long time?

I think it was fifteen years ago......

The fat man thought that the memories he had forgotten slowly became clear little by little, yes, in his third year of high school, he experienced this kind of "just staring at her, you can feel the sweet happiness that fills your heart".

The girl bends down and notes the type of drink at the table.

Liu Kewei handed the menu to the fat man, who glanced at it and said casually, "Please give me a glass of iced cappuccino." ”

The girl's side face is perfect, with fine black sideburns behind delicate ears, delicate eyebrows, and a straight nose bridge......

As if feeling the fat man's substantial gaze, the girl's face flushed, starting from the earlobe, and the flush quickly spread all over her face, and she gently lowered her head to avoid her gaze.

At this moment, the fat man was sure that his heart was throbbing strongly.