The war is rampant, and the people who write novels have the smallest eyes, and the names of some enemies in their lives are all written on paper and printed in their hearts. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

This is a common way of naming in the author's circle, and it is estimated that Lin Mu is also like this, but after seeing "Water Margin", he felt that he might have thought badly, because there didn't seem to be any suspicious names in the book.

There is not much to say in "Lu Ti's Fist Fighting the Town of Guanxi", a Zheng Tu who killed pigs and sold meat, did not even have a name, although the three punches were depicted, and the description almost became a textbook-like narrative technique, but after all, it was written on the bright side, and what made the rampant military disasters fascinating, but the description in the eighth episode of "Water Margin".

It was the plot of the wild boar forest, after Lu Zhishen appeared to save Lin Chong, the four of them went to a tavern together, and then there was a description:

"I ate some wine and meat, packed my luggage, returned the wine money, and left the village store. Lin Chong asked, 'Senior brother, where are you going to go today?'"

This passage doesn't seem to be abnormal, but after reading it in the context of the text, it obviously feels a little "water", the first seven times, no matter how twisty the plot is, it can also be clicked, from Shi Jin to Lu Zhishen, which wine will talk about these things of "eating wine and meat, packing luggage, paying for wine, and leaving the village store", don't you explain it in a word?

Thinking about Lin Mu's previous words that "people's hearts determine the plot", I couldn't help but sigh when I read this text again.

"Where is this text from the author's point of view? It is clear that the line of sight is invisibly substituted on Lin Chong!

Sent as a prisoner, even if he has just escaped from the ghost gate, even if he has the ability to do it, when he is injured in his feet and weakened, how can he not be afraid?

His new brother came to save himself, although he treated each other sincerely and treated each other as brothers, but he was not like this to Lu Qian at the beginning, and now Lu Zhishen can rush to save himself, which has made him feel endlessly grateful, but he can't help but worry about his future fate.

If the other party leaves, according to the temperament of these two dukes, he will inevitably kill himself, and it is easy for Lu Zhishen to kill these two dukes, but in his own life, he will really become a sinner!

Something in my heart, "eating wine and meat, packing luggage, paying back the wine money, and leaving the village store" are things that I don't care about on weekdays, but it's incomparably long, and every moment seems like a year?

The words 'Senior brother, where are you going today?' seems to be an understatement, but in fact, it has expressed the complex thoughts in Lin Chong's heart vividly, and it is almost amazing!"

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seems to have discovered a new continent, even when I first saw "Shooting the Condor", "Condor", and even "Journey to the West", the war was rampant and did not read the text so carefully, and sometimes combined with the previous text, take out those paragraphs that did not start and play with them, and sometimes a small paragraph of text can be read for a long time.

No way, recently some scholars have updated and commented on the article of "Water Margin" at the same time, there is a detail, specifically mentioning the sharp knife that Lin Chong carried with him before "Fengxue Mountain Temple", because many readers are very strange, and in the end, after killing three people, Lin Chong actually took out a knife with him, wondering when Lin Chong had a knife, similar to Ren Yingying at the beginning.

All kinds of martial arts novels, whether it is a few written by Lin Mu, or Li Xiaoliang and Xiao Xuan, the most eye-catching thing is the atmosphere that is described, an atmosphere like in a smoke and rain painting.

And "Journey to the West" is more about the magnificent plot, and there are subtleties, such as the poetry description of the spider spirit, which is very emotional, but when it comes to specific dialogues and stories, the rampant military disasters always feel a little unrealistic.

Here's an example.

For example, if you are Bajie, Tang Seng asked about the scene of fighting and killing monsters, how would a normal person answer?

At most, it is three sentences or two sentences, answering the big wins and losses and critical points, but when these narratives are mentioned in the novel, the degree of "flooding" is simply scary, just looking at that paragraph, the reader can even know how the two sides fought before, just like the author's detailed outline, and sometimes can't help but scan it at a glance.

And here in "Water Margin", the subtle descriptions are always targeted, and combined with the situation, people can always find the magic of the unexpected.

If I have to sum it up, I feel that these hidden things are more like a top storyteller talking about a subtlety, and the twisted charm in the tone can always make people have endless aftertaste.

He even thinks that if an online writer can subtly ponder "Water Margin" twice, it must be a great inspiration in the plot conception!

But the only drawback, it seems that there are almost too many swear words in it, and they are all market slang, which is nothing in the old language, but if translated into modern words......

"You birdman!", the war is rampant, and in some places, the word "bird" is pronounced "diao......

This is just pediatrics, and when he mentioned this issue himself, Lin Mu showed him the next chapter of the manuscript, which made him cover his face and almost couldn't believe it.

In "Thunder Strikes Bai Xiuying", scolding is very spiritual.

Bai Xiuying: "Old biting insects! Beggar poor woman! How dare a slut scold me!"

Lei Mu: "You thousands of people ride thousands of people to crush people into cheap mothers and dogs! What are you doing to scold me!"

When the military disaster was rampant and saw this paragraph, he almost died of laughter, and what he saw and heard when he was collecting wind in the countryside in the old days came to his heart in an instant, this is a classic in women's scolding, and he has heard it even more excessively.

It was a middle-aged man scolding all over the village, scolding the guy who stole his chicken, this kind of thing would have been difficult to find the main owner, but if you heard his scolding, it is estimated that if you are a little bloody, you will have to rush out and fight back.

"You MLGB stealing, Lao Tzu steals it for you! Steal it back and let your mother make up for it, I'll her tonight! Let her wash 13 clean! Save the foam when you get it is black......"

Such a tragic scolding, how many years after the military disaster was rampant, I still choked with laughter, and then looked at these playful scolding sentences in "Water Margin", I felt very kind, and I understood that the scolding of the peasants in ancient times was really nothing good, and a word could make people and three corpses angry.

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He thinks so, and others don't!

In his previous life, Han Han once gave an example, in order to prevent his children from being polluted by the swear words in "Water Margin", a parent once manually blocked all kinds of scolding words in it, especially "Birdman", but "it is not an overnight thing to exterminate a species, so there will occasionally be two birds that slip through the net"......

After a few years, especially after Lin Mu settled in, the "Legend" magazine has completely become the hegemonic existence in the martial arts magazine industry, leaving the magazines founded by several famous artists far behind, and now when online novels are popular, it is still very strong to support the banner of physical martial arts serialization.

And its readers, also from the original "story meeting" period of the working class, to include "students, salary, white, gold-collar workplaces" and other people interested in martial arts, and even Lin Mu also heard that there are several foreign magazines, are secretly translating foreign language piracy, every time the whole novel is published, almost can attract millions of martial arts fans to order, is the best platform for the author of the novel to become a god.

Such a crowd, not to mention students, even teachers, there are many people watching.

Especially in the first high school in Shuizhen, not to mention anything else, all the students who have some gossip hearts know that their own principal goes to see "Water Margin" for the first time every time, and after holding a routine summary meeting for all school staff on Sunday night, they will rush to the newsstand outside the school to buy magazines from the boss that arrived the night earlier.

Even when "Water Margin" began to be serialized, when he was inspecting the school room, he found that a boy in the back row took advantage of the Chinese class to peek at "Water Margin".

According to the news from the trail, when the boy's homeroom teacher went to test Lu Anchang, he was shocked by Lu Yiping's sentence "Just look at it, if Yigao can publish another page of the book, it will also be a matter of thousands of requests...... speechless.

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It's just that the mood of the uneven road in the past two days is not very good.

When the bell rang for the morning class, all the classrooms fell silent, and Lu Buping walked lightly to the flagpole in front of the school building, where there was a basket chair.

This is his special seat, and his favorite thing in the past 20 years is to sit on this chair and watch and listen to the countless classrooms in front of him.

But I don't know when, the manuscript in front of my case has been filled with countless names of "one-page book".

Watching this naughty student in the past, step by step grow to the current status, turning over his hands, an ordinary small township that can't see the hope of development, just like this, countless building materials army, a piece of industry has sprung up, in the eyes of Lu Buping, this thing that cannot happen in a dream, happened in front of his eyes!

In the past, he felt that the biggest future in a place like Shuizhen was that there were a few more students from Qinghua Jingda in his hands, and he had always felt that he was shouldering a heavy responsibility and never dared to relax.

And at some point, there are many more smiles on the faces of the students on campus, and some students who are so skinny that they can't say that the unique "twisting" of young people in their demeanor is also much soothed, and Lu Buping knows that these are all because the parents of the students come back and often meet with the students in their hometowns, which is in strong contrast with the introverted and indifferent demeanor of other left-behind children.

For the first time in his life, Lu Buping felt that he was wrong, every time he thought of the students he sent out of the campus, I don't know why, I always felt that I had neglected them too much?

If they could be as tolerant and patient with them as they were with Lin Mu at the beginning, would their current fate be different?

After a pause, Lu Buping shook his head and looked at the "Legend" he had just watched a small part of.

He really wants to see that in this magazine, the novels of teachers and students in his school can appear again, just like the first time he saw the name of "one-page book" in "Martial Arts Story" a few years ago, but the reality is always disappointing.

In the section of "Lu Ti Zhi Punches the Town of Kansai", Lu Buping watched it three times.

When it came to the chapter of "Fengxue Mountain Temple", he read it seven or eight times, and he even deliberately checked a lot of materials from the Song Dynasty to assist in reading.

"This paragraph should be in a high school textbook!"

Lu Buping felt that even those classic ancient texts hundreds or thousands of years ago did not necessarily seem to necessarily outperform these essential chapters in "Water Margin", if the chapters of "Water Margin" appeared in textbooks, he felt that those students who like to take advantage of Chinese classes to read idle books will definitely not be like now.

On his shoulder, he was suddenly pressed by a pair of light arms, and before he could react, his granddaughter's familiar voice came: "Hehe, I will enter the high school textbook next year! Grandpa will be praised by the higher education bureau again, and I will ask for half of the gift!"

The sense of accomplishment in his heart surged up all of a sudden, the more Lu Buping looked at his granddaughter, the more he liked it, and handed Lu Yifei the apple he gave to the head of the third year of high school, and watched her eat like a hamster there, and he was very happy.

Lu Yifei ate an apple and said with a smile: "I also have a few friends in the education circle, grandpa, don't laugh, when the time comes, there will be such a guy as 'one-page book' in the school, and even his name will appear in the textbook, and you will have to have a few more on the wall with honorary awards! Hmph, I helped you two ease the relationship in the first place! What about the reward? Hand it over!"

Just like when she was a child, the money in her pocket was robbed by Lu Yifei every time, and Lu Buping didn't know how much she was nagged by her daughter-in-law because she didn't eat and ate snacks.

Now it's different, the little girls at the beginning have become the big girls who are in the spotlight and infinitely glorious, just looking at the window of the senior high school classroom, countless girls who envy and yearn to look at Lu Yifei, Lu Buping knows the status of his granddaughter in the hearts of these students.

Thinking of this, Lu Buping couldn't help but ask again: "How are you and Xiaolin doing now? Both are at home, didn't you go to play with him two days ago?

For Lin Mu, Lu Buping really has nothing to say, no matter how critical he is, he also hopes that his granddaughter will have such a grandson-in-law.

Lu Yifei's face turned red all of a sudden, and his mouth was full of small tender teeth like broken jade.

"Don't say it! That guy is about to become an Internet addict now! Grandpa, you can help me hit his palm!"