Ping" said...... How do you feel that Kohei Chuang's real character design is a bit similar to me?"

Xia You thought a little strangely, and then he stared at it for a while, thinking that he was still thinking too much, probably a coincidence, so he shook his head and didn't pay attention to it, and continued to read the original manuscript.

Since this manuscript is only the first sentence and does not say much content, Xia You mainly focuses on the painting of characters and storyboards.

After reading the whole story, on the whole, he has to say that Sawamura Eiri Ri is really good at painting, the characters are clear, the storyboard is mature, and her painting style is also very similar to the "Spirit of the Halberd" in her previous life, they are all very meaty and social security types.

In this regard, Xia You was not surprised, but it was because he knew about it that he chose to tell Sawamura Eiri about "The Spirit of the Halberd" instead of other comics.

Like Sawamura Eiri Riri, the author of "The Spirit of the Halberd" in his previous life, Saeki Jun, is also a book painter, with the pen name Tosh. He waited until he drew "The Spirit of the Halberd" before he officially went ashore and became a cartoonist in the watch world.

Speaking of which, I have to mention that "Spirit of the Halberd" was able to become popular enough to release three consecutive seasons of animation when the plot was not very exciting, largely thanks to Saeki Jun's superb painting skills.

It is his very fleshy painting style that has attracted the support of many readers and has become a major feature, and even the protagonist has been given the title of 'King of Medicine'.

In terms of painting skills, Xia You believes that Sawamura Eiri is not inferior to Saeki Jun at all, and even better than him.

In terms of popularity and the number of readers, Eiri Kashiwagi also exploded tosh...... Even though the two of them are not in the same world.

"How do you feel? ”

Seeing that Xia You slowly put down the original manuscript in his hand, and it seemed that he had finished reading it, Sawamura Eiri Li immediately couldn't help but ask.

Her tone was slightly nervous, her little face was slightly uneasy, in order to draw this original manuscript Sawamura Eiri took a lot of effort, if she couldn't get Xia You's approval, she didn't have to think about it to know, it would definitely be very devastating.

"Nice drawing. Xia You nodded.

"Really?"

In an instant, Sawamura Yingli was overjoyed, and her blue eyes lit up with a hint of brilliance, like a natural sapphire, dazzling.

"Of course it's true, you have a great drawing. Xia You said with a smile, after reading this manuscript, he knew very well how hard Sawamura Eiri worked hard, so he didn't mind encouraging this Nizi more, so that she could add more confidence.

"To be honest, I was quite surprised, I didn't expect you to be able to complete an original manuscript in such a short time. He raised an eyebrow, then quipped, as if remembering something, "Didn't you always like to procrastinate before, why are you so diligent this time?"

"Uh......"

When Sawamura Eiri heard this, her cheeks were slightly red, and her habit of procrastination was poked to make her slightly embarrassed.

If the person in front of her was changed to Kasumigaoka Shiyu, she would probably immediately jump up and spray her in shame, but it was Xia You in front of her, which made Sawamura Eiri unable to refute it, so she could only explain weakly: "Because there is more inspiration this time, I started writing quickly." ”

"That's right. ”

Xia You smiled, and didn't tease Ying Li too much, although he thought it was interesting to tease Tsundere Pear, but it was still important to talk about business.

"In terms of the storyboard and character design of "The Spirit of the Halberd", I think it is good for you to draw it like this, which can not only give full play to your advantages, but also attract many readers. ”

"As for the plot, because it's just the first episode, I can't see anything, and the focus is on the next plot...... In short, you need to grasp the rhythm better, because only in this way can you maintain the popularity of the work without being cut in half. Xia You said seriously.

"So how do I get the rhythm right? I don't know much about that. Sawamura asked honestly.

Xia You thought for a while and said, "Hmm...... For example, the male protagonist, as a transfer student, spoke at the entrance ceremony of the new semester, saying that he was going to become the first place in Yuanyue Academy, which caused a lot of people to be unhappy, and all kinds of obstacles were added to him in the next college life. ”

"Isn't that going to make the reader think that the protagonist is being bullied?" said Sawamura Eiriri.

"yes, so you're going to have to get a good grasp of it. Xia You said, "And the most important thing is that after adding blockage, you must let the male protagonist slap his face!"

"A slap in the face?"

Sawamura Eiri was confused, unlike the Celestial Empire, which is rich in routines, although there are many routines in Japan that pretend to be forced to slap the face, but no one has put forward this concept, so she doesn't understand the word very well.

“Emmm…… It's almost the same as 'pretending'. ”

To be honest, it's really a bit subtle to explain this to a girl, Xia You scratched his head and thought about it.

"Anyway...... No matter how others add blockage and how bad the situation is, the male protagonist can solve it smoothly in the end, and attract the admiration and appreciation of the heroine/decency, as for those who add blockage, they will naturally suffer the consequences. ”

"It seems to understand and it doesn't seem to understand. ”

Sawamura Eiri tilted her head and said a little distressed.

Seeing this, Xia You simply said: "If you don't understand, then wait a little later, I'll compile a similar outline for your reference." ”

"Really?" Sawamura Eiri was immediately pleasantly surprised.

"Absolutely. ”

Xia You shrugged his shoulders, just sorting out a routine of pretending to be forced to slap his face, which was no pressure at all for him who had seen many networks in his previous life.

However, he will not directly substitute the routine into "The Spirit of the Halberd", but will have to be sorted out by Sawamura Eiri herself, only in this way can she improve her plot creation ability.

"By the way......" Xia You suddenly remembered something, and said with a smile, "Ying Lili, since you have already drawn the first word, why don't you try to participate in the newcomer award in October?"

"What newcomer reward?"

Sawamura Eiri was confused when she heard it.

At this time, Shiina Mashiro, who had been painting quietly on the side, also raised his head when he heard the sound, and looked over with indifferent phoenix eyes.

"It's next month that the Talk Society will hold a comic newcomer award.,And the requirements for the participants are not high.,As long as you prepare the first three comics, you can submit.。 ”

Xia You explained, and then subconsciously looked at Shiina Mashiro on the side, and saw that she was looking silently, and couldn't help but smile and rub her hair, like rubbing a kitten.

In addition, Mashiro will also participate in this rookie award. ”

Shiina Mashiro feels weird.

Obviously, when she listened to the two of them silently just now, she still felt very irritable in her chest, but after being rubbed by Xia You's hair so indiscriminately, she disappeared immediately.

Instead, there was a burst of warmth, like drinking the hot milk that Xia You handed her last night.

"Ah, that's the time......"

Sawamura Eiri suddenly realized, in fact, she had already participated in Kodansha's manga newcomer award, after all, the latter is one of the three major manga publishing houses in Japan, and she dreamed of debuting as a manga artist, so how could she not have drafted it, but it was all last year and the year before that......

Well, the result goes without saying that the manuscripts she submitted at that time were all returned.

"That's... That's okay, since Mahaku participated, then I'll participate too!" Sawamura Eiri clenched her small fists.

To be honest, as the little princess of the Sawamura family and the top painter in the industry, how can she feel willing to be rejected for several consecutive years.

This time, it relies on "The Spirit of the Halberd". Let the people at the publishing house see how powerful she is!

Hum!

Ah, Sawamura Eiri suddenly understood a little, what Xia You meant by 'slapping her face' just now.

"Well, I'll send you the contact information of one of Kodansha's editors when I get back to me. Xia You said, "She is the editor in charge of Zhenbai, and I have also seen people who are very good, so you can ask her about any submission." ”

If both Yingli and Mashiro are selected for the newcomer award at the same time, then they will have companionship in the future, not only can they discuss and learn from each other, but they can also work hard together when they meet the deadline or something.

Seeing that the time was already past five o'clock, Xia You stood up from the sofa with his knees propped up.

"It's almost time to make dinner. He spread his hands over the two of them, "Because the ingredients were almost used in last night's meal, so don't expect me to make something too delicious." ”

"Then eat Baumkuchen. Shiina Mashiro immediately said, "Baumkuchen is the best thing in the world." ”

"Rejected. ”

"Then eat pineapple buns. Pineapple buns are the second best ...... in the world"

"The same dismissal. ”

"Brother, you bully people. ”

"I didn't. ”

Xia You ignored her, and even if she had breakfast, how could anyone eat Baumkuchen cakes or pineapple buns for dinner.

Moreover, including the piece of cake on the way to and from school, Shiina Mashiro has already eaten three full pieces of Baumkuchen today, and if you eat more, you will have tooth decay.

"Brother, you bully people. Shiina Mashiro said it again.

"Okay, since you say so, then I'll really bully you. ”

After finishing speaking, Xia You's eyes showed a fierce light, his hands on Shiina Mashiro's cheeks, and then like kneading dough, he wantonly kneaded her soft face, and he was addicted to it.

His face was rubbed so that Shiina Mashiro couldn't even speak clearly.

"Brother, you bully me......"

"That, Xia Jun, I'll help with the cooking. Sawamura Eiri suddenly raised her hand and said.

"Huh?" When Xia Yu heard this, his hand rubbing Shiina Mabai's face couldn't help but stop, and Oki Zemura Eiri smiled and said, "No need, I can do it alone." ”

"Besides, don't you know how to cook?" he asked curiously.

"Well, I just won't, that's why I want to watch and learn......"

Sawamura Eiri said embarrassedly, her face was ashamed, and she remembered that last night when the two girls of Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Black Cat sprayed each other, she was shot several times while lying down, and was classified as an incompetent high school student who can't cook......

"Can't you? Xia Jun. She asked hesitantly.

"It's not impossible...... Xia You scratched his cheeks, and then smiled, "Since you want to help, then come." ”