Closing remarks
Whew,The story of the Lori cultivation plan has finally come to an end.,To be honest,This book started to be written at the beginning of this year because of a momentary inspiration.,Written in one breath to the end of the year.,Unconsciously,It's been a year.。
Speaking of which, I have written three endings to this story, the first ending of Jiaqi died at the age of 12, the second ending is the fake ending of volume 11, and the last ending is the final family of volume 12. If I have to say which ending I personally prefer, I personally think that the ending of 12 and 21 is similar. It's a pity that the ending of the 21-year-old was rushed out after it was done, and there was no polish in many places, so the tear-jerking effect was a little worse than I thought, and I think I would definitely revise it if I have the opportunity (laughs).
Yesterday I opened a poll post to ask about the ending, in fact, I just wanted to make a joke with everyone, and the ending was actually thought of a long time ago, it was a comedy. Of course, it's not a pure comedy, and it's still a little twisty and twisty in it. I think the last seven brides is the biggest climax of the book, because the order in which the protagonist chooses seven brides corresponds to the order in which the protagonist meets these seven brides (except for Zhang Jiaqi). Although they didn't end up with the protagonist, at least they wore a wedding dress for the protagonist once, which I think is pretty good. In the end, Jiaqi said the phrase "I will always be your little Lori", and I think she is as great as the protagonist. She has paid no less than the protagonist.
This book started in January, and now it's December, after 11 months, almost a year, and looking back now, I really feel a lot of emotion. The name of this story at the beginning was "My Lori Cultivation Plan", but because of the failure of the review, Motie had no choice but to change it to "Pick Up a Lori as a Wife". Actually, I don't like the title, because many readers use it as an excuse to press me for the comedic ending.
This always has a sense of anticipation, which makes people feel uncomfortable.
This story has a total of 12 volumes.,Except for the 11 volumes that are side chapters.,It's actually 11 volumes.,With the sixth volume as the watershed.,This story can be divided into [Lori Chapter] and [Girl Chapter], that is, the first and second parts.
Actually, when I first wrote this story, I didn't expect to write it for so long. When I wrote this story, I didn't have any outline at all, and I just followed my own temperament and put whatever stories in my life into the novel. Of course, I also have an unwritten goal of having three heroines in both the first and second films. Now judging by the ending, it can barely be regarded as such. The first part has Qian Lulu, Ma Yike and Tang Mengyan, and the second part has Yuhui, Yuezi and Jasmine, and in general it is very even.
Compared with the first part, the second part is faster because of the grinding iron, so the speed is faster, in terms of quality, I feel that it is a little lower than the first part, of course, there are a lot of plots that still exceed the first part, the first part I personally like is the rain farewell, the death of his father, Ma Yike's life experience, Tang Mengyan and the protagonist's love, the story of Jiaqi's illness, and the rain farewell, the death of his father, Tang Mengyan's departure, Jiaqi's serious illness is a heavy tear gas. Many readers were moved to tears, and I think everyone was very impressed with the first part. The first part is perfect. And the second part, I am personally satisfied with the plot that Yuezi is my sister, the sentence "next time we will go to the bookstall together" when Yuhui finally left the protagonist, Jasmine's life experience, Jiaqi's two runaways, these are what I like. In general, the second part does not have to make people cry less than the first part, the parting of the confinement, Yuhui's rejection, Jiaqi's running away from home, Jasmine's sending, and the final protagonist and Jiaqi telling the past in the alley, are all blockbuster tear gas.
If you want to say that the only regret is that there are some places to catch up with the plot after the second part is polished, so sometimes there is a lack of polish to the plot, so some readers are difficult to be impressed, and sometimes I try my best to do it, but I am not very satisfied with the results myself. I think if the story is ever published, I'll definitely revise the clips.
In general, the style of this novel is sadistic.,But the last chapter I want to subvert the sadistic atmosphere of the first ten or so volumes.,When I wrote this chapter, I thought.,No matter what, I can't be sadistic anymore.,But,I have to surprise everyone to the end.,So there was a farce of seven brides.,There's also a plot of fake escape.,I don't know if you feel after watching it.,But when that scene is in my mind.,I still think it's quite interesting.。
The biggest essence of this book is Jiaqi's sentence
"I'm not leaving, papa. I will always be by your side. I'll always be your little Lori. ”
I think that sentence is enough to say it all.
Some people will say that the protagonist and Jiaqi are not in love, but I wrote this book to find the factors that can make men and women stay together until they grow old in addition to love, relatives, kindness, good memories, love, responsibility...... The combined power of these factors far exceeds that of love. This is also the reason why Jiaqi chose the protagonist in the end.
Throughout the book, my favorite character is actually Blue Moon.
Because the thoughts I want to express are all expressed through this wise master, as for why this master is so good, I will slowly reveal it in the follow-up.
Before the finale, I kept posting against readers who wanted the protagonist to be with Jiaqi, and supported Jiaqi and Ma Bailong together, in fact, I deliberately made it to surprise everyone at the end, after all, it feels wonderful to climb from despair to hope.
After the ending, I will write some follow-up stories one after another, all of which are fragmentary independent pages, telling the story of the protagonist and Jiaqi after they got married, because I have read a lot of novels, and they all come to an abrupt end when the hero and heroine get married, I think it's too boring, no matter what, I can't take that old path, so, I will definitely write a few more articles, explain the characters clearly, and give everyone and myself a satisfactory answer.
The time of subsequent updates is uncertain, and I will write when I have time. Everyone should come and see it from time to time, maybe there will be ~~~
Okay,It's been explained too.,The story of Lori's cultivation is slowly coming to an end.,At least no one has any regrets, right?
The appearance of the last seven brides on the same stage has reversed the sad mood of the whole book in one fell swoop, and everyone wants to see the characters appear, which is really happy.
My new book "Beauty World" has been released for several days.,This book is even more popular than Lori.,If you like my style and writing, please don't miss it.,It's a very wonderful book~~.
If you like Lori, don't feel lost.,I'll write a follow-up story when I have time.,It's still from the perspective of the protagonist.,Until the protagonist gets married and has children.,Take care of offspring.,And the emotional fate of other female characters...... I'll explain everything.
Maybe the ending of the follow-up story is the real finale of the book.
At the end of the follow-up story, there will be new characters, such as Blue Moon, Zhu Qingyun and other mysterious big names will appear, and there will be characters in my new story.
That new story is a saga that I plan to write with my life, and I haven't written it yet, but I've been preparing it for more than a decade, and I think it will be earth-shattering if I do. Blue Moon, Zhu Qingyun...... They are all one of the main characters in that story.