In fact, long before coming to Sawamura's house to discuss with Ying Lili, Xia You already had a preliminary idea of what book to draw with her. Pen fun and pavilion www.biquge.info

Now after knowing that she is not good at conceiving the plot, he has made up his mind, and the book he wants to draw is called-

The male thing of the Sakiko family.

The author of this book is a very famous JIN teacher in the book world in the previous life.。

In the previous life, the shortcoming of most of the workman's books was that they were too functional, and the juice filled the whole picture.

And the book produced by Mr. JIN,But it has an extremely clean picture.。

The texture of the characters' skin is unbelievable, and few artists can express this feeling in a comic, almost like drawing a color picture and then converting it to black and white.

Mr. JIN's painting method is like a clear stream, so that even if the follow-up plot of the orange family is very dirty, it still gives people a small and fresh feeling.

In addition, although he does not have a good grasp of the proportions of the faces and bodies of female figures, he is somewhat unstable.

That is, everyone is painted to look a little like the same face, and the breasts are all scary.

But the female curves in his pen are still very natural, and the intellectual femininity is perfect, even if the proportions of the breasts are abnormal, but it can still make people want to look at it.

And JNI's painting style is initially revealed in the male affairs of the Sakiko family, which can be regarded as his famous work.

Subsequently, this painting method was further refined in his original work Tachibana Family, and thus became a god in one fell swoop.

In the previous life, anyone who knew a little bit about the sub-world should have heard of NTR's representative masterpiece - the orange family's family affairs.

And that's what Mr. Jin did.

In this work, Mr. Jin, who is already good at starting from a female perspective and telling the story of NTR, has given full play to his strengths, making many readers unable to extricate themselves from the quagmire of NTR.

And the orange family, therefore, was rumored to be a masterpiece in the sub-world, and was worshiped by the majority of readers, and endured.

Some people may think that the practicality of the NTR book is not high, but this, you are wrong!

Among the many categories of books,Speaking of practicality,NTR is the best.。

Of course, this is based on the situation of substituting the perspective of Huang Mao, and I will find NTR very interesting.

After all, no one wants to experience the feelings of the bitter master.

But if someone takes the perspective of the bitter master.,If you also think the NTR book is very interesting.,Then Xia You just wants to say one word-Please be friends with me!

At first, he also looked for other works of Mr. Jin's after watching the Tachibana family first.

Including the Sakiko family, the Tosaka family or something, Xia You also made up for it after watching the Tachibana family.

As far as the evaluation after reading it is concerned, there is no doubt that except for the Tosaka family, who can't be painted because there is no Shigetsu work here, the level of the Tachibana family is much higher than that of the Sakiko family.

But why did Xia You decide to paint the latter?

There's a reason for that.

Compared to the Sakiko family, the plot of the Tachibana family is much longer, and it can be roughly divided into two parts.

The first part mainly tells the story of pure love between the bitter master and his three harems.

In the second part, the style of painting changed, and the yellow hairs began to intervene in the development of the plot, and used the next means to force the three heroines, thus opening the follow-up NTR story.

And the reason why the orange family was canonized is because of the plot of the second part, the essence of its book.

As for the first part, in fact, as early as the early days of release, it was not favored by readers, and they all felt that they had bought it wrong.

Many people say that it is impossible for my JIN teacher to draw pure love stories!

It turns out that Mr. JIN really doesn't know how to draw pure love stories, how pure love is in the first part, and the second part has to be doubled back.

It is also by virtue of this contrast that when the second part of the orange family went on sale, it set a doujinshi sales record for that Comic, and Mr. JIN was also a god because of it.

But having said that, the pure love development of the first part of the orange family is still worth criticizing.

Because it's so long. Even if it is said to be a foreshadowing, this foreshadowing will inevitably be laid for too long.

And this is also the main reason why Xia You did not choose to paint oranges.

Because,The picture and text of the workmouth book and the length of the length,In fact, there is an optimal ratio.。

After exceeding this ratio too much,The usefulness of the book will decrease.。 To put it bluntly, the plot has not developed to the climax, but the reader has climaxed.

Or maybe you don't start to feel it until the plot is over.

And there's also a question of style.

Some books with a poor painting style,The reader needs more time to feel it.,But the orange family has a good painting style.,So it feels relatively fast.,So the reader hasn't finished reading it.。

From this point of view, the Sakiko family is far better than the orange family, and it is not an exaggeration to call it the golden ratio.

Among them, a series of plots such as the description of the heroine's feelings, the bitter master who wants to love but dare not say it, and Huang Mao taking the opportunity to intervene are all very cleverly grasped.

On top of that, the Sakiko family is relatively small.

Natsuyu believes that with the drawing speed of him and Sawamura Eiriri, if they work together, they will definitely be in time before the start of the summer Comic manga.

So, Xia Yu simply told Sawamura Eiri about the general plot of Sakiko's house through oral description.

After listening, Sawamura Eiri raised her eyebrows slightly, a little surprised, "It turned out to be NTR's work?"

Xia You nodded and said, "Well, yes, but although it is NTR-oriented, it is actually mixed with a lot of insulting elements." ”

And this is one of the reasons why he chose to paint Sakiko's house.

Kashiwagi Eiri,That is, Sawamura Eiri pear has always been famous in the industry for being a brainless abuse book.。

In his previous life, in the books that Xia You had read, there were not many works like the Tachibana family and the Sakiko family that were rumored to be classics.

For example, in the industry, the "transformation" of Mr. Shindo, who is known as the god of quitting, or the "Mori" of Mr. Saru, etc., are all masterpieces.

But it's easy to be popular.,It's smaller.,At the same time, there are relatively few books that contain insulting elements.。

And the Sakiko family is one of them.

Drawing this work is in line with Eiri Sawamura's previous style, so that readers who like her work should not feel too disagreeable.

"How about it? Or do you want me to work in other styles?" asked Xia You.

Although he felt that the Sakiko family was very suitable, the final decision was still in the hands of Sawamura Eiriri.

If she didn't want to paint NTR-oriented works, she would have to choose other works.

"Well, I think it's pretty good, but-"

Sawamura Eiri looked up at Xia You slightly, and whispered a little unconfidently: "Can you really win against that guy by drawing like this?"

The guy she said didn't need to ask, and he knew that it was Po Island going to sea.

Listening to the storyline briefly described by Xia You just now, Sawamura Eiri felt that it was not particularly good, and it could only be said to be decent.

For the sake of the material,She's seen a lot of NTR-oriented books.,I feel that the plot that Xia You said is almost similar to those books.。

So Sawamura Eiri couldn't help but hesitate, not quite sure if this would really win the sea over Hajima.

You have to know that the book that went to sea on the island of Po Island.,Although it's not finished yet.,There are a lot of shortcomings.,But the story is already very good.。

In this regard, Xia You nodded confidently, "Of course!

The essence of NTR to the book,Mainly lies in its text dialogue,So as to highlight the occurrence of NTR plot,Bitter master、Heroine、The different psychology of the yellow hair。

As for the plot or something,,It's actually not very important.,I believe readers should be able to expect what will happen when they see the male protagonist being drawn very wasted and timid.。

And what Xia You is best at is writing words.

With his writing ability, on the basis of being familiar with the original works of his previous life, he will definitely be able to write even better!

Xia You believes that when he actually organizes the story of the book into a document and shows it to Sawamura Eiriri, the latter will definitely no longer doubt the potential of this book.

And Sawamura Yingli Li, looking at Xia You's confident appearance, the confidence in her heart is also a little more sufficient.

In fact, every girl is a little weak in her nature, and she will habitually want to rely on boys who are more powerful than herself.

It's just that An Yilun is too wasteful, and he doesn't understand a girl's heart at all, so when getting along with him, Sawamura Eiri will always involuntarily show a strong side and habitually refute him.

But when the subject is replaced by Xia You, who is not weaker than himself in all aspects, or even much stronger, Sawamura Eiri Ri can't help but want to listen to his opinion, and feels quite reliable.

Well, to put it simply, in the arrogant character of Sawamura Eiriri, compared to pride, the coquettish component has become more.

"Okay, then draw it according to what you said, Xia Jun. ”

"Hmm. The plot of the book、I've already conceived the character design.,I'll draw it for Ying Lili later.。 Xia You said with a smile.

"Huh, the character design was conceived so quickly?!" Sawamura Eiri was taken aback.

"yes. Xia You nodded.

Although it's very shameless to say, in the previous life, because he was always single and alone, the only thing that accompanied Xia You was a book or something.

Until the crossing, he was a virgin, oh no, still a virgin......

And Xia You has always hated playing bad plots, and JIN painted this kind of small and fresh work, which hit his good ball zone.

Like the Tachibana family, Sakiko's family, and the Tosaka family, Xia You has watched it many times.

Now that his memory has been strengthened, not to mention the storyboard, character design, and even the text, he remembers it quite clearly.

It's not hard to draw it.

"Ying Lili, if it's okay, then let's start painting now, right?" asked Xia You.

He's already a little eager to give it a try.

After coming to this world, although I've drawn the illustrations of RE0 and Sword Art Online before, I haven't tried to draw comics or anything.

Xia You really wants to see what kind of works he can create with his current level.

"Well, of course it's fine!" Sawamura Eriri nodded vigorously.

Now that the summer Comic is getting closer, she naturally hopes to start drawing as soon as possible.

As for the professional tools for drawing the book, they are all available in her room, very complete, Sawamura Eiri took most of them, put them on the table, and then started to draw them with Xia You.

The division of labor between the two is very clear.

Xia You first drew a character map, and then typed the plot story of Sakiko's family into a document.

And Sawamura Eiri followed his request and began to make sketches.

Sawamura Eiri thought that it would be a little embarrassing to draw a book in the same room as Xia You.

After all, there is a difference between men and women, and the two of them are not boyfriend and girlfriend.

But when she saw Xia You's pen drawing, her extremely focused look, she couldn't help but be annoyed with herself, feeling that Xia You, who came to help her for free, was so serious, and she was still thinking about something that she didn't have, which was really undeserved.

You should work harder and be more serious!

I can't be ashamed of Xia Jun's help!

Thinking about it, Sawamura Eiri pursed her lips, and she also became engrossed and began to draw in earnest.