But that guy didn't do that, but focused entirely on the characters, and in the whole story, there was no superfluous plot and superfluous characters, and it was completely the hero and heroine in dialogue. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo”

"Well, that's true. ”

After Sawamura Yingli said this, Xia You realized that that book was actually quite weird.

Ten to twenty pages, it stands to reason that I can draw a lot of plots.

However, the content of the book on the island of Po Island going to sea,It's just a dialogue between the hero and heroine.。

As the dialogue progresses, the scene keeps switching.

And then cooperate with dialogue、Storyboard,To build the background and story of the book。

It's a very clever narrative.

There are some similarities with Xia You's favorite light novel author in his previous life, Nishio Restoration.

It's hard to imagine that just the country's middle school born in Hadao went to sea and could complete such a work.

But—

"She has a lot of flaws, right?"

"Well, yes. ”

Sawamura Eriri nodded.

"First of all, the beginning of the book is unattractive. The overall story is very subtle and good, but if the beginning is not attractive, how can the reader read the whole story? Secondly, there are only heroes and heroines in the story, and they are not the official CP, and there are no other original characters on the scene, unless it happens to be cute, otherwise it is easy to lose the readers who may have been attracted. ”

After saying it in one breath, taking a slight breath, she continued:

"If you really want to attract attention, you have to start with the cover and the beginning. And the casting of the protagonist must also take into account popularity. ”

"That's true. Xia You shrugged.

It's a simple truth.

For example, if you want to draw a fanbook of a certain anime, choose one of the most popular characters as the protagonist of the book, which will naturally sell much better than choosing a character with low popularity.

"It's not hard to change, it just needs someone to teach her. The more Sawamura Eiri spoke, the lower her head became.

"Well,That's right.,If she has a partner who knows how to do a good job of the book.,And can give advice well.,Presumably——"

Xia You originally just said this sentence in passing, but unexpectedly, Sawamura Yingli took it.

"A painter like me will be driven by her all of a sudden, right?"

It was a casual self-deprecation, but it failed to maintain a casual attitude.

Sawamura Eiriri's tone revealed a feeling of defeat.

"This kind of thing, that guy Lun Ye must also know. I can't win against that woman. ”

"That's ......"

Xia You finally understood,Why Sawamura Eiri pear would resist the book of Po Island going to sea so much.。

Indeed, when you see a newcomer who has just started in the industry, but shows a talent that far exceeds their own, it must be difficult for most people to maintain their mental balance.

Not to mention, his childhood sweetheart still praised that person, and even asked her to read it well.

In this case, it is inevitable that Sawamura Eiri will go berserk.

I can only blame Lun Ye that guy is too low EQ. Xia You held his forehead slightly.

However, if that guy had a high emotional intelligence, he wouldn't have been as single as him.

It's really blind to have a childhood sweetheart with such a stable flag.

Shaking his head, Xia You began to think about how to solve the current situation.

It is absolutely impossible to tell An Yilun about Sawamura's mood and ask him to depreciate and go to sea, so as to encourage Sawamura or something.

You don't have to think about it to know, that guy is probably going to say - "The book that went to sea is really well drawn, how can I tell a lie" This line is absolutely single for 10,000 years.

Well, there's only one thing that can be done.

"No, you can win. ”

"Huh?"

Listening to Xia You's tone that suddenly became affirmative, Sawamura Yingli was stunned for a while, thinking that Xia You was comforting her, so she couldn't help lowering her eyes and laughing at herself.

"Well, yes, I can still win her now, but I'll be caught up soon. Absolute. ”

As a well-known artist who has been active in the industry for several years, Eiri Sawamura has a high level of professionalism.

She knows better than anyone else how much thought and how powerful the book of Po Island is to go to sea.

You know, she has worked hard for so many years to reach her current level, but Po Island has been in the industry for less than two months, and she has been able to complete this level of work independently.

To describe the genius of Po Island's talent in fan painting,Maybe it's a bit too simple.。

It's also because of this,Sawamura Eiri is even more unacceptable.,Accept the fact that your talent as a book painter is far inferior to the fact that Po Island goes to sea.。

It was very painful for her to say this kind of thing with self-deprecation.

However, Xia You's response was very affirmative-

"No, it won't be overtaken. ”

As he spoke, he looked at Hideri Sawamura and smiled confidently.

"I'll help you. Let's draw a book that she will never win!"

...

Home.

After eating the bento quickly, Xia You put the empty bento box into a plastic bag.

Along with the garbage sorted in advance, he walked out of the door directly, ready to go to Sawamura Eiriri's house.

Later in the evening, he told Eiri Sawamura to help her draw a notebook together, and then create a work that Hajima couldn't reach at sea.

This is no joke.

Of course, it's not a temporary idea.

As early as a long time ago, when I learned that Sawamura Eiri was a comic artist of the Gongkou book, Xia You had this idea - to collaborate with her to create *** paintings.

But at the time, it was just an expectation.

After all, he was not familiar with Sawamura Eiri at that time, and he couldn't even speak ten sentences.

Moreover, Sawamura Eiri is active in the industry under the name of Kashiwagi Eiri, and with her status in the industry, it is also a question of whether she is willing to cooperate with him.

So Xia You kept thinking about it.

Now, there is an opportunity.

It can not only realize his original vision, but also solve the current situation and cheer up Eiri Sawamura.

It's the best of both worlds.

Actually, how to say it, Natsuyu doesn't really understand that Sawamura Eiri is frustrated because of her excellent painting talent for going to sea on the island.

After all, she and Po Island can't be compared at all when they go to sea-

The category of the book、Popularity、And the current foothold is different.。

Even though Hajima has a good talent for going to sea, it is still difficult to get the same status as Hideri Sawamura in the industry.

She was able to get to this point, in addition to her talent and hard work, the background of the Sawamura family also played a big role.

Xia You heard An Yilun also say that Sawamura Eiri drew the book with Kashiwagi Eiri, but the actual operation of the book was all in charge of her parents.

Sawamura Eiri can mix well in the industry, which is inseparable from the support of her parents.

And if you go to sea on the island of Po Island without help, if you want to get out of the way, you will have to survive for at least a few years.

It's a given.

So for Sawamura Eiri to admit defeat so quickly, Xia You is still a little incomprehensible.

However, it's one thing to be hard to understand, and it's another thing to support her.

In any case, Sawamura Eiri is a member of the same society.

How can there be a reason to watch outsiders bully their peers.

Although Xia You doesn't hate going to sea on Bo Island, on the contrary, this school girl thinks it's pretty good, but she can only say sorry.

With his help, Xia You really doesn't believe that Sawamura Yingli will lose!