Chapter 169 of the text "Smiling Proud" is one of the top ten poisonous points

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"Tian Boguang Linghu Chong Sword Dispute, what is the metaphor?"

Legion Commander Wen Jing: "Some time ago, Mo Dao and a page of the book were torn badly, Mo Dao satirized that a page of the book was useless with a sword, and a page of the book replied with 'Eight Tips for Seeking Words', I don't know if you brothers still remember?"

"But in half a month, there was a plot of Tian Boguang and Ling Hu Chong fighting in "Smiling Proud Jianghu", is this a coincidence?"

"The wind and fast knife, the knife technique used by Tian Boguang, have you noticed that it is very similar to the Five Tigers Broken Door Knife in "Torture Knife"? They are all known for their speed and ferocity, and they are all exactly the same when they are thrown away from the gimmick of drinking knives with wine!"

"The ferocity of the Dugu Nine Swords, the domineering of the Five Tigers Broken Door Knife, the two seem to be competing like dragons and tigers, but they are really investigated. The Five Tiger Broken Door Knife is already dangerous everywhere......"

"Dugu Nine Swords, breaking through the world's martial arts, in this battle with Tian Boguang, the power is fully displayed. Tian Boguang, who was originally not weaker than Yu Canghai in terms of force, was directly defeated by Ling Hu Chong in three or two days of kung fu, and the book said that he would never be able to turn defeat into victory in this life!"

"Faced with this situation, I just want to know what Mo Dao will think in his heart. Because I really can't find any place to speak for him, the plot arrangement, the rigorous martial arts, and even the character image, I personally feel that "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is more than one level......"

DDD: "Indeed, it really looks serious, "Torture Knife" is really a little worse, I feel that the male protagonist is a bit murderous, and he is not as open-minded as the big brother. ”

His eyes were confused: "Open-minded? hehe, yes." Open-minded, the girl has been snatched away by others, if you don't open up, are you angry? A bunch of poisonous weeds!"

No matter how obvious the facts, there are different opinions, and this has become a common practice.

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The battle of the swords, and then open the second chapter.

Mo Dao looked at the magazine in his hand, alone in the study, sneering.

"What kind of garbage book? Poison spots are everywhere, and you still want to fight with "Torture Knife"?"

Clear-sightedness is very rare, and Modao's personal interests are threatened. I have long had a prejudice against "Smiling Proud Jianghu" in my heart, and the words in my eyes are naturally bad everywhere.

However, his current attitude towards "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is cold. I didn't post another blog post to deny it.

He ranked fourth, which can be like this, but the author who is about to be exploded by Lin Mu has no such thoughts.

"On the Ten Poisonous Points of Laughing and Proud Rivers and Lakes!"

On the Internet, it suddenly came out from the author Qingning Yichen, who ranked twentieth in sales.

Qing Ning Yichen: "The atmosphere in recent years, whether it is TV or movies. It's all shrouded in layers of impetuous atmosphere, but I never expected that even places like martial arts novels would emerge like this!"

"A friend told me about "Smiling Proud Jianghu", so I went to buy it, but I was very disappointed, such a novel with poisonous spots everywhere can also generate such sales?"

"The first poisonous point, destroy the door! Lin Ping's rich son, he forced himself to provoke the destruction of the door, what do you want to express in a page of the book?

"The second poisonous point, Qingcheng! What has become of the famous faction in your pen? From Yu Canghai to the disciples below, they have become a gang of rats and dogs! Since Qingcheng can become a famous faction, it is natural to act in the eyes of the world, and you write like this in a page of the book, have you asked the personnel of Qingcheng Mountain, and have you considered the feelings of the people of Sichuan? Indiscriminately insulting the famous mountains and rivers, this is your purpose?"

"The third poisonous point, Yilin! Buddhist monks and nuns who are pure and innocent, and who are dedicated to the Buddha, have become of what has become of you? I know that in recent years, many authors have begun to open up in this regard, but they use monks and nuns to describe love and sex, and it is filthy!"

"The fourth poisonous point, Tian Boguang! Yu Canghai, a famous faction, is a robber, and Tian Boguang, a flower thief, has become a gentleman who keeps his promises! What is Tian Boguang? Now he is a rapist! What is the bottom line of such a shameless character? And you describe such a character with sincerity in one page! There is no distinction between good and evil, this is your 'clear character'? Then this is clear, don't do it!"

"The fifth poisonous point, Qu Feiyan! This character is the granddaughter of the Demon Sect elder Qu Yang, and at the beginning of the book, she described it very well, but what about you on the page of the book, what happened to her? She was killed by Fei Bin, who represented the Songshan faction of the righteous path of martial arts, with a sword! A little girl, who was killed by the master of the righteous path, and also portrayed this righteous path master as ferocious and hideous, I don't know what to say, what do you want to express? The forces that represent the justice of the martial arts will only kill innocents indiscriminately?"

"The sixth poisonous point, Mr. Mo Da! Hehe, who is Fei Bin? The great Songyang hand of the Songshan faction! The martial arts are strong and the palm power is amazing! Such a master, when he is on the front, even if Mr. Mo Da's swordsmanship is weird, how can he kill it with one sword? A page of the book You want to express the strange speed of Hengshan's swordsmanship, but it is too much, and it will only make the real masters laugh!"

"The seventh poisonous point, Demon Sect Elder Fan Song! Hehe, the double axe opened the mountain and opened up dozens of zhang of mountain walls, it sounds very shocking, right? I'll just hehe, take the axe to cut the mountain, you can imagine it, the current sword craft is much stronger than in ancient times, you see who can cut the mountain out of the hole with an axe!"

"The eighth poisonous point, Yue Lingshan! The two of them admired each other before, Yue Lingshan was sincere to Linghu Chong, but after three or two sentences, Yue Lingshan changed her mind, a girl always has deep feelings for her first love, even if she empathizes with her first love, how can she change her mind in three or two days? You don't understand a woman's heart on a page of a book, so don't write the original innocent and lovely little junior sister into such a heartless image as now, okay? Just like before, you have to write beautiful things filthy to be comfortable, right?"

"The ninth poisonous point, the battle of sword qi! For this, I will take it! Return the battle of sword qi! For which word is in front, the sect fights, provoking the Huashan faction to be weak, I laughed. Here, I will only ask one question on one page of the book: Do the people of the Sword Sect not usually practice qi? Do the people of the Qi Sect just meditate and practice qi all day long? The truth that the two support each other is that even fools know that there are so many masters in the entire Huashan Sect, but none of them can see this truth? Are they idiots, or are you an idiot with a page of books?!"

"As for the tenth poisonous point, that is Dugu Jiujian! Hehe, many people say that Dugu Jiujian is powerful and true, but can there really be such exercises? Hehe, a person has limited vision, how can he know all the martial arts in the world?

"Okay, even if you can crack most of the martial arts, but why do you say on a page of the book that only Dugu Nine Swords have this kind of power?"

"A person who practices swords, can't break the world's sword tricks and create Dugu Nine Swords?"

"Are all the masters in the world dead? A reclusive wind blows all the masters in the world to death, and the masters in the world are all blowing soft rice!"

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