In an open-air coffee shop, Yoshida is frowning, flipping through the pages of Makoto Takahashi's manga manuscripts, while Makoto Takahashi is happily eating ice cream, completely heartless.

"Makoto Hashi, can you be serious?" Yoshida looked at Makoto Takahashi with a cold face, "Now we're not here to eat ice cream, we're here to discuss your new manga, understand?"

&&But if I don't eat dessert, my brain's ability to think will be reduced!" Makoto Takahashi looked unhappy, squatted on a chair with his legs curled, and began to play a game of building blocks with the candy cubes on the table, "Yagami-san, do you have any good advice for finding Kira?"

"It's because I have that notebook, and the first name on it must be Makoto Takahashi!" Yoshida complained, then put the manga manuscript on the table and began to elaborate, "First of all, let's talk about the construction of the story, I don't have anything to dislike about this!"

"Of course!" Makoto Takahashi took it for granted, "Do you see the name written in the author's name column?

&&'s so carried away, little ghost!" Yoshida's mouth twitched, "What a weird name is that!Forget it, what are you doing complaining about your name...... Now it's the comic manuscript that matters, the comic draft!"

& Do you have any questions about the manga draft?" Makoto Takahashi suddenly became serious, and this sudden change of personality made Yoshida very unhappy, "If there is a problem, you can just say it, and you will be innocent!"

& Yoshida took a long long breath several times, and began to apply the autosuggestion of 'I am an editor' to himself, and after calming down his emotions, he began to point out the problem with Makoto Takahashi's manga draft, "The problem is in the characters! Megumi Noda and Chiaki Shinichi, this is the protagonist of the manga, right? But in the second episode, the aura of the woman Osaki Nana is too strong, very eye-catching! This will give the reader the illusion that this woman is the heroine! And in a work, the relationship between the heroine and the male protagonist is the key to guiding the direction of the whole plot! But the outline you showed me before is not like this! What you wrote before, the main line is to portray the story of Megumi Noda trying to chase her dreams and love!"

"......" Makoto Takahashi was silent, as if he was looking at a rare animal again, and his eyes looked at Yoshida stunned, "My family is a cat, until this time, I found out that you are really not an idle person, you are worthy of being my family cat!"

"Is it a boast?" Yoshida couldn't help laughing, "Anyway, I have a question! Although you only drew the content of the first three episodes, but these first three episodes, what I saw was not one work, but two? The story of Megumi Noda and Chiaki Shinichi is mostly funny; but the story between Nana and Nana is very close to reality, and there is a sense of reality that happens around me! I have a feeling that these two works seem to have been forcibly adapted by you and fused together......

&&Amazing,It's really amazing.,My family belongs to the cat!" Makoto Takahashi praised from the bottom of his heart this time! Yoshida, the editor, is really powerful, just by reading the content of three episodes, he can see so many problems, and he is worthy of his reputation as the editor in charge!

&&Just from an editor's point of view!" Looking at Makoto Takahashi with a shocked face, Yoshida suddenly had a sense of contented existence!

That's right, it's presence!

Maybe for other cartoonists, especially those who have just debuted, the quality of a responsible editor will have a great impact on them! After their debut, many cartoonists either blindly obeyed, blindly obeyed the editor's arrangement, and even abandoned the original intention and idea of drawing comics, and became obedient puppets, whose grades became worse and worse, and finally they were miserably cut in half;

But Makoto Takahashi gave Yoshida a different feeling!

Makoto Takahashi's works rarely have problems, although at some times, it is a little difficult for Yoshida, as a reader, to accept, but at such times, Makoto Takahashi always gives a reasonable explanation and tries to convince Yoshida! No need to make noise, just a few simple words, so that Yoshida, who is also a reader and editor, is fully accepted and speechless!

Yoshida has even had a feeling recently, and he has begun to doubt whether he can really do a good job as an editor of Makoto Takahashi! This little ghost of middle two, although he is often in the state of middle two, but when he draws manga, he doesn't need Yoshida to bother to guide him at all, which makes Yoshida feel uneasy!

But looking at Makoto Takahashi's new work today, Yoshida suddenly found a sense of existence, which made Yoshida breathe a long sigh of relief, it turns out that this little ghost, not every work, is impeccable!

>Why, my family is a cat, do you see how you should change it?" Makoto Takahashi looked humbly taught, which made Yoshida very satisfied. It's perfect enough to be able to change the name!

&Look here, we need to change!" Yoshida pointed to Nana's second words, "Nana can feel her powerful aura at first glance! Such a person is very distinctive, and at the same time, he has an indifferent attitude towards the people and things around him, and Megumi Noda looks like that kind of innocent little girl...... To be honest, if there are no accidents between the two people in reality, they will only pass by at most, and there is no chance ......of being involved at all!

>> "Makoto Takahashi listened very carefully, and at this moment he realized that Yoshida, the editor, does have real talent and learning!

> The key point of the story is still on Nana Matsumoto!" Yoshida pointed to Nana's close-up sketch and talked eloquently, "Although the characteristics of this character look somewhat similar to Megumi Noda, the essence is different! According to your setting, Nana and Megumi Noda are playmates who grew up together, and then met Nana on the train, and developed admiration and longing for Nana...... So Nana's existence is the most critical existence between the three girls......"

Yoshida said as he spoke, suddenly falling silent.

& Dependents of the cat, have you been released into silence?" Makoto Takahashi was a little puzzled, but his eyes were more confused, "Go on, how should the future development be designed?"

&Think about it yourself!" Yoshida looked at Makoto Takahashi with a cold face, his smile a little playful, "Little ghost, I'm the editor in charge, not a manga artist! How to draw manga is something that you need to consider as a manga artist! If you rely too much on the editor in charge, you don't want to make progress in this life! So come on, manga artist Makoto Takahashi...... No, it's Lelouch L. Night God Moon-sama!"

"My family belongs to the cat, who allowed you to look at this king with that kind of look?" Takahashi Makoto was stunned for a moment, and then became a little angry, "As a pet, you must have the consciousness of a pet, even if it is a leather god, after being recovered, you must obediently listen to Ash's words, be careful that I put you in the Poké Ball and send you back to my hometown for Dr. Ohki to do research!"

It's not cool, but it's ...... How should I change it? Makoto Takahashi has a headache! Indeed, as Yoshida just said, this work has become very strange! Obviously, it is an inspirational love story about Noda Mei and Prince Chiaki, but because Nana's aura is too strong, the whole plot begins to change in a strange direction......

If you change Nana's characteristics, you may be able to solve the problem, but after Nana's characteristics are changed, is she still the queen?

It's rare to be able to put Makoto Takahashi in such a situation, but this pleasure should be enjoyed! Looking at Makoto Takahashi's tangled and silent expression, Yoshida laughed with satisfaction! Yoshida knew very well that although Makoto Takahashi had been serializing manga for four years, it was still too far behind those manga artists who had been famous for a long time!

"Hahaha, I see! How can I be confined to the world of comics? I can still use that trick to say ......"

Just when Yoshida couldn't help it and wanted to give a hint, Makoto Takahashi suddenly laughed wildly! So Yoshida was a little stunned, this little ghost, shouldn't he think of it so quickly?

&If you think of something, tell me first!" Yoshida urged Makoto Takahashi urgently, his eyes full of hope and anticipation!

&If you want to change the development of the plot, in fact, you only need to change Nana's aura!" When Makoto Takahashi said this, Yoshida almost slapped him, thinking about this for so long?

>> I don't want to do this!" Makoto Takahashi's words made Yoshida's glasses, who looked a little disappointed, light up, and only listened to Makoto Takahashi continue, "Nana is the Queen, this is unchangeable!

&Draw the narrative mode of the plot?" Yoshida was a little puzzled, he hadn't thought of this himself!

>> That's right, the weak existence of the male protagonist waiting for the firewood knife, it is better to simply discard it like a rag on the ground!" Makoto Takahashi seemed to be caught in some kind of fanatical fantasy, "One heroine can't complete the construction of the whole story, so add two, the triangle is the most stable existence!"

&A heroine?" Yoshida was really surprised by Makoto Takahashi's words this time, and after pondering for a moment, a gleam flashed in his eyes, "In other words, do you want to describe the three heroines through a story?"

>> That's right.,Male protagonist or something.,Cut off the unique props and go to die!"

&Can you open your pants before cursing and complaining about the male protagonist and see if your little brother is okay?" Yoshida looked at Makoto Takahashi with disdain!

But this little ghost, this setting sounds very interesting! The idea is really bold! Yoshida began to make up the content of the manga, and the more he thought about it, the more curious he became, what would the story become?

&Reputation, Xuzhu, and Xiao Feng!The most classic three-protagonist mode!" Makoto Takahashi looked at the sky with a longing expression, "Jin Da yo, please lend me your power! Let me completely bombard that purple hair into microparticles! Give me power, Jin Da Da!"

Maybe this little ghost is waiting to surpass those famous cartoonists in the future and step onto a new stage...... Just as Yoshida was thinking this, he heard Makoto Takahashi's muttering in a low voice.

>> Kim was a great help...... Hehe, purple hair is chopped, bombarded into slag, hehe, cut into meat slices and fed to Dingchun ......"

>> How much resentment do you have towards Angji Matsuno?" Yoshida couldn't help but shake his head as his smile began to crumble and gradually enter the blackening Makoto Takahashi, with a puzzled look on his face, "Also, who is that Jin Da in your mouth?"