"This idea is a bit against the sky!"

"What is the function of the Book of Life and Death?"

"The protagonist Night God Moon is so incomprehensible that it is impossible for the police to catch him. Pen ~ Fun ~ Pavilion www.biquge.info"

"The beginning of the wonderful pen is too big, the protagonist is invincible! You don't need to kill people on the scene at all, it's a new generation of Hades, how to draw this situation next?"

"Tsk, I like the character of Ye Shenyue, some things in our society are too brain-dead, cover up, protect each other... You need someone like the protagonist to save it. ”

When Su Xian'er posted the content of the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death", both cartoonists and readers came to watch it.

As one of the masterpieces of the previous life, the beginning rhythm of "Little Ben" is very compact, if you refer to it according to the online text, the first words of "Little Ben", whether it is creativity or content, or the rhythm of the text, are extremely attractive.

In a word, the first sentence has already entered the Gao Dynasty! And she didn't change anything at all, just changed the names of places, people, and death, and turned it into the "Book of Life and Death".

At this time, Qiao Mo, who was at home, carefully read the first sentence of "The Book of Life and Death", his face was cloudy, and he finally thought of something, and then calmed down.

Before, Qiao Mo didn't look down on the magic pen, but this time the other party made him look the other way, but he was only slightly surprised.

Is the beginning of "The Book of Life and Death" good? Okay, very good! The first sentence can be said that anyone who has read it will be attracted, but there is also a fatal flaw.

Thinking of this shortcoming, Qiao Mo knew that the real enemy of this newcomer comic contest is still the duo of Liu Ping and Zeng Yi, not this so-called wonderful pen, even if the other party is a cute girl and is popular in Tencent Animation, but it is not the reader who reviews the newcomer comic contest.

Jingle bells!――

The mobile phone rang, and when he saw that it was Lin Xueqin's, Qiao Mo answered the phone.

"You can give up paying attention to the magic pen, by the way, you don't need to take her rhythm. Lin Xueqin was a little ashamed at this time, he hated Miaobi half to death before, but yesterday it was revealed that the other party was a girl, which made his resentment dissipate a lot.

It's not that he has become a fan of Miaobi, but that he feels that a middle-aged man and a girl are competing against each other, and he really loses his identity, and some of them bully the small.

"It seems that the teacher also read the first words of the wonderful pen?" Qiao Mo said with a smile.

Lin Xueqin snorted coldly, "I have to say that the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death" has changed my opinion of Miaobi a lot, but it can also be seen from the first sentence that Miaobi can't tell stories at all!"

Yes, Lin Xueqin still thinks that Su Xian'er can't tell stories.

"The first episode is too big, this comic will collapse, and it won't last until the later stage. The corners of Lin Xueqin's mouth twitched with coldness, "The comic is actually similar to the novel, in "The Book of Life and Death", the protagonist Ye Shenyue is set to be a genius high school student and the controller of the Book of Life and Death, which means that Ye Shenyue is invincible, no matter how he kills people, he will not be caught, because he is not present at all, how to arrest him?

This is the difference between gods and people.,And the magic pen is still drawn like this.,Her beginning is really great.,It's a pity that the magic pen is just a seventeen-year-old girl.,There's a sentence in the suspense reasoning comic that is'The author's IQ represents the IQ of the characters in the work',And the IQ of a seventeen-year-old girl can control the protagonist of the night god moon? ”

Not only that, although Lin Xueqin has never drawn suspense reasoning comics, he has read many suspense reasoning novels, and he has never seen that the protagonist or murderer has mythological means to commit crimes.

So without an extremely reasonable plot, how can the police fight this protagonist?

Of course, if the mysterious person on the last page is someone with the same means, then it is possible to continue drawing, but this means that the comic has been reduced to mediocrity.

Is the struggle between man and God attractive or the struggle between God and God attractive?

This is the reason why Lin Xueqin is determined, in some of the comic book author groups he mixed in, many people scratched their ears and cheeks and couldn't figure out how to find out the protagonist.

Killing people in the air, and you can also set the death of the prisoner, this book of life and death is simply an artifact, plus the IQ of the protagonist, it is obviously invincible!

But this is suspenseful reasoning, which requires logic and reasoning, and obviously the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death" did not let him see these contents.

Therefore, "The Book of Life and Death" may be popular in other categories, but it will definitely die if it is placed in suspenseful reasoning?

"Not bad!" Jomo nodded in agreement, this is the fatal flaw of "The Book of Life and Death", the beginning is cool, but what to do after that? This is a great test for a cartoonist, and he, who is very good at suspense reasoning, can't think of any way to find out the main character, let alone others.

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When Lin Xueqin and Qiao Mo were on the phone, there was a pair of combinations that were also discussing, and the pair was Liu Ping and Zeng Yi.

"How about it, can you think of some subsequent plot developments?" Zeng Yi looked at Liu Ping expectantly, hoping to get a response from the other party.

People in the comic industry don't know whether he and the other party are college classmates or roommates, and they have a deep relationship, so as soon as Zeng Yi invited, Liu Ping came over to serve him as a story scripter.

As the other party of last year's National Suspense Mystery Novel Silver Award, Zeng Yi has a lot of confidence in Liu Ping, and today Miaobi suddenly sent a complete first word "The Book of Life and Death", the two read it two or three times, Zeng Yi and Qiao Mo and Lin Xueqin basically have the same idea.

Liu Ping, on the other hand, shook his head and signaled the other party to be quiet.

Then he watched it over and over again, as a senior author of suspense novels, Liu Ping knew that any bit of anything in suspense mystery novels could become clues, so the comics were naturally the same, or the comics had pictures and were easier to find.

After a long time, Liu Ping frowned lightly and said, "If my guess is right, the last mysterious person to appear should be the protagonist's opponent, and according to some of the rules of the life and death book that the protagonist got before, one of them is to indicate that 'if you don't know the appearance of the named person, it won't work, and in the same way, if you don't know the name, you only know the same as the appearance', that is, if you want to fight against the protagonist, then this person can't show up and expose his name......"

After a while, Zeng Yi couldn't help but say, "It's gone?"

"It's gone. Liu Ping was helpless, "The information in the first episode is too little, it's not easy to reason, and this notebook is really invincible, if you look at it from the perspective of the police, you don't even know which country the protagonist is, billions of people in the whole world, how to catch the protagonist? This is equivalent to looking for a needle in a haystack, it's difficult!"

"Then is this comic bound to collapse?" Hearing this, Zeng Yi breathed a sigh of relief and said, you must know that the pressure on him is very great, and this style of painting can increase a lot of points, if the game has not started, he will definitely have to imitate this style of painting.

"Don't be too happy, we're not a magic pen after all, maybe the magic pen has its own way..."

It's just that when he said this, Zeng Yi was also a little skeptical, could this second sentence really be picked up?

And when the first episode of "The Book of Life and Death" was released, many people were discussing the content of this first episode, but after gossiping, they found out that the protagonist of Yeshenyue was simply open, as long as he didn't die, he was completely invincible.

And Zhao Jing even asked in the Tencent Animation editorial group, and the replies he got were all 'If you don't collapse, you must be God', but this made him smile bitterly, the logic of the first sentence is too poor, "The Book of Life and Death" is a suspenseful reasoning manga, and now it seems that it is difficult not to collapse.

Just when there was a heated discussion in the comic industry, at eight o'clock in the evening on October 3, Su Xian'er sent a second word.

The second episode of "The Book of Life and Death", L!

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Jia Baili has been updated, and the coffin is uncovered!

By the way, ask for a recommendation ticket ~ OvO