315 The most heartwarming text!
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Summer was dumbfounded.
Kong Mengming was stunned when he heard this.
Everyone at the scene, including Ba Xin, Bi Yao, and Qin Siyuan, showed a different look on their faces.
Especially Kong Mengming, she thought that Chenyang was a person who liked to improvise, but she didn't expect that as early as before them, Chenyang had thought about it for a long time, and this kind of shock was tantamount to when people thought they were going to run out of water, someone suddenly ran over and told everyone that in fact, he had made all the preparations, and he only needed to work step by step.
Astound?
Admire?
Remorseful?
Kick oneself?
A lot of emotions lingered in Kong Mengming's heart, and she couldn't tell which kind of taste was more in her heart, but the only thing that was certain was that it was the first time she felt so firmly that as long as Chenyang was there, their "story meeting" would go on forever.
One second.
Two seconds.
Three seconds.
Everyone was silent.
I don't know how long it took before Bi Yao said softly, "Teacher Chenyang, how about you take a look at this novel?"
It's not hard to say the word good-looking, but it's not so easy to say simple.
Because everyone's aesthetics are different, the same novel, in the eyes of some people, may be a boutique fairy grass, but in the eyes of others, it may be a poisonous weed garbage.
Chenyang's requirements are simple, but there is a strong subjectivity, compared with those market-proven rules and regulations, it is difficult to operate these two words.
Chenyang walked over, "Which one?"
"This one. ”
Bi Yao opened the document.
"The Man Behind It?" Chenyang smiled, "This topic feels good, as long as it is not a system, this concise and clear topic alone is worth forty-five points." ”
Bi Yao smiled.
Chenyang also smiled, and by the way, he looked at the author: Blood Winter.
He has seen this pen name, and he was one of the first batch of signed writers, although the routine of writing is old, but it can be seen from his first three novels that this person has at least written novels for a long time, but he has not yet understood it, so the story is written very ordinary.
After having a rough judgment of the author, Chenyang continued to read.
The first three paragraphs are about the background of the protagonist: a high school student from the countryside.
The village is very small.,It's also very poor.,But the people are simple.,The hero received the notice on the day the whole village came to see him off.,Although the parents don't have much savings.,But still resolutely want to send the hero to the university gate.。
"Well, that's good. ”
Chenyang nodded again.
Although there is a lot of ink on the protagonist's family background, it is good to make things clear.
The smile on Bi Yao's face became even stronger.
This time, Chenyang didn't notice, but continued to read with relish.
At the beginning of the second section,The hero started his college career.,On the day of school,,The hero met his roommates.,One of them is a child from an ordinary family in the city.,Named Xiao Kai.。
Because it's the relationship between the upper and lower bunks,So the hero and Xiao Kai are very close.,But Xiao Kai has repeatedly laughed at the hero intentionally or unintentionally.。
At the beginning, the hero could bear it, but later, he felt very humiliated in his heart, and Xiao Kai also intensified, and from time to time he had to show off his superiority in front of the hero.
The hero can't stand it and wants to break off the relationship.,But every time,When the hero has such an idea,Xiao Kai will give the hero some sweetness appropriately.。
Finally one day,Xiao Kai pulled the hero to masturbate,During the period of humiliating the hero with two thousand yuan bills,A terrible thought arose in the hero's heart - he wanted to kill Xiao Kai!
So, on a trip back to his hometown, the protagonist told Xiao Kai a strange thing about his small village.
Xiao Kai didn't think so at the time, but when they walked to the place that the hero had set up in advance, the hero picked up the prepared fruit knife and stabbed Xiao Kai desperately.
At the end of the story, the protagonist broke down Xiao Kai's body into pieces and threw them in the prepared cauldron, stewed them and ate them bite by bite, and since then he has changed his name and surname to live in a foreign country.
But from then on, all the actions of the protagonist are the same as Xiao Kai, and even the tone of his speech is the same.
Finally, one day fifteen years later, the hero was captured by the police, and on the way to the prison, the hero saw Xiao Kai following him in the police car for the first time.
After reading the whole article, Chenyang took a deep breath.
Although there are no characters such as Ma Jia Jue in today's China, there have been several cases of college students killing roommates, and each time it will attract public criticism.
This article rubs these points very well, and at the same time deals with the cool points very much.
Even if it's not a big hit, it's definitely a masterpiece.
Bi Yao opened his mouth and asked, "Teacher Chenyang, can you pass this novel?"
Different from the trembling just now, Bi Yao's tone was full of pride now.
After so many years in the workplace, she has already seen from Chenyang's expression that this manuscript will definitely pass, but she still has a little expectation that she can be praised and praised by her idol.
Chenyang naturally didn't know Bi Yao's thoughts, so he smiled and said, "Of course, if this manuscript can't pass, then the chances of other manuscripts will be even more laughable." ”
Bi Yao smiled, "Okay, then I'll inform him." ”
Chenyang nodded.
When it was over, Kong Mengming raised his hand and said, "Teacher Chen, do you want to see if this novel of mine is good?"
Chenyang walked over, "I'll take a look." ”
Kong Mengming opened the document.
is different from the article selected by Bi Yao that has both practical and educational significance, Kong Mengming chose a warm-hearted novel with a more rural style.
The story is about a pair of elderly left-behind old people, who often get sick because they are old, so the old man wants to commit suicide and is unwilling to drag down his children, and his family can't persuade them.
One day, a neighbor came to the door and "accidentally" pulled out a flyer with the price of the cemetery, an astronomical amount that shocked the old man who wanted to commit suicide, and gave up such an idea.
After reading it, Chenyang smiled, "Yes, this is also a good novel." ”
Kong Mengming was overjoyed and said, "Really, I thought what I liked was different from yours." ”
"You have to be confident. As he spoke, he glanced at Summer, and saw that the latter was about to speak, he continued, "Actually, you don't have to worry too much, everyone has their own opinion on this kind of thing, in general, we have to dedicate the most heartwarming words to readers, those that can touch your heart, readers will definitely like it, even if he doesn't like A, then he will like B, everyone should trust their own judgment." ”
Summer smiled, "I know Brother Yang." ”
Bhasin also said, "It's so simple, just take my standard as the standard? That's too easy, I've already gone through two articles here." ”
Bi Yao said, "I also have two drafts here. ”
Kong Mengming smiled and said, "Hehe, I'm better than you, I've already passed five articles." ”
Summer was unconvinced, "You wait, I will definitely come first!"