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In the previous life, the online article was very disdainful of the lengthy rhythm of traditional novels, and paid attention to "the chapters have cool points, and the chapters are high and trendy".

But there are exceptions to everything, and the success of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is undoubtedly a very important aspect of its entire writing rhythm.

Judging from the rhythm of the whole novel, in addition to the defect of "the protagonist does not appear at the beginning", the subdued arrangement of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is undoubtedly excellent reads;

Before he appeared, he called a large number of masters of the rivers and lakes, and a beautiful little nun explained the glorious deeds of the male protagonist.

Fighting Tian Boguang with wisdom, flirting with the little nun, full of coolness.

It's really an invisible force, the most deadly!

After the opening scene was pretended, Ling Hu Chong was in the doldrums for a few chapters, giving up the limelight to Liu Zhengfeng and Qu Yang, as well as to portray other masters and sect forces.

But the so-called desire to promote and suppress first, just disappearing in front of everyone's eyes, is not enough to achieve the effect of "suppression", not to oppress people to the most sad and angry state, how can the next plot break out cool?

Here, "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is very well arranged, first let Ling Hu Chong discover the Wuyue sword moves in the stone cave, reveal the sweetness of the adventure to the protagonist, and then write Yue Lingshan's change of heart, while abusing the master's heart, it also leaves a little hope for the reader.

Sure enough, under the depressed feelings of the little junior sister's change of heart, Tian Boguang went up the mountain to fight with Linghu Chong's sword, just waiting for Dugu Jiujian to be born, it was like a shock, and the reader was like a hot summer, pouring a bottle of iced Coke, the refreshing feeling was indescribable!

Mo Dao's idea is good, if the protagonist is invincible in the world, then the plot is very easy to collapse, so. Linghu Chong had just finished learning the Dugu Nine Swords, and after a fight with the master of the Sword Sect, he was killed by the Six Immortals of Peach Valley. I lost all my internal strength, and I was seriously injured and waiting to die!

Tell me what you really feel. The abolition of Hu Chong's internal force came extremely abruptly, or because of the product of the six immortals of Peach Valley, as if it was intentional, when Ling Hu Chong was complacent, he was given a hard blow, allowing him to achieve the peak of swordsmanship, and at the same time, it also made his internal force his shortcoming.

That's why. Therefore, in the plot after "Smiling Proud Jianghu", he did not hesitate to risk being scolded by readers for being verbose, and described the six immortals of Peach Valley many times, and he could write half a page of a casual fight, not only to portray the image of the six of them, but also to make the previous plot of Hu Chong's internal force abolished more reasonable.

I have to say that this kind of writing is really powerful. Ling Hu Chong was in this state, as if he was always injured and sick, dealing with the fierce and fierce enemies around him. Therefore, when everyone in Huashan was tied up and Linghu Chong drew his sword to meet the enemy, a good fight in the rain was even more thrilling and shocking.

Just like Jeet Kune Do said, the integration of offense and defense, in the period of entering Huashan and going to Lin Ping's other public house, abusing the lord at the same time. also made Ling Hu Chong mighty, and let Ren Yingying appear next to Ling Hu Chong. Always send some welfare sweetness when the reader is most depressed.

Yue Lingshan abused Linghu Chong enough. The next plot will naturally turn cool again.

Ren Yingying's "love is budding", which provoked the heroes of the rivers and lakes, and they came to please Ling Hu Chong.

This plot can only make people feel that unique charm in the original novel.

Yue Lingshan regarded him as nothing.

Yue Buqun regarded him as a rebel who stole the "Zixia Secret Book".

Lin Pingzhi regarded him as a traitor who secretly learned his own "Sword Technique to Wars Off Evil Spirits".

All the disciples of Huashan also stayed away from him.

Under such a bleak predicament, countless heroes of the rivers and lakes, characters with eyes above the top on weekdays, treat the famous Huashan faction as garbage one by one, and instead come to please a little-known Ling Hu Chong, a famous doctor and a famous medicine, money and wine, and finally move out a stunning beauty like Blue Phoenix, and show her thighs to exchange blood, and it is the face of "big brother" and "sister".

This situation is tantamount to a famous high school sling man breaking up, and as a result, all kinds of black and Taoist bigwigs, and international female stars came to greet and flatter, and the world's No. 1 wealthy female daughter also came over and said I want to be your girlfriend......

Damn, do you want to be so exaggerated and pretending to be so forced?!

Fifty years ago, "Smiling Proud Jianghu" was already coquettishly following the rhythm of online writing, but it was ridiculous that a group of people of the same period spent fifty years without learning the essence of this rhythm, and they deserved to serve on the street for a lifetime;!

The later plot also confirmed the excellence of this rhythm, and as soon as Hu Chong finished learning "Star Absorbing Great, Law", he made up for the shortcomings of his internal strength, and when he went to Shaolin Temple to save Ren Yingying, he exposed his weakness of not having a sense of the overall situation, and poured cold water on hot-headed readers.

poured cold water on the two chapters, and it was refreshing again, and I directly formed a group with any of my trips, and brushed the largest copy of Blackwood Cliff in the book, and the full-level wave ss Dongfang was undefeated!

Cool?

I'll just ask you if you're cool!

Refreshing?

Good!

Then keep the abuse!

Wuyue Alliance, the former goddess completely turned into a physical and mental, and the former mentor became a conspirator, so that the plan made herself yin and didn't want it.

Okay, okay!

You're done, aren't you?

Labor and management will kill you immediately!

So, Lin Pingzhi killed Yue Lingshan, and Yue Buqun cut the little jj by himself......

Although this is not a cool point, it can be regarded as satisfying the "revenge" idea of some black-bellied readers.

Didn't you abandon me and Lin Pingzhi?

Yes!

Is it okay now?

Killed, right?

This is the man you choose!

It's the end, it's also the decision, and it's also the biggest sadism in the book!

Yue Lingshan died, and the only thing he was worried about was Lin Pingzhi, when he was dying, although there was Ling Hu Chong in his eyes, there was no trace of him in his heart......

The love strings have been silenced at this point, and the piano shadow has not been played since.

If you think half of it in your heart, you will teach the wind to destroy your life!

Since then, he has lived in seclusion in the deep valley with Ren Yingying, fought against Yue Buqun, and resisted any of them.

One piano and one Xiao, composing "Smiling Proud Rivers and Lakes";

The rhythm of the whole "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is probably like this, between tightening, it can be said that it is an old way, and only the pen power of Jin Daxia at his peak can write this story so tightly and appropriately, and it is moving.

To put it mildly, if you name it from the rhythm alone, this book can be called "The Five Heavens of Ice and Fire......

Under such a tense rhythm, I caught up with Ling Hu Chong to practice "Absorbing Stars". Law", let me reproduce the big plot of Mowei, how can those famous artists be as stable as Mount Tai?!

In the relevant forum post bar, a page of the book defeated the famous Daoyi, kicked "Bodhi Dusheng" down, and sat on the ninth place himself, giving an evil name......

Demon power destroys Bodhi!

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