Chapter Ninety-Seven: Comparison
The final novel, after using a previous big favor and paying a very high manuscript fee, finally got it.
However, Zhu Zhengting looked at the manuscript sent by the other party, but he couldn't laugh.
This manuscript is very good, very attentive, and it can be seen that it was carefully created by the other party.
If it wasn't for the fact that I had helped each other before, I would definitely not have been able to get it this time.
However, it was not clear that there was no comparison, and now he has watched "Liancheng Jue" no less than ten times, and when he looks at this "famous work" again, he feels unsightly.
The plot seems blunt, the characters are not recognizable, and there are various cool points, which are still the same old-fashioned foundations, plus some inspiration from the flow of internal forces!
Compared with "Liancheng Jue", although it is no longer abusing the master, the plot is attractive, and it is not a grade at all!
As for comparing with "Knight's Journey", it is even more difficult to become an opponent!
Look at people's "Chivalrous Journey", not to mention the strong internal force of the protagonist, that is, the other supporting roles, the difference between internal and external skills is also very clear and clear.
Just like the incense master Zhanfei of the Changle Gang, the iron sand palm used made it clear that he can only control people's hands and feet, but he can't close people's acupoints.
Let's take a look at the way people have achieved great achievements!
"Zhanfei is the master of the five halls of the Leopard Jie Hall outside the Changle Gang, his iron sand palm has more than 20 years of profound skills, it is not general, this palm is full of strength, and it is hitting the 'middle acupoint' between the young man's two breasts.
But when he heard a click, Zhanfei's right arm was broken, and his body flew straight backwards, breaking through the pane, falling out of the room, and his whole body was closed and he fainted. ”
With this palm, he hit an ancient and unparalleled, proud of the first master of internal strength, Shi Potian!
At that time, he was extremely sad when he was cold and hot in his body, and Zhan Fei's palm hit him right on the middle of his body.
The acupoint in the middle of the body is a sea of human qi, and the strength of the palm is amazing, and it is very clever at all times, and it hits it with one palm, just enough to mix the yin and yang strength of his eight yin meridians and the eight yang meridians, and there is no difference between cold breath and hot breath.
At that time, his internal strength suddenly increased, so that he shook Zhan Fei out of the window, and his heart was completely unaware, but he felt that the cold in his body turned into a coolness, like the heat of roasting and turning into a melting yang.
The limbs were indescribably comfortable, and after a while, I didn't even feel the coolness and warmth, but my whole body was full of energy, and I couldn't help but shout.
When Qiu Shanfeng, the incense master of the Tiger Fierce Hall, entered the room, he spurted out the stasis accumulated in his body, and his spirit was refreshed, not only his physical strength was vigorous, but even his mind was doubly sensitive. ”
The sea of qi in the body, the harmony of yin and yang with one palm, and the interaction of dragons and tigers, such a thrilling way of practice, even if those novelists want to break their heads, they can't think of it.
Compared with "Liancheng Jue", it is more delicate and reasonable to directly choke the throat and break the second pulse of Di Yun's governor.
Let's take a look at the stone breaking sky after this internal achievement, how strong is the internal force!
The original text reads:
Bei Haishi's two fingers pressed on the young man's wrist, and his arm shook violently, half of his body was numb, and his three fingers were shaken down by his pulse.
One page of the book!
Don't you want to be so cruel!
With a pulse, he was able to shake his arm violently, half of his body was numb, and three fingers were shaken down!
Zhu Zhengting put the fingers of his right hand on the pulse of his left hand, and the vibration was almost undetectable!
Do you want to be so truthful?
Is this light and delicate pulse vibration so powerful?
Later, Shi Potian's divine skills were first completed, and the rosewood tables and chairs were dismantled by him casually.
Enhance the internal force with the spirit wine "Xuanbing Bihuo Wine", practice the way of luck on the puppet clay man, and then slam the key points in the body with strong palm power, and then practice the magic skills on the puppet: "Arhat Demon Magic"!
it!
"Arhat Demon Magic"!
When Zhu Zhengting first saw the name of this divine skill, he only felt that his brain couldn't keep up at all!
The way of the meridians of traditional Chinese medicine has become the operation of internal force!
Words like Tang poems can even become martial arts like "Tang Poetry Swordsmanship"!
Up to now, the description of the power of the legendary immortal Buddha can also become the name of internal strength!
It can be said that countless authors and readers who have seen this place have already seen the cool explosion, and with the rough internal force inspiration of other authors, Chivalry has simply thrown them out of hundreds of streets!
Putting the manuscript in his hand on the table, Zhu Zhengting lay weakly on the soft chair and looked at the ceiling.
I thought about the future of the magazine for a while.
For a while, I thought of the wonderful martial arts world of "Liancheng Jue" and "Chivalrous Journey".
……
Zhu Zhengting guessed, and it was right.
The finale of "Liancheng Jue" simply fills in all the holes in the previous article, and all kinds of characters are about to appear, how can readers not look forward to it?
In the previous article, it has been determined that the "Selected Tang Poems" is "Liancheng Jue", which was regarded by Di Yun as a thing of affection, and after being returned to Qi Fang, it was discovered by Wan Zhenshan, because it was soaked in poisonous water, but the secret in the book was discovered!
The "Tang Poetry Swordsmanship", in each sword poem, there is a word hidden, and when taken together, it is the location of a big treasure.
"Liancheng Jue" is this set of numbers.
This matter, many thoughtful readers, has already thought of it, but it is nothing.
On the contrary, it is Qi Fang, who Di Yun loves all his life, which is even more heart-wrenching.
Although he misunderstood that Di Yun and Taohong had a personal relationship, Qi Fang still kept thinking about him, and when he knew that Di Yun was wronged by the disciples of the Wan family, he was even more upset.
"He suffered so much, he ...... What's in his mind?"
This sentence exhausted the remorse and sadness in Qi Mang's heart.
Qi Fang, who knew this, realized the conspiracy of the Wan family, so he used another plan to steal the "Selected Tang Poems" that Wan Zhenshan had already obtained.
I have to say that this chapter is ruthless, a "Selected Tang Poems", which leads to several accidents, changes hands to several people, and the middle plot is both strange and reasonable, in line with people's hearts and human nature, and there is no deliberate trick at all.
Moreover, in the tenth chapter of "Selected Tang Poems", there are two foreshadowings.
A foreshadowing is Qi Changfa, who got the "Selected Tang Poems" back then, where is he now.
Since the first two chapters, after Qi Changfa stabbed Wan Zhenshan and escaped, there has been no trace of him.
However, as Di Yun grew up step by step, the information he got proved that Qi Changfa was definitely a deep-minded, cunning character, and would never disappear like that.
Another foreshadowing is a sentence that Tao Hong said inadvertently when Qi Fang asked Taohong.
The original text reads:
Seeing that Qi Fang had let go of herself, Taohong hurriedly left for fear of more changes, and muttered, "How can I blame me for seeing a ghost at night......?" It's not like I'm talking nonsense. ”
Qi Fang chased after him and asked, "What the hell, build a wall?"
Peach knew that she had missed her mouth and hurriedly said, "It's nothing, it's nothing." Oh, the old man often sees ghosts at night, and gets up in the middle of the night to build a wall. ”
Qi Fang saw her talking crazy, thinking that she had kicked her father-in-law out of the house, and her life was very hard, and her brain was not very clear.
How could my father-in-law get up in the middle of the night to build a wall?
Peach was afraid that she wouldn't believe it, so she said, "It's a fake wall, sir...... The old man loves to be a plasterer in the middle of the night. When I said a few words to him, the lord lost his temper, beat me to death, and drove me out, saying that he would kill me when he saw me again......"