Chapter 452: Observing the Manga (Part II)
In a world where school idols are overflowing, [sing a song if you don't agree with a word] is an act that everyone can understand, just like in the world of Dragon Ball, [if you don't agree with each other, you will explode into a battle or something...... And in the world of cartoonists, this kind of behavior has a new way of diffusion use, that is, the combined use of a certain secondary and second cartoonist exclusive [read comics if you don't agree with a word] and [multiple serials if you don't agree with a word]!
However, for the Yacheng wood dream leaf side, it is only to the extent of [reading comics if you don't agree with a word]......
When I first started reading this comic, Lan Du didn't think this comic was very exciting, because except for the opening Mikoto Misaka and Shirai Kuroko who used superpowers, the content after that was no different from ordinary campus comics, such as girls going shopping together after class, shopping for things, and eating sweets together...... The plot of the first half of the comic is basically from the small things that the girls experience in their lives, to show the different characteristics of the girls!
If the manga continues to have this style, then this manga is at most just a daily comic under the guise of [Super Power Academy]...... So when the [Bank Robbery] incident appeared in the comics, Lan Du changed his previous casual attitude and carefully observed the comics!
Shirai Kuroko, who has the ability of [Space Movement], showed strong strength as a member of the Wind Discipline Commission and easily solved the two robbers; Hatsuharu, who looked weak, contacted the guard team in the fastest time, and also supported Shirai Kuroko as a member of the Wind Discipline Commission......
The superpower battle between Kuroko Shirai and the bank robber may be because Kuroko Shirai's ability is too domineering, so there is not a lot of space depicted in the manga...... But after reading the next plot, Lan Du realized that the previous content, it turned out that the previous content was just a foreshadowing for Mikoto Misaka!
"Kuroko, the next thing is my personal behavior......" When I saw Saten Tears being kicked and injured by a bank robber in order to save the child who was almost taken hostage, before Shirai Kuroko could make any moves, Mikoto Misaka ignored the previous warning of Shirai Kuroko and intervened in the battle of the capable with anger on her face!
Mikoto Misaka, who was full of electric light, just tossed the game currency in her hand in the face of the robbers who rushed towards her in a frenzied car...... And when the game currency that was tossed high fell, Mikoto Misaka used electricity to drive it into a beam of light, directly knocking the oncoming car driven by the robber into the air......
“…… The pride of Tokiwadai, the invincible princess of denkiki!"
No matter how surprised the trapped robbers were, no matter how proud Shirai Kuroko was, and no matter how violent the explosion was after using a [Super Electromagnetic Cannon]...... Mikoto Misaka's use of the [Super Electromagnetic Cannon] page of the comic made Lan Du feel unusually shocked!
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"Let's not talk about Ah Cheng's comic, Jinghe-kun's "Chop" is really powerful!" After Lan Du put down the comic manuscript, he looked at his good friend with a solemn face, "And the style of this comic feels very similar to our comics...... According to the words of the editor of Hattori, it is also a manga that belongs to the [evil way]!"
"Indeed! When I first saw it, I thought that Tazmi would take the noble lady and start a run-away journey...... I didn't expect such a turn to occur later!" The yellow-haired glasses pushed his glasses, and his tone revealed admiration, "Start with the [Royal Road] comics, and then turn to the [Evil Road] comics! It seems that I didn't accept the editor's evaluation of [Cartoonist who is better at evil way comics than Ya Chengmu Yumeye], and it is really true......"
"Hey, I said Qiuren, didn't you say that as a cartoonist, you must first have confidence in your comics?" Regarding the evaluation given by a good friend, Lan Du was a little resentful, "Although I also think Jinghe-kun's comics are very powerful, but we are not bad......"
"No, it's the highest! A comic can start with [Royal Road] and turn into [Evil Road] in the middle of the way...... Although I am a little unwilling, I have to admit that even I can't do it to this extent!" Seeing the stunned look on his good friend's face, the yellow-haired glasses-kun took off his glasses and wiped them gently, and continued with a comforting mouth, "But as I said just now, there was indeed a gap between us and Jinghe-kun in the past, but now...... If it's just a [Evil Dao] comic contest, I have the confidence to compete with Ah Cheng or my new wife!"
“…… Qiuren, I'll take back what I said before!It's not that you don't have self-confidence, but you're overconfident, right?" Lan Du complained to Jiyou angrily, "Aside from the plot, compared to Ah Cheng and Eiji, there is a certain gap in my handling of comic manuscripts......"
"But at least it's not like a few years ago, when it comes to dealing with comic manuscripts, right?" the bad-hearted yellow-haired glasses Jun used a mending knife on his good friend...... This is one of the special ways to brush up on each other's favorability between friends, and people who don't have the talent to open this area can't learn it!
"Uh......" For the good friend's divine mending knife, Lan Du was silent for a moment in embarrassment, and then decisively chose to use the divine skill of shifting the topic, "Speaking of Qiuren, why do you want me to finish reading Ah Cheng's comic today?"
"Of course, it's because this manga by [Makoto Shinkai] can solve the flaws in our comics...... At least that's what I think!" The yellow-haired glasses chose to speak very carefully, not only to be able to explain his own thoughts, but also to take into account the hearts of his good friends...... In a sense, you are really fortunate to be in the yellow haired glasses!
"The flaws of our comics?" Lan Du looked at his good friend with some surprise and asked suspiciously, "So...... What's that flaw? It's really a gap in the plot, right?"
"Well, in terms of the plot...... No!" The yellow-haired glasses who was crooked by his good friend reacted quite quickly, and immediately used the god manipulation of [pushing glasses] to hide his embarrassment, and said without changing his face, "The defect I said was the creation of female characters in our comics at that time!"
"Is the heroine not well shaped?" recalls the heroine in his previous comics, which seems to be basically designed in the image of the voice actor's sister...... Lan Du instantly became vulnerable, turned his head and muttered in a low voice, "This, this is also something that cannot be helped! Because we spend most of our time at home in order to complete the comics, and we don't have too many social activities at all......
"Maximum, I'm not just talking about the heroine, but also the female characters that appear in the comics!" The yellow-haired glasses Jun interrupted the weak speech of the good friend very strongly, and then took out an issue of the weekly magazine "Jumk Jumk" from the bookshelf, and began to give an example to the good friend!"Just like the previous weekly serialized "Madoka", that comic is completely dominated by female characters, but each character has its own characteristics, which makes it easy for readers to distinguish them...... However, in our comics, the male characters are already very well portrayed, but in terms of the portrayal of female characters, compared to other manga artists, I personally think there is still a certain gap, let alone Makoto or Eiji!"
"This ...... It seems to be ......"
"To give you a simple example, because of the lack of experience in the creation of female characters, even if I write a plot similar to "A Scientific Electromagnetic Cannon, Change", the comic we completed will probably not even pass the editorial department's serialization meeting!" "Yellow-haired glasses Jun pointed to the comics in the newly released monthly magazine, and continued to analyze to his good friends, " But the highest, you've also seen this comic...... Every female character in the manga is memorable!, not to mention Mikoto Misaka, the electric shock who is the heroine of this manga!"
"Indeed, after reading this comic again, I realized that the portrayal of female characters in our comics is still far behind......!" This may be one of the reasons why Yumeha Ajogi has become a popular manga artist!
"And the style of this comic is ......" The yellow-haired glasses gentleman seemed to be a little short of words, and after brewing for a long time, he said, "I think there is a big difference between their style and Ah Cheng's in the past......!
"Obviously, it just knocked a speeding car into the air, but it showed the power of that [Super Electromagnetic Cannon] to the fullest...... Let me feel the power of that [Super Electromagnetic Cannon], as if it can penetrate the sky!" After listening to the last page of the comic, Lan Du naturally remembered the previous page of the comic that shocked him, and said something that made the good friend stunned, "Hmm...... That's how it should be an exaggeration!"
Although Lan Du has been working hard to improve his painting skills through serialization over the years, although through the honing of serialization over the years, Lan Du's painting skills have made very obvious progress compared to when he first debuted, although Lan Du has felt several times that the gap between himself and his new wife Eiji and Makoto Takahashi is gradually narrowing...... But it wasn't until today, after reading the last page of the comic, that Lan Du realized that while he was improving, his new wife Eiji and Makoto Takahashi were also improving!
"Highest of all, you ...... Do you feel this way too?" the yellow-haired glasses sighed weakly, and complained helplessly, "This is just the content of the first episode, and this kind of scene is made...... By the way, Ah Cheng and Eiji, are those two guys monsters?"
"Monster...... Is it?" Lan Du muttered softly......
Those two people, perhaps...... The so-called monster ......
But that's exactly what it is......
It is precisely because of the face of powerful monsters that I can better understand the shortcomings, and I can understand where the things I am lacking......
"Now, Autumn Man, now that the comics have been read, you should think about the next plot of our comics!" Lan Du picked up the paintbrush on the table, his face was full of bright smiles, "Remember to make up for the time you just spent reading the comics!"
"Hey, hey!" spread out the notebook for writing the comic plot, and the yellow-haired glasses gentleman agreed cohesively while spinning the pen......
"I want to draw a better comic manuscript today...... Lan Du clenched the brush in his hand, "I feel that this mood is even stronger than before...... 10,000 times!"
There's no shame in not being able to defeat monsters!, but ah......
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