Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 As the editor-in-charge of the weekly magazine, Yoshida usually reviews a large number of manga manuscripts, so Yoshida is still very confident in observing the speed of manga drafts...... What's more, this time Makoto Takahashi took out a four-word comic manuscript at one time, and Yoshida finally didn't have to endure the torture of a certain middle two cartoonist [Critical Moment Card Plot の Bad Taste]!

However, Yoshida, who quickly read the first episode of the manga manuscript in his hand, did not rush to observe the rest of the manga drafts, but thought about it while frowning while sorting out the manga drafts...... Because Yoshida felt that the manga draft he had just observed was not as exciting or interesting as he imagined!

The content of the first episode of the manga manuscript begins with Saitama Sensei punching an octopus-type weirdo!

An octopus-shaped monster who emerged from the sea appeared in the city where humans lived, wreaking havoc and killing, but was met by Saitama Sensei, who happened to buy groceries and went home...... And then before the octopus-type weirdo could finish his arrogant words, he was punched to death by Saitama sensei!

Although as early as in the previous serial, Mr. Saitama's powerful strength has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, but every time Yoshida observes Mr. Saitama showing the strength of [One Punch Invincible], he still can't help but sigh with emotion!

And then, through the octopus-type weirdo who was blown up by Saitama Sensei, the follow-up plot of the manga was introduced-the invasion of the Deep Sea Clan!

The Abyssal Clan is from the deep sea, and is a group of giant fish monsters who use humans as food and try to become the overlord of the world.

Under the leadership of the strange man [Deep Sea King], the fish-shaped monsters of the Deep Sea Clan broke through the sea one after another and appeared in the seaside city where humans lived, killing humans and destroying the city without scruples...... At the same time, the Hero Association issued an evacuation order while summoning nearby heroes to solve the disaster!

As the saying "Heroes in Troubled Times" says, whenever human beings are faced with disasters, there will always be some human beings with talents who come forward, or turn the tide of the war with their own strength, or use their talents to resist disasters...... Just when humanity was facing the persecution of the Deep Sea Clan, the A-rank hero [Stinger], who belonged to the Hero Association, stepped forward and stood in front of the Deep Sea Clan, blocking the invasion of the Deep Sea Clan's monsters!

This A-rank hero [Stinger] had issued a bold statement of [Destroy All Without Injury] before fighting with the monsters of the Deep Sea Clan, even though this hero did indeed eliminate ten huge Deep-Sea Clan monsters with his love gun [Bamboo Shoots] and the special skill [Super Giant Spiral Stinger], but he did not achieve the state of [Destroy All Without Damage] at all, but he was beaten in the battle and his face was swollen......

When he saw this part of the plot, Yoshida pouted slightly speechlessly!

Is this Makoto Takahashi's alternative way of being funny? At this time, should we remind Makoto Takahashi to study the funny manga carefully, or should we boast about the ingenious design of a certain secondary cartoonist for a funny plot?

Being able to kill ten huge deep sea clan monsters with his own strength, judging from this point alone, the A-rank hero [Stinger] still has a certain strength...... However, this A-rank hero [Stinger], who stepped forward at a critical moment, was powerless to fight back when facing the king of the Deep Sea Clan, [Deep Sea King], and was killed by the opponent in one move!

Yes, the A-rank hero [Stinger], who had just suddenly burst into a big killing, was directly killed by the strange [Deep Sea King]...... And the first episode of the manga manuscript in Yoshida's hand is exactly the end of it!

From the beginning to the end, except for the beginning when Saitama Sensei appeared as a passerby, the content of the whole episode revolves around the weirdos of the Deep Sea Clan...... However, it is this kind of plot that makes Yoshida frown more and more the more he watches it!

When he first heard his colleague Yujiro convey the prediction of his new wife Eiji [Cartoonist Side Prophet], Yoshida was still a little surprised! Because Yoshida didn't expect his new wife Eiji to give such an exaggerated evaluation, and in order to compete with Makoto Takahashi, he also tore up the manga he had already completed...... But when Yoshida finished reading the content of this sentence again, he was a little disappointed!

Although in the comic manuscript of this episode, the painting style of the battle scene is the same as the previous comic manuscripts, it is still as sharp and powerful as ever, but this alone still can't hide the routine of the comic plot itself! This kind of setting of "stronger enemies will appear after defeating the enemy" is the mainstream of [Royal Road] comics in the weekly magazine today, and it is more in line with the expectations of most readers, but for a responsible editor who has observed a large number of comic manuscripts, it is a little disappointing......

The development of this plot...... Is it really what the new wife Eiji is looking forward to, and it is also the plot that Makoto Takahashi likes and values the most? Yoshida thinks that he may have seen a fake manga draft!

As far as the portrayal of battle scenes is concerned, Makoto Takahashi's drawing skills displayed in this "One Punch Man" manga have indeed surpassed the level of many manga artists......

As far as plot development is concerned, even though this development is a bit cliché, I have to admit that this old-fashioned plot does have the support of many readers......

But just by virtue of these...... Yoshida doesn't think it's worth the new wife Eiji to prepare for the battle!

Of course, it can't be said that the cartoon manuscript of this sentence is without highlights......

At least the only thing that makes Yoshida feel something to look forward to is what kind of fierce battle this powerful weirdo [Deep Sea King] will have when facing Saitama Sensei in the next plot!

So......

Do I feel disappointed because I have too high expectations for Makoto, or for this manga? Yoshida frowns as he sorts through the manga drafts......

"Anyway, the reason why Makoto painted the content of this sentence like this is probably not in ......" Just when Yoshida couldn't help but want to question Makoto Takahashi, a certain editor in charge suddenly thought of another possibility! ...... Ah Cheng, that guy, is he planning to use the content of a whole sentence to pave the way for the follow-up plot?"

Saitama sensei's strength is very strong, no matter what kind of weirdo he is, he only needs one punch to solve it...... However, it is precisely because of this that the reader does not know how powerful Saitama Sensei is, because this cannot be intuitively expressed through the manga!

How do you judge the strength of a character in a comic? The best way to do this is through a battle!

The A-rank hero of the Hero Association was killed by the strange [Deep Sea King] in one move, which is enough to show the strong strength of [Deep Sea King]...... So if Saitama Sensei solves this [Deep Sea King] with one punch, does it mean that Saitama Sensei's strength far exceeds the so-called A-level hero?

So this sentence doesn't seem to be a very brilliant plot...... It's just a deliberate foreshadowing for the sake of the content that follows, just a foreshadowing deliberately planted to show Saitama Sensei's strength?" Yoshida, who thought about it more and more, couldn't help but let out an exclamation, "Tsk, the whole thing is to foreshadow...... Ah Cheng, that guy is really bold, aren't you worried that it will affect the results of the comics?"

Just as Yoshida was about to test his guess and carefully observe the rest of the manga drafts, the sound of a piano suddenly sounded in his ears! As soon as Yoshida looked up, he saw a certain secondary manga artist sitting in front of the piano at the moment, in a state of "self-forgetfulness and intoxication", concentrating on playing unknown music......

And then...... A responsible editor has entered a state of rage!

I'm thinking hard about the shortcomings in the manga here.,Thinking about how to make the quality of the manga draft.,It's not easy to guess the intention of the manga plot to be set in this way.,It's okay if Makoto Takahashi didn't remind me earlier...... He actually meows and plays the piano over there!??

"But, damn it! if you can beat it......" Yoshida was already starting to think about it...... Is this the embodiment of the legendary [blackening]?

It is said that the delusion of using force to teach Makoto Takahashi to be a new man...... Yoshida, it's not early, so let's wash and sleep!