Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info Although the content of the manga "One Punch Man" far exceeded Yoshida's expectations, but it is not enough to marvel or sigh, Yoshida still does not forget to continue to fulfill his obligations as a responsible editor after a short period of distraction, and carefully observe the next content of the manga!

Even though there are a lot of things I want to say to Makoto Takahashi, even though there are a lot of questions I want to ask a certain secondary cartoonist...... But the first task now is naturally to read the comic manuscript in my hand as the editor in charge!

And......

Looking up at Makoto Takahashi, who was seriously completing the manga draft, Yoshida felt that if he made a sound or did anything to interfere with a certain middle school manga artist at this time, he would definitely get a strange experience like [S that life can't bear]!

I was really amazed by the drawing skills that were displayed in this statement...... But ......"

But that doesn't mean that the content of this sentence is really flawless...... At least in Yoshida's opinion, the plot of this sentence is a little too normal compared to the shocking painting style, right?

Especially when I saw that after Genos was knocked away by the Asura Unicorn Immortal in the manga, Saitama Sensei took over the battle and fought instead of his own disciple, the sadness between Yoshida Meiyu began to condense!

After a gorgeous battle by all means, Genos was still unable to defeat the Asura Unicorn Immortal, but was beaten to pieces...... However, according to the content of the previous serialization of the manga "One Punch Man", when Genos, who is a disciple, cannot defeat the other party, then the next plot development should be the turn of Saitama Sensei to come on the field and kill the Asura Unicorn Fairy with one punch!

Although I haven't looked at the rest of the manga manuscripts yet, Yoshida is sure that there is nothing wrong with the next plot development of the manga in this sentence!

It's not that Yoshida suddenly awakened and comprehended some [Great Prophecy Technique] or [Voyeur of the Future] natural powers...... But as long as you chase the reader side of the comic "One Punch Man" for a while, you can probably guess the next plot development of this comic, right?

But in fact, the reason why Yoshida didn't continue to read the manga manuscript for a long time was because at the moment, as the editor in charge of a secondary cartoonist, suddenly realized the biggest problem with the manga "One Punch Man...... No, it should be the biggest flaw!

First of all, the [Weirdo] appears and begins to wreak havoc or kill, then the well-known or unknown [Heroes] appear, while showing the characters through the plot in the comics, while fighting the Weirdos, and then either the [Weirdos] crush the [Heroes] head-on with their strong strength, or the [Weirdos] defeat the [Heroes] who could have defeated themselves by various despicable means Finally, when the scene develops to an extremely dangerous moment, the bald Saitama sensei will appear at a critical moment, solve the [weirdo] that troubles the heroes with one punch, turn the tide, and complete the important task of saving humanity or defending the world!

If the comic "One Punch Man" is only part of the plot, maybe Yoshida won't feel that there is anything wrong, after all, this routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger still looks very emotional...... But if the whole manga is like this, Yoshida thinks that this manga will soon lose interest on the reader's side!

After all, for most readers, the reason why comics are interesting is largely due to readers' expectations and speculations about the unknown plot! If the reader can already guess how the comics will develop next, or speculate the direction of the comic plot...... So what else is so appealing about this manga?

"It's rare that Ah Cheng shows a superb painting skill that is different from the past in this comic...... But it's a pity that ......" Yoshida sighed silently, looked up at Makoto Takahashi, who had already completed the so-called [ceremony] and started to enter the [manga artist mode], and sighed in his heart with some helplessness, "...... Looks like I'll need to talk to Cheng about this later!"

"Oooh...... I feel it! I feel it! This breath that makes my soul addicted......" Makoto Takahashi, who had just finished the manga manuscript in earnest, looked up at Yoshida, and suddenly let out an unusually weird laugh, "Sure enough, is the event of [Pleasure] about to happen......?

"Tsk......"

Why don't you just say anything to Cheng and let this comic continue to be serialized like this, until the popularity drops to an unbearable level and then it is cut in half...... Yoshida, a responsible editor who had just reined in his mind, pouted his lips and thought so!!

"Uh-huh, eyes full of murderous intent, and that soul full of humiliation and unwillingness...... I can now be sure that today is definitely a good day for a good harvest......!" But in the same way, Makoto Takahashi did not stop the brush in his hand and continued to complete the manga sketch quickly!

"Whew, if you can beat it...... If you can beat it...... "What Yoshida can do at this time is just a broken thought, right?"

As for the traditional practice of "just smile at this time...... Yoshida is really worried about whether he will be able to leave Makoto Takahashi intact today!

"Oh, my family is a cat, and if you have the heart to kill, you should naturally have the consciousness of being killed!" so ......" Regarding Yoshida's broken thoughts, Makoto Takahashi raised his head and looked at Yoshida, with a dangerous smile on his face, "Has your suicide note been written?"

“…… Anyway, I just saw this, right? The rest of the content is...... "No matter if you don't have discipline or admit it, Yoshida wisely didn't continue the dangerous topic with Makoto Takahashi! On the one hand, Yoshida didn't want to disturb the work of a certain junior high school manga artist, and on the other hand, he ...... Ahem, everybody gets it!

After quietly reading the remaining manga drafts in his hand, and then waiting for Makoto Takahashi to finish the manga drafts that should be completed today, I talked to a second-year cartoonist about the problems and flaws of the manga "One Punch Man", and finally figured out Makoto Takahashi's thoughts and found a way to solve the problems and flaws of the manga "One Punch Man......

Originally, Yoshida planned it this way...... Originally, Yoshida was not wrong with such a plan......

"Eh, this, this, this, this ......" It's a pity that Yoshida's previous fantasy plan was broken by himself......

And the reason why Yoshida made such an amazing cry is naturally because in this manga "One Punch Man", he saw a rather amazing plot!

That's why Saitama sensei is bald...... Ahem, no, it should be the secret of Saitama Sensei's transformation from [an ordinary office worker] to a [superman who is so powerful that any weirdo can kill with one punch]!