Although he was amazed by the sudden change in the style of a certain secondary manga artist, Yoshida only hesitated for a moment because he was surprised, and then continued to look through the manga manuscript in his hand......

Speaking of the fine painting style, although it will indeed have a certain impact on many readers, but for most readers, it is naturally immune to interference from the painting style!

After all, for reading...... Uh, no, for those who have watched a lot of comic manuscripts...... What really determines the quality of comics is actually the quality of the comics themselves!

As the editor-in-charge of the weekly magazine, Yoshida naturally will not be deceived by the elaborate painting style, and tries his best to ignore the urge to complain about the painting style in his heart, and tries to focus his attention on the plot content of the manga...... After all, so far, Yoshida has not discovered the [key point] plot predicted by his new wife Eiji before!

Push open the hidden door, and the ...... is in sight But it's a girl lying in a pool of blood!

Although the male protagonist shows the two cute attributes of [Middle Two Disease] and [Delusion of Victimization] in the first episode of the comic, this does not mean that the male protagonist in a white coat is a guy who lacks common sense!

Anyone with a little common sense knows that when you find yourself at the scene of a crime, even if you will not be taken as a suspect by some guy with the aura of death, you will at least be taken to the bureau for interrogation...... And the actor Rentaro Okabe, who has the delusion of being killed, thinks more and more complicated in the face of this kind of murder scene!

So at this moment, the brain doesn't need to think too much, and the body is superior to the mind to be the first to respond......

Escape the scene!

Flee the scene!

Do everything you can to escape the scene!

After finding the truth of his childhood friend, Ryotaro Okabe immediately fled to the street with the other party......

If this is a mystery comic, the follow-up plot development is first a detective with a grim aura's appearance; then the police come slowly with a crowd of onlookers mixed with the real murderer; and then the black history of the victim is constantly revealed in front of the corpse, showing the ugliest side of human nature; finally, the detective, according to the clues at the scene of the crime and various dialogues, find the decisive clues, and point out the murderer under the watchful eyes of a group of uncles and aunts who can only shout 666, and successfully obtain fame and fortune and a large amount of satisfaction！

But it's a pity that the manga called "The Gate of the Destiny Stone" that Yoshida observed at this moment is not a mystery manga, so naturally there will be no detectives......

Even though you have just experienced all kinds of frightening events, as long as you blend in with the crowd, even if you don't talk to anyone, you can get rid of the previous anxiety and fear in a short time...... In other words, humans are really strange creatures, but what really frightens humans is actually human beings themselves, right?

The actor Rentaro Okabe is also the same as ordinary people at this point...... When Ryotaro Okabe mixed in the crowd with Mayuri, his panicked heart gradually calmed down, and he sent a text message to his friend!

“…… It's unexpectedly ordinary!" Stopping to look through the manga manuscript again, Yoshida looked up at Makoto Takahashi with some helplessness and confusion, and muttered quietly, "Although I admit it, the protagonist is very similar to someone...... But that's just the extent, right? At least so far, I don't think that the character of [Middle Two Disease] has a role in promoting the development of the whole comic!"

In terms of character design, although the setting of the male protagonist's middle two disease is a little peculiar, and it is slightly different from the performance of a certain middle two cartoonist that Yoshida is familiar with, but this is not too much of a problem......

After all, no matter what kind of work you are in, the characters with strange attributes will be easily recognizable on the reader's side...... In other words, there is no work without a design, but it doesn't exist at all, right?

But if the character's character design is not well integrated with the work, that is, the so-called "low fit" as the saying goes...... No matter how brilliant the character design is, no matter how godly the plot is, it can't save the fate of the failure of the work, right?

For example, a certain [X Aotian] character who has been complained about many times, put it in a work with a rigorous setting such as "Steel Forge", if it is a fan, it may produce a very good effect...... But it undoubtedly destroyed the structural rigor of the original work, so that many layouts of this comic collapsed directly, and the plot fell directly to the altar!

This is a classic case of character design and comics [low fit]!

So you can see why Yoshida is so emotional!?

Regarding the character design of the manga "Gate of Destiny Stone", if it is calculated on a 100-point scale, Yoshida can definitely give more than 90 points to the characters currently appearing in the manga, that is, the male protagonist Rentaro Okabe and the female protagonist for the time being...... But judging from the plot that Yoshida has observed so far, it can only be thirty points at most!

And this score is still in the comics Makise Red Liqi, the girl who appeared on the stage and then received the bento died, can only be given!

"Ah Cheng, you guy, even if it's the last serialized work, there's no need to be so willful, so self-indulge......nt, right?

Originally, Yoshida wanted to persuade a secondary cartoonist to revise the plot in such a complaining way......

But after turning the next page of the comic manuscript, Yoshida's [spitting persuasion] that originally came to his lips couldn't say anything!

Because in the manga, after Rentaro Okabe sent a message, the whole world changed!

In the comic draft, a close-up scene was deliberately given to a string of unexplained numbers, and then ......

When Rentaro Okabe, whose consciousness was briefly blurred, came back to his senses and found himself suddenly in a world like a dead city!

The building, which was originally crowded with onlookers......

Crowded intersections......

Busy streets......

Noisy human voices......

It's all gone!

"Ahh............h Is this what the new wife Eiji said about the "key plot"?But I don't understand it at all!?What the hell is going on!?"

Obviously, Yoshida deliberately asked a puzzled question in order to attract the attention of a certain secondary manga artist, and then, as usual, while answering questions, he mocked himself by the way...... Of course, for a secondary and second cartoonist, the answer is only secondary or incidental, and the main thing is to mock Yoshida to get [pleasure]!

But this time, a secondary and secondary manga artist ignored Yoshida, and instead crossed his legs, curled up in a chair, and stared at the manga manuscript on the table......

Yoshida used the [Obsessed] skill on Makoto Takahashi!

Makoto Takahashi is not affected because of the characteristic [Sluggish]!

After Yu Guang spied that a certain secondary and second manga artist did not intend to pay attention to him, Yoshida stood up with the manga manuscript and prepared to express his doubts directly to the other party...... However, Yoshida only took a step, but suddenly stopped, retracted the step he had taken, and sat back on the sofa!

“…… Forget it, I'll read the rest of the comics first!"

To emphasize, Yoshida's temporary change of mind was just to fulfill his obligation to read the manga before commenting......

It's definitely not because I'm afraid of a secondary two cartoonist!

Well, absolutely not!

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