Please give me a few opportunities to make mistakes

Maggie Cheung chose to sing when she was only fifty years old, and was complained about because she was frequently out of tune, she said, it doesn't matter, I have more than 20 plays in a row, singing, please give me a few opportunities to make mistakes. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

That's what the fat man wants to say.

Since the release of the first chapter on May 29, 2014, the fat man has written more than 3 million words, and his level has improved, but there are still many problems.

Today, I specifically found two author friends to read the previous article, and I myself read it carefully several times, and finally reached the same conclusion, the high school part is indeed long, and from 24 to 74, there is still a problem of inappropriate details.

In the high school part of this volume, the fat man's original plan was 65,000 words, but as soon as he wrote it, he thought of a lot of interesting people and things in high school, as well as the vision of the world at that time, and suddenly exceeded the control of the outline, and wrote 165,000 words, the control was too poor and outrageous.

Then,The fat man instantly made a bad person.,One afternoon the previous text was deleted.,Almost delete 10 chapters of content that doesn't affect the direction of the plot.,It's much better to read.,When I was about to revise.,But I stopped.,Send the book for more than a month.,At this time, a lot of deletions will bring a lot of trouble.,Think about it or don't change it.,Just take it as a gift to myself.。

Please also be tolerant, I am definitely not selling dog meat with a sheep's head, and the college entrance examination will end soon.

Serialization, the pressure of updating every day, it is difficult to ensure that a book has no shortcomings, even Master Jin Yong can't avoid it, and it is modified many times after the completion of the book, which is why the nature of serialization determines that every book has problems.

Hehe, in fact, although it is out of control, but those characters are very cute, aren't they? For those brothers who criticize, I think it's also because they found the shining point, and the love is deeply responsible, otherwise it's a bad book, who wants to comment on so many words.

Although there are many problems, there are still many highlights, right, everyone should be patient to see the performance of the fat man later, anyway, I will write this book firmly and diligently.