Chapter 520: The third manga draft that Yoshida saw that day
"My family is a cat, although your serious and responsible attitude is worth boasting about, but don't make the same mistake!" Just as Yoshida picked up the manga manuscript and was about to enter the [Appreciation] mode, Makoto Takahashi's gloomy voice also sounded, "Last time you were looking for Sai...... Ahem, looking for the name of the bald actor was unsuccessful, and the [lesson] after that should not be forgotten, right?
“…… Before that, I want to make sure first, Ah Cheng, do you really reveal the name of the male protagonist in the comic manuscript of this episode?" It seems that Yoshida has already understood the truth of [Eat a trench and grow a wisdom], and before reading the comic manuscript, he directly confirmed with the comic author!" "If Ah Cheng didn't announce the content of this sentence, even if I read it carefully, I wouldn't have it!"
"Shhh............hh Speaking of which, my dependents are cats, when did you change jobs? And you can hide your breath so well, this is not something that can be done overnight!"
There is no intention to continue to pay attention to Makoto Takahashi, because at this moment Yoshida has already begun to look at the content of the third episode of "One Punch Man" in his hand!
Under the pretext of "I'm going to observe the manga carefully at the moment", Yoshida was finally able to avoid the [mental destruction] performed by Makoto Takahashi...... Congratulations!
Under the pretext of "I want to observe the manga seriously at the moment", Yoshida slightly postponed the [Compulsory Psychological Counseling] plan that a secondary and secondary manga artist was looking forward to...... Congratulations!
Under the pretext of "I want to observe the manga carefully at the moment", Yoshida once again embarked on a journey of [finding the name of a bald male protagonist]...... Gratifying...... No, because this reminds the editor in charge of the dark memory of being killed by a secondary and second cartoonist, and it's not worth saying anything at all [gratifying congratulations]!
In fact, the content of the first six episodes of "One Punch Man" was read by Yoshida long before the manga entered the weekly serialization...... It's just that the manga manuscript that Yoshida observed at that time was called the [original version] by a certain middle two manga artist - the version with a magical painting style!
At the beginning, the manga manuscript that was not even a storyboard, Yoshida, as a senior editor in charge, although he was coerced by Makoto Takahashi later, did observe it carefully...... But at that time, Yoshida only finished reading the first episode of the manga!
The content of the third episode starts with a pair of brothers!
The older brother is an inventor, while the younger brother is an exercise freak!
The younger brother works hard every day to become the strongest person in the world, and the elder brother, a scientist, like the mad scientist in many novels and comics, wants to rule the world through some bizarre inventions......
Referring to the plots of the manga he has observed in the past, according to Yoshida's experience as the editor in charge, a scientist like this will either be wiped out by the protagonist and the members of the protagonist's side in the middle of the plan or at the critical moment, or because of the author's great will, the luck of these people will drop even lower than that of the spearman, so that these crazy or evil plans will collapse for various reasons......
The simple way to put it is...... Bad guys have no human rights, let alone luck!
So just by observing the opening part of the manga, Yoshida already has a rough guess about the next plot direction...... However, when Yoshida turned to the next page of the comic draft, he was surprised to find that this scientist brother had really succeeded!
He actually invented a magical potion that can strengthen humans!
And that younger brother who only knows how to exercise, after drinking the potion, has also transformed into a huge muscular brother giant!
Ignoring the hilarious dialogue between the brothers in the manga, Yoshida frowned, and his hand flipping through the manga paused for a moment...... Because of the development of this plot, it was a little unexpected by Yoshida!
Jun, the younger brother of the super muscular brother noble giant, under the command of the mad scientist, embarks on a crazy journey of destruction!
One foot falls and half the city is trampled ......
With a single palm, the palm wind destroyed several high-rise buildings, and also caused hundreds of thousands of human casualties......
In other words, this is really a hero comic, not a disaster comic...... Looking at the information revealed between the words of the scientist in the comics when he boasted about his brother's achievements, Yoshida couldn't help but have such doubts!
Just when the two brothers who were wreaking havoc on the city were immersed in this exaggerated power, the mad scientist standing on his brother's right shoulder found that there was actually a person standing on the other side, that is, on his brother's left shoulder......
"Eh, that bald man...... Did it appear before?" Through the dialogue in the manga, Yoshida looked back with some uncertainty, but found that as the mad scientist in the manga said, the bald male protagonist had appeared before, but he didn't notice it at the time!"It's really there......! Uh-huh, this kind of carefulness as always, and the bad taste that can be seen everywhere!
"Let's put on my underwear!" suggests a bald man standing on the shoulders of a super muscular giant, with a rather unscrupulous smile on his face......
looked at the actor's smile and expression, as well as the shiny bald head...... Not to mention the super muscular brother noble giant and his brother in the comics, even Yoshida, who is an observer of the manga, has the idea of [suddenly wanting to beat this dead bald man hard]!
The comic "One Punch Man" seems to enter a period of [Sage Time] after the male protagonist appears...... For example, when the bald actor first appeared in the face of the vaccine man, he first looked disgusted with the vaccine man's talk, and then after solving the vaccine man with one punch, he complained that the vaccine man was not strong enough and was solved by his own punch......
And the comic draft of the third episode seems to continue this style!
The super muscular brother noble giant, who had just destroyed the city with great ferocity and caused a lot of killing, actually killed his brother by mistake under the command of his mad scientist brother [kill the man standing on his shoulder]! And the bald male protagonist who should have really been killed was holding his ears while putting on an extremely poor smile when the giant wailed and roared......
Before turning the next page of the manga, Yoshida took a deep breath, then sneaked a glance at Makoto Takahashi, who was busy finishing the manga, and then held his breath and turned the next page of the manga...... The reason why Yoshida did this is naturally because of the next plot of the manga!
Because according to the pattern of the first two episodes of "One Punch Man", the plot that will appear next is naturally what Yoshida is looking forward to, and the fierce fight between the male protagonist and the super muscular brother Gui Giant who has not yet been revealed!
The super muscular brother and the giant first pinched the bald male protagonist standing on his shoulders with both hands and threw him to the ground hard, then jumped high and stepped on it fiercely, and then punched at a very fast speed and even swung an afterimage, constantly hitting the bald male protagonist lying in the deep pit......
"This fight scene...... Belch...... This inexplicable sense of familiarity, could it be that comic?" Looking at some of the movements of the super muscular brother and noble giant in the comic manuscript, the corners of the mouth of a responsible editor began to twitch non-stop...... Because Yoshida saw some familiar images!
"This part of the fight scene is very troublesome to draw, so I refer to the style of some other manga......" Makoto Takahashi, who didn't know when he appeared next to Yoshida, suddenly said, "Uh-huh, my family is a cat, just as you guessed...... Don't look incredulous! This scene is the manga you think of! I think you used to be the editor in charge of that adult, right?"
"The result is really true!" Yoshida couldn't help but laugh at Makoto Takahashi's shameless admission, "Makoto, you guy, haven't you never drawn this kind of fight scene before...... Is it necessary to imitate it like this?"
"I just want to pay tribute to that adult through comics......"
"Hey, hey, I remember Ah Cheng, you just ...... That's not what I just said!"
"Tsk, my family cat, have you reached the age when you begin to doubt your own life? It is said that human beings know that at this time, life is like a candle in the wind...... My family is a cat, you are really pitiful!"
"Hey, it's a curse! You're definitely cursing me!"
"No, just tell my family cat some common sense you don't know, that's all!"
The complaint between the two ended with Makoto Takahashi winning a big victory, Yoshida naturally continued to observe the manga draft in his hand, and Makoto Takahashi also began to continue to complete his unfinished manga draft!
In fact, the manga manuscript that Yoshida wanted to observe was only one page left!
"Overwhelming power...... It's actually very boring!" The bald male protagonist who was beaten by the super muscle brother and giant in the previous comics suddenly jumped out of the pit and punched the super muscle brother and giant......
And then...... And then there is no more!
There was no scene of any violent fighting, and the big bald head suddenly popped out of the ruins of the city, and with just one punch, he defeated the super muscular brother noble giant...... Just like the first episode of this comic that broke the vaccine man, this time the bald male protagonist only used one punch to solve the enemy!
"Huh?" But this time the bald actor didn't complain as he did in the first sentence......
Because this time, as the villain, the super muscular brother noble giant, when he fell, because of his huge body, he once again destroyed the city B set in the comics!
The content of the third episode of the manga "One Punch Man", although Yoshida read it very carefully and carefully, it didn't take too much time, on the one hand, because the plot of the manga itself is very simple, and on the other hand, it ...... The content of the third episode this time, although some of the plot developments, were indeed beyond Yoshida's expectations, but the excitement did not meet Yoshida's expectations!
"Overwhelming power...... It's boring...... Fear of the unknown...... ...... with expectations"
Recalling the last scene of the manga, Yoshida looked up at a certain secondary cartoonist who was finishing the manga in earnest, Yoshida's mouth opened, but in the end he chose to be silent......!
Yoshida already understood a little bit about the meaning of Makoto Takahashi's words before! Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info)