Chapter 70: Unraveling the mystery and having a clear goal
"How's your foot yesterday?"
"It's not a big deal, it's much better now than it was then. Pen Fun Pavilion www.biquge.info"
"You don't know how anxious Purple Butterfly Sauce was when she found out that you weren't there when she gathered at eight o'clock yesterday, and rushed out without saying a word, and the elder couldn't stop her, so she could only follow her to find you......"
"I know all of this......" Ling Xing sighed faintly, threw his schoolbag on the empty seat next to him, and then found a random place to sit down. Because it was almost the Xia A Starry Night Festival, the other members of the art club were all sent home by An Xiaoxi to make final preparations, so in the current club activity room, only An Xiaoxi, the president, and Ling Xing who arrived, even Ye Zidie did not come.
This final preparation, Ling Xing should work hard to improve her book, and others can't help much, so they can only rely on Ling Xing himself, at most, An Xiaoxi, as the president, can still put forward some suggestions on the side.
"Your sister is really not very competent. ”
"Isn't that something unexpected...... Wouldn't you call me over today to talk about these things?" But An Xiaoxi could still care about his foot injury when he entered the door, and Ling Xing's heart was still warm.
"Of course not, doing drudgery like urging editors, you also have to sympathize with me, okay?"
"Forehead......" Ling Xing thought about it, this so-called urging object should be himself, right? he had already dragged the finished manuscript of "Cherry on the Ripples" until now, and it was not completely completed...... In this way, I'm really sorry for An Xiaoxi.
"I have a six-year-old sister who has been oppressing me there, and there is a group of sub-club members waiting for me to lead them to fight against the erosion of the Lady Society, do you say that I am easy day by day? Finally, when you see a little hope, don't destroy my little young heart anymore......" Like pouring beans, An Xiaoxi began to pour bitter water on Ling Xingda in one breath, in short, the core idea is one sentence: You are all in such a miserable position, hurry up and finish the fandom that promised me!
"An-la, I know, I'll definitely finish it before the Comic Con starts!" Ling Xing said firmly.
"The day before Comic Con is also counted as before...... Don't give it to me back then, when the daylilies are cold. ”
"How is that possible?" Ling Xing said with a dry smile, "It's obviously just a matter of losing it, okay! And I've also revised and improved the problems you mentioned last time." ”
"Really, let me take a look at the new version of Cherry on the Ripples!"
"Luckily, I brought the portable hard drive in advance, so I knew you would definitely ask for it. Ling Xing said with a smile, and took out the mobile hard drive from his schoolbag without hurrying. When An Xiaoxi was going to meet her again this morning during the group contact club activity time, she expected that An Xiaoxi would definitely have this need, although she didn't mention it in the message...... Probably forgot.
"Ling Xing-chan is awesome! I'm still wondering if I can't see it today because I forgot to mention it!"
Well, sure enough, I forgot......
The newly revised "Cherry on the Ripples" tells the story of a pair of young girls who do forbidden things in the classroom after sunset, but are accidentally discovered by the homeroom teacher...... Except for the beginning of which is a large raw meat scene depicting how girl A is ravaged and trained by girl B, the plot of the story begins to slowly become subtle.
Compared with the original version, except for the beginning to sell to attract the reader's attention, the overall indescribable scene is much less. Instead, Ling Xing began to depict the girls' mental journey with a large number of brushstrokes. Combined with the ability of words to gather and paint, although the surface looks much purer, it leaves more room for the reader, and the shape is scattered but not dispersed, which is much more advanced than the old version.
The improvement at the end is also obvious.,The ending of the 1.0 version,It's the girls who have been [beep-] many times and finally tasted the sweetness of the forbidden fruit.,So I spent a happy life with the teacher without shame.,The scene is naturally still ended by [beep-]. And the ending of version 2.0 is that the girls are completely impressed by the teacher after experiencing many resistances but to no avail. The two greeted the sunset and walked happily to the teacher's home...... Coupled with the painting style of the internship period and the text gathering painting, the last two pictures have reached the real boutique level!
The main reason why she can do this is because Ling Xing has too much experience during this time, and the ghost knows what she has experienced! Ling Xing, who has been polished by countless ups and downs, finally began to gradually reveal the grandeur of an old driver.
Let's just say that the last two high-quality pictures, although there is not much h, but it leaves infinite imagination space and endless aftertaste, plus the beautiful scenery like wallpaper, sales will definitely rise again.
And what Ling Xing said was not completed, in fact, it was just the coloring of this last part. Although it is said that black and white fandom is also the mainstream of comic exhibitions, after many discussions with An Xiaoqian and Leng Mengyuan, Ling Xing resolutely chose color comics this time...... This is her first child, and of course she has to be in the perfect condition!
"Yes, yes, the plot has improved a lot compared to before, but one of the girls is becoming more and more like you, and the other one has never shown a straight face......" An Xiaoxi looked at Ling Xing strangely, his eyes seemed to say, how much do you want to develop such a relationship with Senior Ling Qianqiu!
"I can't help it, it seems to be some kind of sequelae, right?" Ling Xing covered her face, she didn't want to do this, but unfortunately she couldn't control her claws! It's also fortunate that she didn't paint the face of another girl, otherwise she felt that it would be more and more like Ye Zidie's......
"But this is a deduction item, which will affect the reader......'s mood," An Xiaoxi said in a tangled manner, "After all, no one can bear to see such a delicate and cute little Lori, but it is hard to see her angelic face." ”
"I'm also in trouble......" Ling Xing was also helpless, she also needed high sales to make her make more money, "But is there any other way now, it is definitely impossible for me to draw a straight face." ”
"Actually, there are still solutions. ”
"What's the solution?"
"It's too late for overhauls, so it's good to let the main focus of those otaku be on one of the characters, that is, to marginalize the other characters and make them not particularly important. ”
"For example, you!" An Xiaoxi pointed his finger at the character who looked like Ling Xing, and looked at Ling Xing with an inexplicable meaning......