The main business of the entertainment company is to shoot variety shows and music, and only Shi Kailin is pushed. Because Shi Kailin's appearance conditions are more suitable for being a star, the company helped him search for a few good songs and help him make an album to make his debut.

But Shi Kailin's debut results are very average, tepid, and there are only more than 70,000 fans, which are not as good as Chu Dong and Zhuo Jianhong, who have not officially debuted. The album sold only more than 8,000 copies, losing its old book.

It is not good to be out of school, and the senior management of the entertainment company is considering whether to continue to push Shi Kailin. His failure made Zhuo Jianhong and others, who originally wanted to make their debut, a little panicked, because this kind of achievement was too embarrassing.

In film and television dramas, Jiang Zhen is still polishing his script.

"Chairman, you came just in time, the new script has just been written, please take a look. Jiang Zhen said.

"I'm not a director, what's the use of you showing me. Hang Yu said.

"Bystander Qing, give me a little comment from the audience's point of view. Jiang Zhen said: "I asked the editorial department to write more than a dozen scripts, carefully selected, changed and changed, and I will never let you down." ”

"You're so confident, you don't need me to look at it. Hang Yu said.

Jiang Zhen is not good at communication, and she doesn't know how to answer Hang Yu.

He looked at Hang Yu's eyes and couldn't understand what Hang Yu meant.

"Just kidding, show me it. Hang Yu said.

"I thought you didn't care. Jiang Zhen handed him the script and introduced: "According to your request, we focused on describing the change of mentality of the male protagonist, but we did not write the plot of the male teacher. Mainly considering that the plot is too congested, foreigners can still watch it, and the sense of substitution is not so strong, our own girl shoots like this, and the audience doesn't dare to watch it. ”

Hearing this, Hang Yu nodded, Jiang Zhen's consideration was reasonable.

We often see foreign films, especially Korean films, filming all kinds of heart-stopping plots, but because we know that they are foreigners, we are not so uncomfortable. If a female compatriot is insulted, it will be difficult for most viewers to accept it, and it will result in word-of-mouth and no box office.

After reading it roughly, Hang Yu put down the script and said: "It's better than last time, but the plot twist is too blunt and deliberate." ”

Jiang Zhen waited for the compliment, but she didn't expect Hang Yu to be so demanding, and asked depressedly, "What's so blunt?"

Hang Yu said: "The most blunt part is the process of the male protagonist falling in love with the heroine, the heroine is very beautiful, right, why write that after the male protagonist sees her, he doesn't feel anything about her, and it's awkward." ”

Jiang Zhen said: "I didn't have a good impression at first, but then I was moved by the heroine's behavior of caring for the students in the mountain village, I think it's good." ”

Hang Yu waved his hand and said: "It's a big mistake, your routine is not interesting at all, but it will make people think that the heroine is a white lotus." No matter how men are, they all hate White Lotus more, and your character creation has failed. ”

Jiang Zhen opened her mouth slightly, thought for a while and said, "Yes, then how do you think it should be changed?"

In fact, he wanted to refute Hang Yu, but he couldn't find a reason to refute it.

"It's very simple, a man doesn't need a reason to fall in love with a woman at all, it's enough to be beautiful and have a pure temperament. Hang Yu picked up the script again, turned the first page and said: "You see, in order to complete the teaching indicators, the school leaders arranged the male protagonist with no background to teach in the mountain village. The actor was very unhappy and tried to find a way to trust the relationship, but in the end it didn't work. If it is not well written here, it should make him not only not succeed, but accidentally offend the leader and be arranged to a more remote village, which will be more dramatic. ”

"No problem, you can change it. Jiang Zhen nodded.

"Because it's too remote, it's best to let the protagonist go to the village and suffer a little, such as rain halfway, muddy roads, and the car can't drive in, so you can only walk. Accidentally fell, fell miserably, the male protagonist scolded his mother... Such details are very important, you don't have them here, so you directly transferred the picture to the teacher in the mountain village. You can't be lazy when writing a script, you must be meticulous in the details. Hang Yu said.

"I understand. Jiang Zhen continued to nod.

"The male protagonist only went to the mountain village at night.,Entertained by the principal.,This principal must have characteristics.,It's okay for you to describe it here.。 But before I started teaching, I described too much, and if I wanted to show the appearance of the mountain village, there were many villagers, which is not good. The audience wants to see the protagonist teaching, and now that they are in the mountain village, the scene can directly switch to the protagonist teaching in the classroom. Hang Yu said.

"Yes, no problem. Jiang Zhen continued to nod.

"The heroine shouldn't appear too late, come out quickly, the protagonist who was originally depressed came to the scene immediately after seeing the heroine. Have you seen Stephen Chow's truant Weilong, he suffered a series of setbacks at school, and he changed when he saw the heroine. Hang Yu said.

"Yes. Jiang Zhen said.

"But ours is different from the truant Weilong, the hero and heroine are very young, and they should be more lively. So I suggest that both the male and female protagonists can be described lively, clever, and cunning. The heroine is also very young, and she has been teaching in the mountain village for so long, and she will definitely not be indifferent when she sees her peers and is a handsome guy. Hang Yu said.

"Makes sense. Jiang Zhen nodded.

"Domestic youth romance films are often written more depressingly, either the male protagonist is not strong, or the female protagonist is not right, the process is sad and grinding, I don't like it very much. You just write.,The male and female protagonists look at each other as soon as they come.,The male protagonist is very cheeky.,No discipline.,And you have to have some talents.,Like singing and chanting poetry.。 The female protagonist also likes the male protagonist, but she is more arrogant, and she must be a little reserved and tease the male protagonist. I won't go into detail about this process, but in short, it will be shown through other plots during the teaching period. Hang Yu said.

"No problem. Jiang Zhen said.

"This drama is called Hope Primary School, so you can't focus on love, don't make it a romance movie. If you want to show the difficulties and feelings of the villagers and children, you can still write here. Hang Yu said.

picked out a bunch of scripts, and repeatedly revised, and the overall quality of the script passed.

It depicts a poor and backward mountain village, where the protagonist is arranged to a very simple teacher's dormitory. Tiled houses, earthen walls, leaky wind, mosquitoes in summer, and freezing to death in winter.

The villagers respect the protagonist very much, a volunteer teacher who has graduated from college. But the child is not sensible, so in the process of education, the protagonist encounters a particularly naughty child, and he also gets angry and hits the student.

This passage is very true, because persuasion education is not suitable for some students, like some trees, which will grow crooked if not pruned.

However, the vast majority of students have been persuaded and educated, beaten, scolded, and done ideological work, and they have obviously been able to improve, and they know how to pay attention to hygiene and love cleanliness in life, and they are no longer so selfish in their thinking, and they know how to be filial to their elders in life, and they know how to be polite in life, and they no longer have so many typos in their studies, and they have gained some broadening in their horizons.

The people in the editorial department did the research and wrote a more realistic plot.

The protagonist goes to visit his home, and the simple villager brings out the best food in the house,—— dried fish, a piece of cured meat, and then the wine he brews.

Or usually reluctant to eat.

The simple feelings of the villagers are also mixed with very complicated meanings, and some villagers think that college students from the provincial capital have a lot of energy, and directly propose that the protagonist bring his baby to the provincial capital to earn money.

There are also students who have some conflicts because of play, and the villagers ask teachers to face their babies.

If the teacher does not give his baby, he will curse at least and will inevitably be beaten by the parents of both sides. Some villagers even beat the teacher and were still angry, so they went to the other party's parents to beat them.