Chapter 289: Upgrade the Male Protagonist
The script is written like this, from the long shot, a city that looks like an old London building in the 19th century appears in front of you, followed by a faint melancholy music, and Murong Bingyu with a camera wanders the streets, lazy and tired.
In the play, she is a female reporter who travels all over the country to shoot landscapes and record beautiful moments of the city. She has been adrift for a long time, always looking for a warm harbor, but the reality does not allow her to make a choice. One day, Murong Bingyu arrived in a new city and heard that there was a beautiful scenery called "Fengqiao", and then, of course, in order to fit the theme, he met the actor Liao Xuebing here, and the two knew each other and fell in love......
The plot is very pale, but Xiong Fei has repeatedly emphasized that this is a love literary film, as long as there is an extremely beautiful picture, beautiful music that makes the listener cry and the listener is sad, it has already succeeded most of it, and with the joining of the big star, and the main clue of love that is barely touching, it is difficult not to sell out.
Liao Xuebing saw a lot of lines he didn't like: "Screenwriter Xiong, you think about it carefully, after the two of them rowed through the bridge hole of Fengqiao, the male protagonist affectionately said to the heroine, 'Love, is the sun of hope rising in the morning, love, is the breeze blowing in the heart'...... It's too stupid, you should be a drama, saying it like this will only make the audience feel false, and then disgusted." Liao Xuebing is a Chinese teacher with rich reading experience, who is good at analyzing the plot and psychological expression of the characters' dialogues in the text, and pointing out what he thinks is inappropriate.
Xiong Fei's achievements were criticized, and he was a little unconvinced, saying: "Then you think it should be changed, right?
Sun Bo was talking with someone, and when he heard the dispute, he opened the script and found a dialogue, and participated in the plot before and after, and immediately nodded again and again: "The protagonist really doesn't fit the temperament we preconceived when he says this." Xiong Fei, it's better for you to change your life seriously. β
When the director spoke, Xiong Fei thought about it seriously, crossed out that paragraph with a pen, and said: "That's it, after passing under the bridge, the two stared at each other, and the actor said, 'You are the most beautiful moment in my life......"
"Poof", Liao Xuebing couldn't help but laugh and squirted out a sip of coffee. Xiong Fei said unhappily: "No, how do you say it should be changed?"
Director Sun and the producer didn't think Liao Xuebing could have any high opinions, and said, "Just follow Xiong Fei's method." β
Liao Xuebing was helpless and spread the script in front of him: "Swap the identities of the two, and replace the sensual and enthusiastic words with the heroine talking to the ground, and the male protagonist is silent, so it's very good." β
Several people glanced at each other, Xiong Fei carefully simulated a scene in his mind, and praised the knot: "Wonderful, why can't I think of it all the time." This confrontation is indeed much more vivid and concrete, especially in line with the identities of the two in the play. Mr. Liao, you can really do it. β
This is a revision of the details, and everyone in the crew often brainstorms, and many people have their own unique way of understanding. Sun Bo just thought that he had a flash of inspiration, and it didn't mean that his ability was stronger than that of a screenwriter just because of a revision opinion.
"Cousin" was approved by others, and Murong Bingyu also felt a little more brilliance on his face, and finally did not lose face, and said with a smile: "Of course, my cousin is very talented." β
Liao Xuebing said: "This ending is too bland, with the heroine as the main perspective, and finally she was recalled by the newspaper, the two broke up, and returned to the same place a year later, but they could no longer find the male protagonist, leaving the audience to reminisce." It seems to be a long time, but it is a very irresponsible way to deal with it. β
"Oh, what is Mr. Liao's opinion?" Director Xue thinks of Liao Xuebing, but Xiong Fei doesn't think so, there is a saying in literature that "a word master", and he has been immersed in the tip of the pen for ten years, so he naturally knows what the seemingly simple change means to the changes in the article.
"Add a high chΓ‘o plot, after the two quarrel, the heroine goes to the maple bridge to sulk, but the rainstorm hits, the river does not rise, and the maple bridge shakes and falls, trapping her. At this time, the male protagonist appeared to rescue her, but he was swallowed by the raging river. β
Xiong Fei hesitated: "Won't it become a tragedy, will there be any audience willing to watch our films in the future?"
"Why not sensationalize, the last picture turns, the time jumps to decades later, Fengqiao has been renovated, there is a voiceover that says, 'In the past few decades, I haven't thought about ......him for a day' But the heroine has never appeared on the front, so many kinds of longing words, how can you make the audience tempted, you are known as one of the four talents of Yintian and Gold, will you not be able to write?"
Xiong Fei said: "It seems to be okay, but the plot has been greatly repaired, and the production cost of that Fengqiao is going to increase again, Director Sun will not agree to ......" Before he finished speaking, Sun Bo shouted loudly: "Yes! I always felt that the film was too bland, as if there was something missing, but I couldn't think of it." That's right, that's right, it's best to change it to a tragic ending. Isn't "Titanic" so successful? Miss Bingyu, your cousin is a genius. β
The producer Wu couldn't realize the taste, and said stupidly: "The cost is straight, will Mr. Lao agree?"
"Increase the cost a little, but the probability of box office guarantee is greater than before, spend a little price, in exchange for a bigger return, isn't this your favorite thing to do as a businessman?"
"Director Sun, you are a great director, I will listen to you. You see that adding this plot will add millions more, and it is better to make a detailed budget for the expenses, so that I can report to Mr. Lao. β
The first revision can be said to be accidental, but the second opinion is enough to illustrate the extraordinaryness of Liao Xuebing, and everyone is impressed by him.
Xiong Enclave's screenwriting ability is remarkable, except for two shortcomings, no other flaws can be found.
Sun Bo said: "There was a kick-off ceremony last time, but this time it is completely remade, and we can create a new gimmick. At the press conference three days later, please be sure to be there for Mr. Liao, because the media are very interested in your identity. If you have time, I would like to ask some professionals to train you, and you should be very careful about what to say and what not to say in that situation, and you must not let the tricky reporters seize the handle. We're considering whether or not to spread the word about your cousin relationship with Miss Bingyu, which has both advantages and disadvantages. Just imagine, Murong Bingyu and her cousin both starred as a couple in the play, how much people should look forward to it, it is simply a super selling point. But this kind of relationship will also be disliked by some people, and may even be the target of attack. β
Bingyu's agent Xu Yan knew that the two were not cousins at all, and thought about it and said: "I think we can make a big fuss, the last time the camera was turned on, don't you remember?" Many FANS were very dissatisfied, saying that Yuan Shaowu defiled the goddess in their minds by playing the male lead, and there were crazy fans who sent blood letters to threaten us, which frightened us." This time it's Bingyu's cousin, which is completely acceptable to everyone, they feel that it's not a problem for cousins to be intimate with each other, and Zhonghui will focus on the film itself. β
"Well, then we'll advertise it like this. β
The agent said in his heart: "The man who didn't show up at the singer's meeting last time and made Bingyu depressed for several days is this Mr. Liao, it's really good, no wonder Bingyu is so fascinated by him." β
Because Liao Xuebing's role is very important, the director did not dare to despise it, saying: "In terms of salary, because the cost of the film is not high, it is about 500,000 yuan, if it is popular, it may be ten times or a hundred times that of today." Does Mr. Liao have an agent, this play is to be signed, and it is better to form a legally binding force, and everyone can perform their respective duties wholeheartedly, right?"
"I don't have an agent, but I'm Bingyu's cousin, and her agent is also my agent. β
Xu Yan raised her eyebrows: "Is Mr. Liao sure? Then I'll go back and draw up a brokerage contract to ensure that your interests will be maximized." β
The drama contract was to be signed with the producer Lao Langming, Sun Bo was not too anxious, a few people discussed some other matters, explained the precautions, and Liao Xuebing left.
When he came to school in the afternoon, Song Yuhao remembered that Liao Xuebing had promised to have fun after the exam, and clamored for him to fulfill his promise. β
After writing the handouts for half an hour, Gong Xuelin checked the luggage on her behalf, accusing the office of poor sanitary conditions and loose discipline, and also used the midterm exam results to say that this class is not good, that class has not grown, and the number of the class teachers has been counted, pointing to the names of Jiang Feng, Lu Chengda and other class teachers, and Jiang Feng is in his forties.
When he came to Liao Xuebing's side, before she could speak, Lao Liao's eyes glared: "Minister Gong, do you have anything to say? Do you plan to give out bonuses? If you don't have a bonus, please leave as soon as possible, don't interfere with our normal work." β
Jiang Feng broke out in a cold sweat, and said in his heart: "Isn't Liao Xuebing killing himself? β
"You...... What kind of attitude do you have?" Gong Xuelin raised her eyebrows.
"Don't forget what you said before the exam, I know it in my heart, and I don't want to say a few words without faith. Well, I'll buy a few pairs in a few days...... Hood for you, how about recalling the green chΕ«n that has been lost for fifty years?"
Gong Xuelin knew that she couldn't get a bargain from this hooligan, so she coldly put down a sentence: "Students can't be judged by grades alone, classroom discipline and student quality are equally important." At next week's all-staff meeting, the CΔo line score will be linked to the class teacher's salary and will be on the board agenda. After saying that, the leather shoes were stammered and left.
Jiang Feng was surprised: "What did you say to the old witch before? Her appearance of wanting to get angry but not being able to do so is really relieving, but you have to pay attention to her revenge." β
"The soldiers are coming, the water is flooding, what is there that I can't do?"
When I returned home after school, I saw that the door next door was wide open, several cleaners were sweeping the floor, and porters were moving things. Old Liao Qi said: "Why are you moving things around, Miss Tan?"
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