Locke drove to a nearby dessert shop with a good reputation and a private room.

took the little Lori Su Junxin into the store, asked for a private room, and after ordering something, Locke took off his sunglasses.

Now Locke's popularity has greatly increased, especially after the press conference of the postquel to Journey to the West, what he did was exposed, and after the press conference, many people know what he looks like. Therefore, he is usually quite careful when he goes out.

To Locke's surprise, this little Lori Su Junxin didn't seem to know herself.

That's right, when I told her my name just now, she didn't react.

The ordered things haven't been served yet, in order to avoid being cold, Locke asked without words: "Little sister, what do you have in your hand is the comic you drew yourself?"

Speaking of the comics, Little Lori looked very excited and said, "Yes, I drew it myself." I've loved drawing comics since I was a kid!

Speaking of the back, the voice slowly lowered, and the little face became a little gloomy.

"What's the matter? Is it rejected? I see a good painting skill!" Locke asked, puzzled.

Little Lori said gloomily: "The painting skills are okay, but I don't know how to make up stories." ”

Locke smiled and suggested, "You can take a look at the most popular comics at the moment, and then imitate more." Start with imitation, first imitate, and then innovate. ”

"I have imitations, I've read this book "The Return of Cats" dozens of times......" Lori pointed to a comic book on the sketch and said.

"Oh? Locke said casually, only to find out after finishing speaking-why do you want this comic book to read?

But seeing that little Lori handed over the copy of "The Return of the Cat", Locke also looked through it.

After reading it for 10 minutes, Locke threw the comic book away, a little speechless: "I didn't say you, little sister." If you want to imitate, you have to find a good comic to imitate! If you want to imitate this kind of comic, it can only be regarded as a medium-level comic imitation, and naturally it is only of an inferior level! Maybe you like this comic very much, but you can't be brainless and imitate this level of comic all the time! Aren't you dying yourself?"

Little Lori looked at Locke cautiously and said timidly, "But ...... But this is the hottest comic at the moment!"

"What?!" Locke was so startled that he almost stood up, but then sighed again and said speechlessly: "The level of domestic comics is low, you can find comics from island countries to imitate!"

"Oh, but I don't like their style......" Lori said

"It's ......," Locke didn't know what to say

"So, what do you like?" said Locke, who seemed to be a little overwhelmed

At this moment, there was a knock on the door.

Locke came back to his senses and said, "Please come in." ”

The waiter took the things ordered by the two of them, entered the private room, and couldn't help but be stunned when he saw Locke.

"Luo ......"

Locke smiled at her, put his finger to his lips, and made a secret gesture.

The waiter hurriedly shut up.

After getting the autograph and taking a group photo together, the waiter retreated contentedly, and when he left, he glanced at the little Lori Su Junxin quite strangely.

"Big brother, are you a star?" After seeing the waiter go out, Little Lori couldn't help asking.

Locke thought for a moment and said, "I'm still a star, I'm a singer cartoonist." ”

"Oh. Little Lori nodded, turned the topic back to the comics, and said, "I've watched "The Return of the Cat" dozens of times, and I've been trying to imitate it, but I haven't been able to do it well. Teacher Liu Ziqi is really amazing. ”

Speaking of the back, his face was full of adoration.

Locke was speechless - this kind of comics, which can only be regarded as second-rate levels, actually dominates in this China. No wonder Huaxia Animation lags behind RB...

And this little Lori can't even imitate this kind of comic, and her ability to make up stories is too bad......

Or...... Is she too focused on imitation?

"Because the plot is not good, the comics I drew have been rejected several times by Manke. Speaking of which, little Lori actually showed signs of crying.

When Locke saw it, he suddenly screamed in his heart, and hurriedly said: "Don't cry, the eldest brother is very good at making up stories, why don't you make up a story for you?"

Little Lori's eyes lit up, but then they dimmed again, and said, "Big brother, the comic stories are very long, and there is a lot of background information, which is different from the stories you usually tell." Even those comics that only have a dozen words, if they want to be clearly described in words, they need a lot of words. ”

Locke smiled and said, "Don't worry, you're satisfied." You have to believe in Big Brother. Big brother, I'm a writer. Well, wait a minute, I'll think about it. ”

Saying this, Locke thought about what comics to tell this little Lori, but in fact, he still went to the Overlord Mall to look for it.

"Recommended!" Locke said

["Stealing the Stars in September": A Wonderful Adventure of Love and Dreams...... Is it a manservant or a hot-blooded young detective? Jiang Yang thief is like a beautiful flower? The fog is layer after layer, and the suspense is one after another, and he can't breathe?

The Phantom of the Black Moon Iron Rider flashes, is it the friendship of brother and sister or the contest of mortal enemies?

One is a watery and lovely pink peach, the other is a silly bubbling green sweet potato, a paper debt slip, and the contract of the unjust family comes into effect! Miss Jiao Man is obsessed with money worship in front of the shiny shop window, and the international thief flies the eaves and walks the wall under the dark moonlight......

A game of cat and mouse hunting, in which he repeatedly misses, is swaying in the love of the black and white princess?The golden compass of fate turns...... ］

"What???" Locke asked

[The protagonist Liuxing - was originally a rich young master, but later because of the theft of the Ziweixing gem in September, his father left him to escape alone.] Fortunately, Lan Xue (September Day) rescued him and returned a huge amount of money, but he also became Lan Xue's "maid" - Cinderella, and vowed to catch September Day.

It always plays an important role in a critical moment.,Crush on Xiaoxue.。 After several failed attempts to capture the Nine Days, he decided to take the VV Academy exam and become a detective.

During a mission in the Strait of Malacca, he thought that September had killed the instructor of VV Academy, and his anger inspired his sixth sense and injured September Heaven, who later realized that he had misunderstood September and turned to look for September.

Returning to VV Academy, he was sent on a mission to New York, during which he was prophesied by Monica. After the New York crisis ended, he received a summoning order from VV Academy to go to Casablanca, North Africa, to rendezvous with Red Moon and Ayou, but the fallen angel caused the plane to explode, Red Moon and Ayou were killed, and Ryuho escaped by accident because he met his father. And inspired him to develop his seventh sense!

After encountering the desert bandits, the fallen angel Liuli revealed his identity, the greedy wolf, and the January were poisoned and fainted, and Liuxing took the lead to face the fallen angel.

Xiang September once again showed his determination, passed the test of Cangyue, successfully developed the seventh sense cloud control technique, and came to the ethereal city of the ancient Yan Kingdom with Greedy Wolf and others, and took September to rescue October. Later, he accidentally discovered that Xiaozi was pretending to be glass, and took Lilith back to the present world with him. In the "maid's hut", the fallen angels raid, and October, the broken army, and the greedy wolf have no chance of winning because Heinz's gravitational pull is too strong.

In order to save them, he drank the blood of hell and turned into a demon and seriously injured Heinz in an instant. went home to see Xiaoxue and gave Xiaoxue a "love cloud" as a gift for confession. Then he went to Poseidon with October and others to inquire about the news of March and April.

When he went to the Poseidon Palace to investigate, he met Lilith and learned about the situation in March and April. In the Poseidon competition, he covers the Broken Army and Sissi, but he is also seriously injured by the Blue Gray Six of the Darkmoon Knight, activating the blood of hell and injuring the Blue Ten. Outnumbered, he was kidnapped by Muir V.

Muir V threatened in September and tearfully robbed the broken army, so that Muir V obtained the earth element. In order to protect September, he was seriously wounded by Muir V. Rescued September under the cover of the broken army. But in September, he was beaten because of a misunderstanding and sacrifice of the army, and then he was surrounded and suppressed by the dark moon.

Ryuxing exchanged his flesh and blood for demonic power to save September, killing Orange Yao 5 in seconds. In the end, the fourth used the abyss demon to drag him into the demon world, and after being swallowed by the mother of the demon world, Taiya, he broke out of his belly and became the new demon lord, appearing in front of the tenth and fourth who came to the demon world. In the Battle of Meditation City, he helped September defeat the Ghost Path.

In the Demon Realm, Ryuxing meets September again but is completely demonized, and the attack on September is unsuccessful. Later appeared in the Demon Lord's lair. Launched an attack on September and others in the nest, and after being wounded, they attacked September.

Faced with September, who changed into a maid outfit, he stopped attacking and his memories began to awaken. Later, he was summoned by the ferryman's whistle and defeated the rebellious demon creatures. In the face of the demons attacking the Night Wing City, the energy of the Demon Capital was mutated and Ataya!

Later, he was awakened by September's soul state and infiltrated into Ryuxing's heart. Obtain the Black Emperor Star and the light element left behind by September, and then block the Doomsday Cannon with only one hand.

After the destruction of the Demon Realm, he returned to the human world, challenged Muir V in the form of the Demon Lord, and took over the baton of Xuanyue's salvation. Enraged by Muir V's atrocities, he unleashed the Doomsday Cannon, severely damaging Muir V, and Ryukei used most of his energy, and was then attacked by Muir V and knocked unconscious, taking away the light and aether!

After waking up, he joined forces with October who regained his body, resonated into a god, destroyed Karenkaya, and then teamed up with October and Cangyue to fight against the ancient giants possessed by Muir V, and once again used the doomsday cannon, but was seriously injured and fell to the ground by Muir V's calculations, and after waking up, October had been killed in battle, but Muir V made a comeback, and Ryushi did his best to deliver the final blow, and finally injured Muir V, and the energy was exhausted, and he was been

The true god was rescued in September, and reunited with October and others in the field of mystery. After the earth was reshaped, Ryuxing and others attended Xuanyue's funeral.

One day, after three months of peace, Ryu's security company unexpectedly receives a challenge from September. With the help of Greedy Wolf, Ryuxing travels to find September, and is called back to VV Academy by the Broken Army along with October. It turned out that the person who pretended to be the one who stole and defeated the instructors of VV Academy was actually the "son" of September who traveled from the near future.

After learning about September's deification and the method of resurrecting September from the crystal ball, he went to the future water world to retrieve February, but on the way back to the past, he was broken by one of the Three Emperors and broke the space-time tunnel, resulting in another perspective of time and space. and the rest of the companions who returned from different worlds to defend against the Three Emperors. ］

Here's what Locke saw readers say about the work -

The plot of stealing stars is generally no problem, and the protagonist Ryuxing's dream is to catch September (although this stalk is basically useless later), but Ryuxing September runs through the whole story, and it also takes into account the roles of various supporting characters, which feels good.

The plot unit of stealing the stars is very obvious, and the climax is prominent, which is something I like very much. The following is briefly divided to appear reasonable, in order to save time, I am too lazy to find the number of original episodes. _(:зゝ∠)_

1. Ryuse's encounter with September, as well as their confrontation in some simple cases. This part is mainly the background explanation of Ryuxing September, and there are other important characters such as greedy wolves.

2. Enter VV Academy with the New York Crisis

3. VV Academy and the Black Moon Knight teamed up with Ryuxing to develop the Seventh Sense.

4. Ethereal Nation Unit

5. Poseidon unit

6. Demon Realm Unit

7. Doomsday showdown

8. Son ......

(Actually, I personally think that the end of the end here is the best, and the back is simply ...... ）

Each plot unit has a complete plot. The first small climax of the New York crisis, the main character is the greedy wolf of Liuxing September, Xiaobao wits at the airport and uses blue paint to get out of the mouth of the zombie, and then in March and February, the American police officer talked about people's dreams are stronger than fate, opening the oral escape mode of ordinary teenagers, and the big boss Applejack appeared at the beginning to lay the groundwork.

The female reporter Yuki is Applejack's lover and is caught in a struggle between good and evil, and the two are later martyred. Sensational enough, the plot is enough, the general juvenile manga manga routine, nothing amazing but there is nothing hard to flaw, no praise or disparagement, considering that this is the beginning of the plot, such a first level can be watched.

Then as the plot develops, more and more characters appear, climaxes are intertwined, the truth is constantly revealed, and attention is paid to multiple lines.

For example, in the apocalyptic part of the battle, the battle is also very layered, and everyone is matched with an opponent who matches their status and strength, for example, the boss of each unit is matched with Ryuxing or October, and the other divisions are matched with second-in-command and third-in-command, etc.

And the climax is repeated, for example, when the Black Moon Iron Cavalry was wiped out in the desert battle, VV Academy sacrificed his life to save him, and the handsome army took the lead. These are all common arrangements for shonen comics, but this is enough to arouse the reader's interest and enthusiasm. What else is blackening, partner love, amnesia, rescuing partners, partners scattered and collecting, are all common stalks in juvenile comics, and they are also very well used.

It's the apocalyptic part that's a bit rotten.

Secondly, the characters are also very good. If you often watch migrant workers, I feel that there are indeed only a few character types. Although the quality of stealing stars is not outstanding, but at least it is still passing, the cold queen Cangyue, the gentle brother Lucifer, and the teachers of various Black Moon Knights and VV Academy are all beautiful characters with distinct personalities, especially Cangyue Lucifer and other characters who are cold on the outside and hot on the inside are very popular

The villain portrayal is also very good

In the background, it is a modern fantasy story.

Overall, Star Stealing is a work that has successfully mastered its own story, the pace is sometimes too fast, the storyboard is sometimes rushed, but it is still a normal juvenile comic to migrant workers.

Some people may think it's naïve, but look at the Hokage, how about the demon tail? Although it's a little better than stealing stars, the overall story structure is still about the same, a lot of people with different personalities and abilities, the protagonist is very powerful, and then friendship works hard to win.

If the stealing star writes the lines a little more in the middle and the details of the plot and the hearts of the characters are depicted a little more, maybe some of the bridges will not seem abrupt and make readers like me embarrassed.

Speaking of shortcomings, it is also obvious. Although the climax can still make people burn, there are still too few fights, and they are not very exciting, because there are too few.

For example, Demon Tail Rinaz and Gerald fought at least two words, in the general shonen manga, a wonderful climactic fight is essential, and it must not be less than one word, and the battle of One Piece is generally about five to ten words, because it is a team battle, everyone must be described.

Star Stealing plays group battles from time to time, but normal battles are still very short, and they barely reach the climax. Ryuxing fought against Heinz, and later drank the blood of hell, otherwise it would just be a big move on your side and a big move on our side to cycle the feeling that we won. The combat part is one of the important essences of Mingongman. This feeling cannot be ignored.

And then it's the doomsday part that's rotten. October died, Ryuhoshi died, September died, and they all came alive. And then what the hell, the son came. This terrier accepts incompetence. For a cartoonist who is trying to write such a long story for the first time, it is better not to be too careful.

Although they are still in the other world in June, it would be a great work if they let Ryuxing sacrifice one in October and then end it here at the end of the day. If you don't want them to die, don't die. Do you know the most disgusting ninjutsu?

There is also a problem with the style of painting. The background is often monochrome, sometimes with effect lines. This is perfectly normal in black and white comics. But it's not good to be so careless in color comics.

It's too distracting to draw the background

I feel too lazy to paint the sky, it's all this glowing effect

That's why I still prefer black and white comics ( ̄o ̄). z Z

In addition,I read the first 8 books of stealing stars, I feel that there is more than the daily acceptance of the 200 words of the daily comic.,Although it's a good habit not to drag the play.,But it's too much stimulation for the reader.,The reader will be numb.,It's still more refined.,It's better to be more careful (how do you feel like this, so many things are true)

A relatively successful Chinese migrant comic, the starting point, test of the waters and representative works of Chinese migrant workers.