Chapter 135: Awesome article
Chapter 135 Awesome article
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The sense of expectation is a sense of reading second only to the sense of substitution in the novel, and of course the two are related.
You can say that there is a sense of substitution, so there is a sense of expectation, or you can say that there is a sense of expectation, and all have a sense of substitution, and the relationship is very close.
Whether it is a sense of substitution or a sense of expectation, there is one thing in common, that is, it needs to be accumulated, so in this regard, the short story is inherently limited by the long novel.
So don't think that short stories are easy to write, in fact, it is easy to write, but it is difficult to write well, and you have to arrange a lot of things in a small space.
From the perspective of the inkstone profession, Han Shi's "The Man Who Claims to Be a Plainclothes Policeman" has a bad beginning, and the story development is not clear enough.
"In fact, the name has been revealed, 'I' am a person who claims to be a plainclothes policeman, so it is fake, and I am afraid that I just want to get the money in this young man's pocket. Yan said: "Here, this paragraph is already obvious. ”
["Look at you, no matter what you say. It is clear that this money is not the right way to go. The money is kept in my possession for the time being. So, what is your profession, ask questions honestly, if you are sloppy, this matter is even more troublesome. ”]
Sure enough, it was asking for money, and Yan Tai was very sure of his judgment. ,
Well, that's right, it's not a conjecture or a judgment, this kind of text is a routine, but the next second, it's a plot beyond his expectations, when the "I" in the article took out the police manual and was ready to record, the young man's answer
[...... "I can't help it. Tell you the truth, I'm a plainclothes policeman. ”
"What? Jokes should be measured. How can you be a plainclothes policeman dressed like this? Isn't what you just found in your pockets proof of your identity?"
I pressed him again and again, and the young man changed his demeanor just now, and said seriously:
"I'm on a special mission for a reason. ”
"What task?"
In recent days, there has been an increase in the number of people who have been harmed by impostor plainclothes police. Don't look at the kind citizens who are shouting about "police brutality" just now, but when there is only one left, it will become obedient. The fake police took the opportunity to threaten, fabricate evidence, and rob money. We must not ignore such things. ”]
It's really like what the inkstone guessed, "I", the person who claims to be a plainclothes policeman, is a fake, but what he didn't expect was that the young man who was pitted by "me" turned out to be a real plainclothes policeman.
The next thing is the reversal of the scene, the originally high-spirited "I" wilted, and the originally wilted young man became high-spirited, which is really a turn of feng shui.
Then, under the pressure of the young people, "I" confessed and was lenient.
["That's ......"
"No matter what you do, but you look flustered, I can see it at a glance. Is the police ID you showed real or fake? It doesn't look bad, but the color of the cover is a little wrong....... ”
The opponent's words are calm and powerful, pressing step by step. I let out a long sigh and lowered my head.
"Although you have seen through this layer, I have no intentions, this is a joke, please understand. ”
"Can you be so sloppy? Why are you doing such a thing?"
The more the opponent asked, the more energetic I became, and I stammered and asked:
"Actually, I just want to write a mystery novel, hoping to get in touch with the facts of the crime......]
In the article, "I" is writing a mystery novel? Yantai suspected in his heart that when he didn't even pay attention to it, his attention was completely attracted by the novel, and the plot began to twist and turn.
The young man pressed and began to search "me", and found a very expensive diamond, and then used the diamond to bribe the young plainclothes policeman, and swore seriously that he would never dare again.
"I actually carried a diamond with me, what is the identity of 'I'?"
When the inkstone was still thinking about what the identity of "me" was in the book, the conversation reversed again, and "I" actually announced my identity again, and "I" was a plainclothes policeman.
[...... "I don't want to talk about this, if I say it, I will be entangled in the future, and I will ask for money in vain......"
"What nonsense is it? Tell the truth, what is work!"
In a fierce tone, I replied:
"It's plainclothes police. ”
"Nonsense, since you are a plainclothes policeman, why do you nod and ask for forgiveness?"
"This is to accomplish an extremely confidential mission. Recently, it has been rumored that some unscrupulous plainclothes police officers have committed misdeeds. He should have pursued and beaten the criminals fiercely, but he secretly engaged in deals, perfunctory, and did not make a report. There are people who do such bad things everywhere, and the prestige of the police is getting worse every day. In order to effectively clean up such incidents, I deliberately did not bring real documents. I am directly under the direction of the headquarters. ”
"Lie! Is there such a thing? You impostor. ”
The opponent shouted loudly, and I was louder than his:
"You're the one who fakes! You're real, and you're a morally corrupt and lawbreaker. If it's neither, he's a criminal who cheats money!"
"Ahh
The inkstone is a little confused, this one is more than three folds, from a plainclothes policeman to a speculative novelist, and finally to a plainclothes policeman who specializes in investigating plainclothes police, this identity is faster than Sichuan Opera changing face.
He originally liked the twist at the end of the pick-up, after all, short suspense only relies on twists, and it is obvious that Yantai likes this style very much.
It's just that the turning point of this article is too fast, and the inkstone has no time to analyze which words are false and which ones are true.
Before he came to his senses, the owner of the Western restaurant showed up and heard the conversation between the two, so since there was a controversy, it was better to call the police directly.
Then the opposition of "I" and the young men, and the reasons for the opposition, were exposed.
The reason for "me" was that I was under the Special Headquarters, and that the task of visiting plainclothes police officers was kept secret and that no one except the Minister knew about it. Therefore, even if it is connected, it does not make any sense.
The young man's reasoning is much the same: I don't even have papers for my position. When my boss and colleagues met me outside, they pretended not to know me, and if I called for help, my secret position would be exposed......
"It turns out that these two people are fake, fake plainclothes policemen, blackmailed more fake plainclothes policemen, and then were blackmailed by more fake plainclothes policemen, it's really complicated. ”
When a liar meets a liar, the inkstone is a kind of breathtaking, because in just a few words and the like, such a rich plot can be written, it is really simple.
Just when the inkstone thinks like this, a bigger turning point is coming!
As for why one more reason to add, it is not more than to say.
In the article, the restaurant owner is not stupid, and instantly debunks the fact that the two are not plainclothes policemen.
And then
[…… At this time, the boss said:
"Actually, I'm really a plainclothes police officer......]
"Huh?"
(To be continued.) )