Chapter 121 Cheap Luck

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Chapter 121 Cheap Luck

"It's too ugly to write. ”

Han Shi's words are indeed not good-looking, but they are not ugly, but the opinion in the heart of the language king himself has deepened.

It looks so ugly!

is short and ugly, which makes the few sense of expectation of the language king also wear out.

"The old man by the bridge, the title is also ordinary and strange. "Anyway, when the language king looks at the title, he can't see any anti-war flavor.

Han Shi is not a person who does not change the text at all, he will revise it slightly according to his own needs, just like this "The Old Man at the Bridgehead", he added a beginning.

At the beginning of the writing, there was something unexpected.

[In July 1936, the Spanish Civil War broke out, and the republican army and the rebels of fascist Franco fought fiercely, which was also the prelude to the outbreak of World War II......]

Although the language king does not study history, he still knows this matter, and it is a bit novel to come to such a piece of information in the first sentence.

This is a novel entry point, but most people don't know what the Spanish Civil War is all about, and the essay is for others to read, and if you don't understand it, the anti-war meaning is much smaller. The language king muttered in his heart.

Although the world does not feel the same way, but there is a heart-to-heart, the Chinese must be more able to understand aggression, because their motherland has suffered such a thing.

[How to make the numbers shocking, I found that just add the war in front of the numbers, 7000131981115 this string of numbers is not terrible, but what if I say that in the second world there were about 70 million dead and 130 million injured, a total of 190 million dead and wounded, which is equivalent to one eighth of Chinese, 1 Brazil, 1.5 Japan?]

What I'm going to tell is a real story......]

Compared with the introduction of the civil war in the first sentence, the second sentence is indeed enough to make a deeper impression. The language king nodded unconsciously.

[An old man with wire-rimmed glasses and dusty clothes sits on the side of the road. There was a pontoon bridge over the river, and carts, trucks, men, women, and children were pouring across it. Mule carts staggered up steep slopes from the side of the bridge, and some soldiers helped push the ...... But the old man sat there, not moving, he was too tired to walk. ]

This is followed by a large description, which is a bit weird and incompatible with the number jù at the beginning, and for the last sentence...... He was so tired that he couldn't walk, and he was impressed.

"How do you describe the suffering of the old man in the war? This is indeed a very good way to describe it. "As a person who has read many novels, the king of language guesses all the endings at the beginning.

The three identities of the elderly, women, and children are actually the easiest to arouse people's sympathy.

[My mission is to cross the bridge to reconnoiter the bridgehead on the opposite bank and find out exactly where the enemy has advanced.] After completing the task, I returned from the bridge to the original place. There were not many cars left, and pedestrians were sparse, but the old man was still there.

……]

"My mission is to cross the bridge to scout the bridgehead on the other side? The King of Languages said to himself.

As a Chinese teacher, this novel way of writing instantly hit his curiosity, and at the same time made the language king realize that Han Shi's anti-war essay was written as a miniature novel.

"In the article, this am I a scout? or some other identity, etc., combined with the beginning, this background is ......" The language king began to look up information on the computer, and now it is too vague to find the exact entry point.

The king of language patted his head violently: "It's really shocking, what do you care about the entry point, since even the identity of 'me' scout can be fictitious, let alone the entry point." ”

[……

"Where are you from?" I asked him.

"From San Carlos," he said, smiling. It was his hometown, so the old man rejoiced and smiled at the mention of it.

"I was taking care of the animals. He explained to me.

"Oh. ”

I said, not quite understood.

……]

The king of language is getting more and more serious, no, at first he still got up, his butt just leaned lightly on the cushion, thinking that he would finish sweeping in half a minute and then go to fetch water to drink, but now his butt has fallen firmly on the cushion.

The style of the story is slow, as if the author is slowly telling his personal experience, and the development of the story is not like what the king of language thought at the beginning, through the old man's oral narration about the cruelty of the war, the old man did not even say a word condemning the war from beginning to end, and kept talking about the animals he raised.

I'm worried about how he's gone, and the article is up to the point, and it's the end when it's time to end, without a little delay.

["I was taking care of the animals," he said blankly, but no longer to me, "I was just looking at the animals."] ”

There was nothing that could be done about him. It was Easter Sunday, and the fascists were advancing on Ebro. But the sky was overcast and the clouds were thick, and the fascist plane could not take off. This, coupled with the fact that the cat will take care of itself, is probably the only luck that this old man has. ]

In less than three minutes, the language king finished reading it carefully, and I have to say that "The Old Man at the Bridgehead" is less than 2,000 words, and a heavy war scene is written.

"It's so vague, or rather, a miniature novel that is as moist as a crisp spring rain. ”

Students' anti-war essays generally directly write about the dangers of war, and then imagine peace through the dangers, and if they write well, they may throw out a big proposition, which is direct anyway.

You can't say who is better directly or roundabout, just as you can't tell other people's cats and whose updates are faster.

But Han Shi's "The Old Man at the Bridgehead" can definitely be said to be unique in a roundabout.

The king of language muttered to himself: "There is not a single anti-war word in the whole article, but after reading it, I intuitively feel the cruelty of war, especially the last sentence, luck is so cheap." ”

What is ordinary luck? going out to meet a goddess, going out to pick up money, having a good start today, etc., but what about the luck of the elderly?

Because of the weather, the fascist plane can't take off, and the cat will take care of itself, these two things can't be counted as lucky at all, they are the only luck of the old man, and it can't help but make people feel sad when they say it.

"The rich content is still completed in just two thousand words, and the ability to control words is very strong, is this really written by Han Shi?"

The reaction is normal, the first reaction is to analyze this article, and the second reaction is that this is really written by Han Shi, from another point of view, this is too classic article.

The language king heard that Han Shi had written a short story before, saying something very good, of course, he must have been dismissive at the time, but now he wants to search it out and take a look......

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