Lin Daiyu's body has been half better, and she is naturally happy to see Xiangling come to live in the garden. Xiangling said with a smile: "I came in and had free time, so I could teach me to compose poetry, which is my creation." ”

Daiyu smiled: "Since you want to compose poetry, you will worship me as a teacher." Although I don't know it, I can probably afford to teach you. ”

Xiangling smiled: "Since this is the case, I will worship you as a teacher, you are not allowed to be impatient." ”

Daiyu: "If there is anything difficult, it is worth learning." It's just the beginning, the bearing, the turn, the combination, the middle of the bearing, the turn is two pairs, the flat sound to the voice, the virtual to the virtual, the real to the real, if there is a strange sentence, even the flat and the real are not right. ”

Xiangling said with a smile: "I often get an old poem, and I read one or two poems in the air, and some of them are very neat, and some are wrong, and I heard that one, three, five, two, four, six are clear." It seems that in the poems of the ancients, there are also those that are smooth, and there are also those who are wrong, so they are confused every day. Now I listen to you, it turns out that these style rules are the last thing, as long as the words and sentences are novel. ”

Daiyu: "It is this truth, whether the words or sentences are the last thing, the first is the intention is important. If the meaning is really good, the words and sentences do not need to be modified, which is naturally good, which is called not harming the words. ”

"I only love Lu Fangweng's poems, the heavy curtain does not roll up and linger for a long time, the ancient inkstone is slightly concave and gathers more ink, which is really interesting. ”

"Don't read a poem like this. Because you don't know poetry, you love it when you see this shallow one, and once you enter this pattern, you can't learn it anymore. You just listen to me, if you really want to learn, I have "The Complete Works of Wang Maha" here, you read 100 of his five-word rules, carefully figure it out and familiarize yourself with it, and then read 1,200 of Lao Du's seven-word laws, and then read 1,200 of Li Qinglian's seven-word quatrains. I first had these three people in my stomach as the foundation, and then read the poems of Tao Yuanming, Ying Ling, Xie, Ruan, Geng, Bao and others. You are an extremely smart and clever person, and you don't have to worry about not being a poet in less than a year's work. ”

Xiangling smiled and said: "In this case, good girl, you can take out this book for me, I will take it back, and it is good to read a few songs at night." ”

When Daiyu heard this, she ordered Zijuan to take out Wang Youcheng's five-word law and hand it to Xiangling: "You only see that the ones with red circles are all selected by me, there is a song, read a song." If you don't understand, ask you, girl, or if you meet me, I'll tell you. ”

Xiangling took the poem and returned to the Wuyuan Garden, ignoring everything, only reading them one by one under the lamp. Baochai urged her to sleep several times, but she didn't sleep. Baochai saw that she was so hard-working, so she just went with her.

One day, when Daiyu finished grooming, she saw Xiangling smiling and sending a book, and she wanted to change Du Lu again. Daiyu smiled: "How many songs do you remember?"

Xiangling said with a smile: "I have read all the red circle selections." ”

"Have you tasted something?"

"I have tasted some tastes, I don't know if it's or not, I'll tell you about it. ”

"It's about discussion to grow up, and I'll listen to you. ”

"In my opinion, the advantage of poetry is that it has an indescribable meaning, but it is realistic to think about it. There seem to be unreasonable, but it is reasonable and affectionate to want to go. ”

Daiyu smiled: "This has some meaning, but I don't know where you saw it?"

Xiangling said with a smile: "I look at his song "Plugged Up", that cloud: the desert is lonely, and the sun sets on the long river. Think about how straight the smoke is? The day is naturally round, this straight word seems unreasonable, and the round word seems too vulgar. When I closed the book and thought about it, it was like seeing this scene. If you say that you can find two more words to exchange these two words, you can't find two more words. ”

"Also: the sunset is white, the tide is blue, and the words white and green seem unreasonable. If you think about it carefully, you must have these two words to describe it all, and when you read it in your mouth, it looks like an olive weighing thousands of catties. We came to Beijing that year, and we stayed on the boat in the bay that night, and there was no one on the shore, only a few trees, and a few families in the distance were making dinner. Who knew I read these two sentences last night, and it felt like I was back in that place. ”

As she was talking, Baoyu and Tanchun also came, and they all sat down to listen to her poetry. Baoyu smiled: "Even if that's the case, you don't need to read poetry." I don't know much, and after listening to what you said, you can see that you have already obtained Samadhi. ”

Daiyu smiled: "You said that he was good at being alone, but you didn't know that he still had a trick on his predecessors." I'll give you this sentence to see, it's more light and ready-made than this. ”

As he spoke, he turned out Tao Yuanming's "Warm and Distant Village, Smoke in the Ruins" and handed it to Xiangling. Xiangling looked at it, nodded and sighed: "It turns out that the above character is evolved from the two words Yiyi." ”

Baoyu laughed: "You've got it, you don't need to talk about it anymore, it's getting more and more complicated." If you do it, it will be good. ”

Tanchun smiled: "Tomorrow I will make up a Cambodia and invite you to join the club." ”

Xiangling smiled: "Why do you bother to make fun of me, I just envy in my heart, so I learned to play." ”

Tanchun and Daiyu both laughed and said: "Who is not playing? Are we serious about composing poems? If we say that we have become poems seriously, we will laugh off people's teeth when we leave this garden." ”

Baoyu said: "This can be regarded as self-defeating. The other day, I was discussing the painting with my father-in-law, and they heard that we had started a poetry club and begged me to show them the manuscript. I wrote a few poems for them to see, and whoever wasn't really impressed immediately copied them back. ”

Tanchun and Daiyu hurriedly asked, "Is this true?"

Baoyu smiled: "It's the parrot on that frame who is lying." ”

When Daiyu and Tanchun heard this, they all said: "You are really messing around! Don't say that it is not a poem, it is a poem, and our pen and ink should not be passed on to the outside." ”

Baoyu: "What are you afraid of? Don't pass on the pen and ink in the ancient boudoir, and no one knows about it now." ”

I saw that Xichun sent into the painting to invite Baoyu, and Baoyu left. Xiangling forced Daiyu to change Du Lu again, and begged Daiyu and Tanchun: "Come up with a topic, let me go, come and correct it for me." ”

Daiyu said: "Last night's moon was the best, I was about to recite a song, but it was not completed, you make a song." The rhyme of the fourteenth cold, you love to use those words. ”

When Xiangling heard it, she was so happy that she took back the poem, thought about it again, wrote two poems, and was reluctant to read two poems. So the tea and rice are heartless, and they are unsettled. Baochai said, "Why bother asking for trouble? It's all the ones who lead you, and I'll settle accounts with her." You were originally stupid, but with this, you became more and more stupid. ”

Xiangling smiled: "Good girl, don't hurt me." ”

While saying it, I made a song, and I showed it to Baochai first. Baochai looked at it and smiled: "This is not good, it's not this practice." Don't be afraid, just show her what she has to say. ”

Xiangling listened, so she took the poem to find Daiyu. When Daiyu looked at it, she wrote: "The moon hangs in the sky and the night is cold, and the light is bright and the shadows are bright." The poet often thinks about playing, and the wild guest can't bear to watch. The jade mirror is hung on the side of the jade building, and the ice tray is hung outside the pearl curtain. What is the use of burning silver candles in a good night, and the brilliant reflection column of the sunshine. ”

Daiyu smiled: "It means that there is, but the wording is indecent." It's all because you read few poems, and you're bound by it. Throw this one away, make another one, and just let go of the courage to do it. ”

Xiangling listened, came back silently, and simply did not even enter the room, only under the tree by the pool, or sat on the mountain rocks to be distracted, or squatted on the ground to pick the soil, and the people who came and went were surprised. Li Kun, Baochai, Tanchun, Baoyu and others heard this information, and they all stood on the hillside and looked at her from afar. I saw her frowning and smiling again.

Baochai smiled: "This person must be crazy! Last night, I muttered and made a fuss until the fifth watch before I went to sleep, and before I had a meal, it was dawn." Then I heard her get up, and busily combed her hair, and went to find her. As soon as I came back, I stayed for a day, and it was not good to make a song, so I would naturally make another song. ”

Baoyu said with a smile: "This is exactly the earth spirit master, born with a human being, and no longer vain and emotional." We sighed all day long and said that it was a pity that she was such a vulgar person, who knows that there is today, it can be seen that heaven and earth are fair. ”

Baochai listened: "If only you could work as hard as her, is there anything you can learn?" Baoyu didn't answer.

I saw Xiangling Xingxing, and went to Daiyu again. Tanchun smiled: "Let's go along and see if she has some meaning." ”

said that they all came to the Xiaoxiang Pavilion, and saw Daiyu holding poems and paying attention to her. Everyone asked Daiyu, "How are you doing?"

Daiyu said: "Naturally, it's hard for her, but it's not good enough." This one is too chiseled, and it has to be done again. ”

Everyone saw that they wrote: "Non-silver and non-water reflect the cold of the window, and look at the clear sky to protect the jade plate." The faint fragrance of plum blossoms is about to be dyed, and the silk willow belt is dewed and dried. It is only suspected that the residual powder is coated with gold, like a light frost smearing the jade fence. Wake up from a dream The west building is uninhabited, and the aftermath can still be seen through the curtain. ”

Baochai smiled: "This is not like the moon, adding a color word under the word moon also makes it, you see, every sentence is moonlight." That's it, it turns out that the poem is nonsense, and it will be fine in a few days. ”

Xiangling thought that this song was wonderful, and when she heard this, she was disappointed, and refused to let go of her hand, so she had to think about it. Because she saw her sisters laughing, she walked to the front of the stairs and walked under the bamboo, digging her heart and soul, not listening to her ears, and not looking away. Tanchun smiled through the window and said, "Miss Ling, you can be idle." ”

Xiangling replied in a daze: "The idle words are deleted from fifteen, and the rhyme is wrong." ”

When they heard this, they burst out laughing. Baochai said: "It's really a poetry demon, it's all Feng'er who led her!"

Daiyu said: "The sage said that she would never tire of teaching, and she came to me again to ask me, how could I not say it?" ”

Li Kun smiled: "We pulled him to the fourth girl's room, led her to see the painting, and told her to wake up." ”

said that he really came out and pulled her to the lotus lotus champs and to the warm incense dock. Xichun is sleepy, taking a nap on the bed, and the painting stands between the walls, covered with a veil. Everyone woke up Xichun, and when the veil was lifted, there were three stops in ten stops. Xiangling saw a few beauties on the painting, pointed and smiled: "This one is our girl, and the other one is Miss Lin." ”

Tanchun smiled: "Anyone who can compose poems is painted on it, you can learn it quickly!" said and joked.

After they dispersed, Xiangling was still thinking about poetry. In the evening, I came out of my mind on the lamp, and went to bed after the third watch, and was widowed with both eyes, and did not fall asleep dimly until the fifth watch. At dawn, Baochai woke up, listened to it, and fell asleep peacefully, thinking to herself: "She has been tossing all night, and she doesn't know what she can do? ”

Just thinking about it, I heard Xiangling smile from the dream: "But there is! Isn't this one good enough?"

When Baochai heard this, she was both lamentable and ridiculous, and hurriedly woke her up and asked her, "What did you get? I couldn't learn poetry, and I got sick. ”

While talking, he freshened up, and went to Jia's mother with his sisters. It turned out that Xiangling worked hard to learn poetry, and her blood was sincere, and she couldn't do it during the day, and suddenly got eight sentences in her dream. After freshening up, he was busy writing it out, and he didn't know what to do, so he brought it to Daiyu again. As soon as I arrived at Qinfang Pavilion, I saw Li Kun and the sisters Fang coming back from Mrs. Wang, and Baochai was telling them that he was writing poems and talking in his dreams. Everyone was laughing, and when they looked up and saw her coming, they all scrambled to see the poem.

She greeted her and smiled, "Look at this one." If I do, I will still learn, but if I am not good, I will die of this poetry. ”

As he spoke, he handed the poem to Daiyu and the others, only to see that it was written: "The essence wants to cover up the difficulty, and the shadow is from Juan Juan's cold." An anvil knocks thousands of miles white, and the half-round chicken sings five more remnants. Listen to the flute in autumn on the green river, and lean on the railing at night on the red-sleeved building. Won Chang Moth should ask, why not make eternal reunion!"

Everyone looked at it and laughed: "This song is not only good, but also new and interesting." As the saying goes, there is nothing difficult in the world, but if you are afraid, the society must invite you. ”

When Xiangling heard this, she didn't believe it, but she expected that they were hiding her words, so she just asked Daiyu Baochai and others.