"I have a ...... story"

"Really?" Tamura's eyes lit up at once, and Lear seemed to see a tail wagging behind her.

"But I can't just give it to you. As you know, a good story has to match the graphics to have a greater effect. I can be sure that my story is fine, but you, can you be sure that your painting will fit the story?"

Maybe Lear was too loud, and Illya at the dinner table also followed the prestige.

"I don't know if I can do it...... "Tamura bit his lip and his body began to tremble, "but I'll try my best to learn." ”

"First of all, if you don't meet my standards, I won't let you draw this comic. Li Er touched the back of his head, "I'll write the script of the first episode here first, and you can draw it for me." ”

"Is it written here?" said Gu Yan with some surprise.

"The story has been there for a long time, and it's all here. Lear pointed to his right eye, where the small window of the beep was floating.

There was a blank manuscript paper everywhere, and Li Er took a random one and began to write. This time, he wrote the text, because this time it was mainly a test, so Tamura had to do the storyboard himself.

Because the finished product is already available, Li Er writes very quickly. In less than three minutes, he finished writing a sentence.

"Take it and read it. ”

Tamura took the manuscript paper with both hands, and then swept the title of the manga script.

…… Is this manga called Naruto?

There is no ninja called Naruto in history, right, so what is this manga about?

With such a question in mind, Tamura continued to look down. Then the scene of Naruto scribbling on the mountain of the Hokage Big Four made her laugh out loud: "This kid named Naruto is too naughty, isn't it?"

However, this also made Tamura quickly remember the characteristics of Naruto Uzumaki, and as the plot progressed, images appeared in her mind. The cold-hearted Iruka-sensei reprimanded Naruto, the Mizuki-sensei persuaded him, and after failing the exam, Iruka-sensei took Naruto to eat ramen, and Naruto pointed at him with chopsticks and said that he wanted to surpass the Hokage's appearance.

But after everyone passed the exam and put on the Konoha forehead guard. When Naruto sat alone on the swing and was ostracized by everyone, Tamura felt a faint tingling in his heart.

Why did everyone reject him?

After Naruto Uzumaki stole the arcane scroll, all the ninjas were sent out to find Naruto.

Iruka-sensei was the first to find Naruto, and at the same time found the marks on his body from his hard training. It turned out that Mizuki sued him, and when he got the scroll, he was able to graduate from the exam. Naruto is also because of this, desperately learning the ninjutsu above.

But he was actually used by Mizuki, and the scrolls were full of some dangerous forbidden ninjutsu.

Mizuki-sensei appears and gets rid of Naruto, informing Naruto that he is the nine-tailed fox monster that killed Iruka's parents. And it was for this reason that the people in the village rejected him.

Mizuki's words reveal this brutal truth. Naruto didn't want to believe his words, but at this time, Iruka-sensei risked his life and blocked the huge shuriken that Mizuki shot at Naruto. Iruka took Mizuki from his hands and protected Naruto. Protected him, the murderer of his parents......

It turns out that Iruka-sensei has also tried to attract the attention of others by using pranks and doing stupid things, and wants to gain the approval of others because she is lonely. He fully understood Naruto's feelings.

However, Naruto couldn't trust anyone else and fled. Mizuki chased after him. Iruka catches up with Naruto, only to be knocked away by Naruto. Iruka, who fell to the ground, transforms into Mizuki, wondering why Naruto found out that he is not Iruka.

It turns out that Naruto was transformed into Iruka.

However, Naruto was also hiding nearby, and he heard Mizuki say that the nine-tailed fox would definitely use the scroll to get revenge on the villagers. And Iruka said that the nine-tailed fox would do that, but Naruto would not do that.

Naruto's heartbroken by others was finally touched by Iruka-sensei. At this time, Iruka, who was already injured, could not resist Mizuki's next blow.

Naruto stepped forward and kicked Mizuki away. But Naruto, who didn't even graduate from the exam, didn't look like Mizuki's opponent at all in Iruka.

Unexpectedly, Naruto learned the technique of shadow clone on the scroll. Naruto, who could only conjure up a clone like a dead dog, conjured up a doppelganger full of mountains and valleys at this time. Countless clones swarmed up and immediately beat Mizuki like a dead dog.

The two who managed to catch the last killer returned to the Hokage and returned the scroll to its rightful owner.

And Naruto, who learned the doppelganger technique, also succeeded in obtaining Konoha forehead protection.

After reading this story, Tamura also burst into tears: "I'm so moved...... Well, I also want a teacher like Iruka, and I want Konoha forehead protectors too!"

"I'm a little happy that you're touched by the story, but can you finish the painting first and then be moved......" Li Er said helplessly.

"You're so cold. Illya stood behind Lear at some point.

"Wow, can you not be like the spirit behind you, suddenly popping out!" Li Er was startled and said. "We editors don't look at comics from a different angle than you do. The bridges that you think are touching are actually carefully designed by Tongguò. And if you know those techniques and techniques, you won't be so moved......"

"Hey~ Did you use this technique in the script you wrote just now?"

"Absolutely. But explaining this is like debunking the magic trick, which will make the story very boring. Do you want to hear it?"

"Then you don't have to. Anyway, I just need to take care of the drawing, and writing the story is your business. Illya tilted her head.

"You're really ...... to make people," Lear said speechlessly.

Tamura seemed to be moved, and sat down on his knees on the marble floor, palms of his hands down, five fingers facing each other, and his head bowed: "Teacher Li Er, please let me draw this story!!"

"What are you doing, this is Huaxia, and it is not popular to sit down. It's cold on the ground, you better hurry up!"

"If you don't let me paint, I won't get up!"

"Okay, you draw. But let me see if the quality of the painting is not up to par. I won't draw you until your skills are up to match the story. ”

"Yes. I'm going to start storyboarding now, so please wait a minute. Tamura hurriedly got up from the ground, and said to Illya, "Illya-sensei, can I use the manga tools here?"

"Yes, anyway, the "Ghoul in Beijing" of this sentence has also been drawn. ”

"Then I'll be out of company first. Tamura said, grabbed the manga tool and ran to his assistant's desk.

Illya pointed her chin with her index finger: "Is it really that interesting, I want to see it." ”

"It's better that you don't watch. ”

"Well, why ......?"

Because if you see it, there's nothing to do with Tamura......

Tamura foreshadowed the book, and twenty minutes later, the storyboard was finally completed.

With apprehension, Tamura handed the manuscript paper to Lear. Illya, who was standing behind Lear, stood on tiptoe to see what Tamura had drawn, but she couldn't see it because she was too short. In a fit of rage, he directly moved a chair and stepped on it. This time, I was finally able to see it.

The part of the drama is okay. Probably because girls are more delicate, and when Naruto was ostracized, the atmosphere of loneliness was well rendered.

But from the beginning of the martial arts, the storyboard was messed up. The whole fight scene is too heavy, there is no feeling of switching very lightly, there are a few squares that are too stiff, and some movements are very stiff, and it feels completely inconsistent with human body dynamics.

In the manga "Naruto", the martial arts part is very heavy. Kishimoto's fights, just looking at the manga has a very smooth feeling. And watching his storyboard is like watching an animation, and the eyes can directly make up the middle picture.

And he also has a very good grasp of the rhythm of large and small shots.

Like him, he often puts in a large shot from a bird's-eye view at the most ** time of the story, and then adds a few characters in the close-up scene. This kind of shot is the easiest shot in the movie to create the feeling of a big scene. Put this kind of lens in the best place, and there will immediately be a feeling that makes people's blood boil.

But this kind of technique is not just a rigid one.

"How about it, Mr. Li Er, if you have an opinion, don't mention it politely, I can accept it!"

Seeing Tamura's expectant eyes, Li Er's words were speechless again. But he couldn't let Tamura take out the Hokage like this......

"I think it's better for you to tell the truth. Illya spoke. She lifted her skirt and jumped out of her chair, "Her fight scenes are completely substandard, right?"

"Really, I don't think I did a good job of drawing those scenes. Tamura bowed his head.

"Maybe you're not good at painting. I don't want to talk too hard about this, after all, everyone has a different style and a different understanding. In this way, I'll give you a ......."

Li Er took out a notebook from his pocket, unscrewed the cap, and began to write on it.

Illya glanced at her tiptoes and saw that they were all names from action movies.

After writing about 500 titles, Li Er tore off these pages: "These are the names of some classic action movies in my images, including Hollywood, Chinese, and your Japanese sword and halberd films. Copy the sub-shots in it well, do your homework and draw the first sentence again. When I'm satisfied, I'll give you the following. ”

Tamura took the note, put it away closely, and bowed to Li Er 90 degrees: "I will definitely not disappoint your expectations!"