Some book friends said that I wrote about water recently, I didn't feel this way when I wrote it, but looking back today, it seems that it is really a bit watery, and there are many paragraphs and plots that are completely unnecessary, or it can be completely condensed and compressed...... This is not my intention, and I don't know when I started to have this style and habit.

This is a problem, or a big problem, it can be regarded as a 'cancer' in a novel!!

So we have to get rid of this problem, and we have to do it as soon as possible!

But it was really hard to suddenly break the previous habits, and after thinking about it all night, I wrote the same scene over and over again, and only now did I finalize a few hundred words, mainly because I didn't think about what kind of description to use.

I've written eighty or ninety chapters, and when I think about it, I haven't written much of the plot, and if it were at this rate, I wouldn't have to write five or six million words for this book, but I was going to finish it with two million words.

After a careful reflection, I realized that I had taken the wrong path from the beginning!

Before writing the book, I read a writing guide, and I forgot where I read it, which said: 'Each chapter, there should be only one focus, just write this one focus well, don't write too many things, it will look messy...... 'I can't remember the original words, anyway, that's probably what it means, it's more serious than that.'

At that time, I thought that this sentence was right, and then this idea was deeply rooted, and when I wrote, I wrote according to this sentence, and you can look back, I basically talk about one thing in every chapter, and all the paragraphs are to enrich the 'key points' in each chapter.

Now it seems that either I didn't understand the essence of this method and didn't use it right, or I was cheated by this writing guide!

Anyway, this method is not suitable for this book, at least not for the current plot advancement.

I'm not going to do it behind closed doors tonight, so I'm going to take the time to read a few good books, study and compare them, and see if I can get some inspiration from them and let me fix my mistakes.

This problem really can't be changed slowly, and it must be solved as soon as possible, otherwise it may really hit the street when it is put on the shelves, after all, no reader will like to look at the chapters of Shuishui, and I don't like to read it either!

All of you who collect this book, no matter what you like about this book, you also want to see the progress of the plot of this book faster.

So I'm taking a leave of absence today, also so that I can write this book well, so I ask for your understanding.

If I can get some inspiration, I'll see if I can be lazy when I go to work tomorrow, anyway, I'll try to make up for it tomorrow, I'm sorry today~