Chapter 35 The disciple obeys his work

The coffee suddenly made such a fuss, probably because he was angry. This little girl has been taken by Dong Shixuan to learn to write since she was a child, and the advantage of following the seniors is that she can really learn a lot, plus the resources in the circle are good. But the pressure is not small. Coffee has a high emotional intelligence, and most of it has been trained in avoiding various conflicts. After all, she knew early on that what she wrote might not be so good, and this was a real black spot.

And now, Dong Shixuan felt that it was more appropriate to let Yue Qingyan guide her, and she was much more relaxed. Facing an uncle is completely different from facing a young boy who is a few years older than him. But Yue Qingyan doesn't care about others splashing dirty water, because he has a strong foundation, but he doesn't need to endure this, he can't bear it. However, Yue Qingyan said don't toss, then don't let him know that she is tossing.

Guan Xi was a little apprehensive. Du Xiao is his senior, and when Guanxi published his first book, Du Xiao almost helped him revise the manuscript and communicate with the editor. But sales are still a problem, probably less than 7,000 copies sold in total, and the publisher barely pays back the cost and doesn't make much money. Guanxi's path is a bit similar to Du Xiao's, with realistic themes, taking a pure literary route, with depth and a sense of heaviness. However, Guanxi's own lack of observation of society and life, and insufficient accumulation of experience, make his novels now seem a little superficial and do not touch on the core issues. If you really touch it, it's easy to overwrite. This is also a common problem of young authors: poor control.

Guan Xi is also mixed in the groups of those young authors, and he also knows that the recent groups are not peaceful. But he was recommended by Du Xiao to study with Yue Qingyan, so it was inconvenient for him to speak out. Du Xiao believes that Yue Qingyan's writing ability is at least no less than him, and Guan Xi is also convinced. However, being baptized by various remarks in the group, it is certain that I am not happy.

What Guan Xi handed over to Yue Qingyan for review was a recently written novella, which could represent his current level. After Yue Qingyan read it twice, he began to mark it with a pencil. Then he began to talk to Guan Xi about his thoughts on reading this manuscript: the depth of thinking is enough, but the depth of description and details can't keep up, so the whole novel is a bit preachy.

Then, Yue Qingyan told him where and how to change it, where there is a problem with this paragraph, and which paragraphs should be adjusted in order. Especially when it comes to adjusting the order of paragraphs, Guan Xi reads it according to the new order, and the whole person is not good. It's all written by myself, but after adjusting the order, the reading feeling is much better, it's like juggling.

How good is this Yue Qingyan at writing? Shouldn't he be a newcomer? Theoretically, he debuted much later than Kaka and him, why is his ability to control words so strong?

At this time, it also shows that coffee coffee still has an advantage over Guanxi in terms of stylistic ability. After reading Yue Qingyan's adjustment, Ka Ka immediately understood why, and then confirmed it with his own novel. Although I spent the whole afternoon explaining this novella of Guanxi, I also gained a lot from coffee.

When the two left Yue Qingyan's house together, Guan Xi couldn't be more convinced by Yue Qingyan.

"Hey, Guanxi, how's it going?" asked Ka Ka as he pulled Guanxi.

"How's that?"

"Lao Yue, awesome, right?"

Guan Xi nodded seriously: "It's really amazing." Everything is on point, and it makes me fully understand why I want to change it and how it might be better. They don't help me change it, but hope that I can use my own understanding and words to achieve it. It's amazing. Although Mr. Du Xiaodu can point out the problem, he doesn't know my writing method, and I have to run in with him several drafts in this regard. ”

"Can you watch Lao Yue being said by them?" asked with a smile. She had revealed the most basic and simple purpose: to find an ally for herself.

"I'm not happy in my heart, but what can I do?" Guanxi has never been good at this kind of thing.

"First of all, of course, it's to make a big deal out of it. Now it's limited to the author's circle, and no matter what we do, we will be found out and said that we did it. Indeed, we are the only ones who have a strong incentive to do so. How are we going to do it if it doesn't spread?"

Guan Xi looked at Ka Ka, at this moment he had already ignored that Ka Ka had already begun to say "we", and he had already been marked into a bunch in words. He thought, is this coffee coffee trying to trick Yue Qingyan? Is it really good to make a big deal about this matter?

Ka Hehe smiled and said, "I know what you're thinking. However, don't forget, the day after tomorrow, the first and second volumes of "Yinying" are released, and now is the time when Yinying fans are most looking forward to and most lively. Why did you dare to print 150,000 yuan before tomorrow? Because on several platforms, the full amount of the reservation is 70,000 yuan. It's estimated that there are hundreds of thousands of fans. Once the news got out that a few young writers were secretly arranging a feast......"

"Just a feast?"

Ka Ka nodded: "It's just a feast." Lao Yue's use of two pen names still makes sense. Moreover, let the fans stare at the people of the black banquet, so that we are not easy to expose. Only insiders know that Xia Li and Yanhuo are one person. But at least no one will talk about it so soon. Didn't Ming Qian delete all the previous live videos? Just to leave no evidence, there will be room for operation in the future. ”

Guan Xi has been led away by the idea of coffee coffee at this time. He nodded and said, "That's fine." And then what?"

Kaka shrugged his shoulders and looked innocent: "I prepared a bag of black materials." Of course, it's a vest to make a haircut. ”

Guan Xi was already a little confused by the fighting strategy of the coffee coffee, and said, "Can this work?"

Coffee Hehe smiled evilly and said, "Actually, I'm just throwing bricks and stones." Yinying fans have a lot of talents, after all, this book looks light, but it's not brain-dead, and many of the people who like this book are experienced in the struggle of Gong Dou fans, historical fans, and a large number of rotten female compatriots. Their experience in fighting is much richer. ”

said that Guanxi was moved, and the two simply took action overnight. In those groups that said strange things, the atmosphere was not right, Guan Xi said a few unconsciously, and even deliberately jumped out to support Yue Qingyan as an apprentice who studied writing with Yue Qingyan, and immediately let the group fry. That night, an author posted on Weibo, writing a long article about how Yue Qingyan was taken care of by Mingqian Company and supported by seniors in the circle. At the same time, it was also revealed that the first printing of a single volume of "Yinying" was 150,000, and it is estimated that the guaranteed sales of the whole series have exceeded 1 million copies.

Then, the trumpet opened by the coffee and secretly changed the post, and Aite made a few accounts such as the Yinying fan club. Eunyoung fans immediately took action.

In Yinying fans, there are really many talented people. The girl with the online name "Attack on Phileteliga" refuted Yue Qingyan's statement that he was taken care of one by one, and said that he should not be taken care of if he had enough ability? If he didn't take care of such a best-selling author, would he take care of these street goods? "Attack on Phileteliga" looked at the pen and tone of tone, which made the coffee coffee a little surprised, too sophisticated. The line of civilization is fast and cool, and the poisonous tongue is extremely powerful, especially a few vicious expressions with twists and turns, it's okay if you don't understand it, it's almost angry if you think about it. This kind of writing ability, I think it must be a fellow practitioner, maybe it has long been in the group of young authors. It's really hard to say that group of 100 people.

However, there is a "Attack on Filetliga" post padding. Coffee took action. The vest of the coffee is called "Deputy of the Second Regiment of the Knights of the Worried Country", and he threw out three posts comparing his writing ability at once, with a face of cheering for "Attack on Philetliga", and said that there is a follow-up...... With such firepower, no matter how it came about, Yinying fans immediately rejoiced and began to black those young authors.

It wasn't until the next day when they went to work that the public account managers of Mingqian Company found out about the situation, but they couldn't help it. The next day was the launch ceremony of "Yinying", and they didn't dare to do anything now. Quelling the situation in the fan base? Why should the fans of Yinying make such a fuss as one, and it is clear that they can save a lot of sales? For the publishing house, the sales volume is the first, and it is the work of its own core author. In contrast, does it matter what the mentality of the young writers is?

Ah Yue didn't know about this until the afternoon, and the various responses they had arranged hadn't started yet, and the circle was already noisy, and those troublemakers had been so black that they didn't dare to surf the Internet. However, even if those guys don't read Weibo and the like, Coffee will still be as a caring senior writing circle partner, constantly transferring various posts to the group, saying to everyone, you want to speak, how can someone want to scold Lao Yue? How pleasant was it for everyone to eat and drink together before? It must be a misunderstanding, you can't say it, I'll say it, it's no problem to help you bring a word.

Guan Xi put on the appearance of a reasonable guest, pretending not to know that it was a post from a coffee coffee, and commented on those posts seriously, saying that he could see the gap, but it was not so big.

A group that was originally quite active was almost dispersed by them.

Lian Xingjie read a few posts, and directly dialed the phone to Ka Ka: "You did it, right?"

Kaka immediately admitted frankly: "Of course. Who else could it be? After learning from Lao Yue, you have to help him deal with things that are inconvenient for him. ”

"You've seen too much Gong Dou, right? Or have you watched too much martial arts?" Lian Xingjie said angrily: "Isn't this adding to the chaos?"

"It's okay, I'm measured. Coffee said: "Look at the Yinying fans making a wave, which will help your sales." ”

"Don't act so aggressively in the future. Our side is very passive to deal with, and in the long run, Yue Qingyan's appearance of this kind of limelight may not be beneficial to him in some aspects. Lian Xingjie said: "It's not unreasonable for the company to press it here." ”

"What's the point?" said Ka Ka angrily.

"'Soul Breaker' is now a nomination for Best Short Story last year. What do you say?" hung up the phone.

so violent. The coffee lost his temper when he heard this, and the best short story Alas, this is an opportunity to enter the mainstream discourse circle of the pure literary circle. If Yue Qingyan is involved in the conflict between fans and young authors, even if a fan or someone has radical remarks, which makes a large group of judges disgusted, it will be enough to choke. Kaka now understands that this thing is really not a good thing to say is a bad thing.

But it's not without opportunities to make amends. Ka Ka thought for a while and asked Yue Qingyan: "Now that the fans are so supportive of you, do you want to attend the book launch?"

Yue Qingyan agreed without much thought. Then Ka Ka hurriedly called Lian Xingjie to report the good news.