Some say recently written about water.

First, a group of brothers in the group said, I'll say one more chapter, one more chapter, one more chapter, one more time.

I don't read much of the book review section now.

But tonight I couldn't help but go and see it again.

Others say water.

That's why I can't sleep.

Can't sleep all night.

Is it really water.

I don't know whether to say something or not.

Because I don't know how many readers can really read these words objectively and fairly.

……

There are some things that, as an author, can't actually be acknowledged.

Not even self-deprecation.

That's a little lesson I've learned for myself.

You can't say what may not be the problem yourself, because some readers don't actually notice it in the first place, and they don't think about it.

And once you'...... Whether it's sincere or self-teasing, in short, once you point it out yourself, hey, hey, he understands, he understands.

When I wrote the last book of the Seven Generations, I had the audacity to laugh at myself in the chapters, "Ah, it's really water" and something like that.

I don't necessarily think so.

But the reader took it seriously, and listened to it as soon as he heard it.

Huh~ He remembered it firmly.

From then on, he feels water in any chapter, how do you write how he feels water.

Sometimes you're so anxious that you want to smash your keyboard.

The development of events is nothing more than the cause, process, and effect.

These things really need to be concise and to the point, and two or three lines will be over.

Then the 2,000-word book is basically the end of the book.

One more word counts me as losing.

Three electric fans on the live broadcast day.

……

Anyway, it's the middle of the night, and my mind is not very clear.

I also don't quite understand that dry hair has to write this nonsense out.

Anyway, let's talk about it.

So far, I have believed that these recent chapters have been written with a motive in mind.

There are one or two chapters, and I feel quite satisfied.

The lad writes okay.

It stinks for a few seconds before it is haired.

I don't think it's any different from the bunch of rhythms I wrote before.

It could be a bit nagging.

Maybe the so-called plot progression is a little slow.

But if you think about it, it wasn't really fast before, was it?

If you insist on saying that there is really any difference between the current plot and the past.

Maybe it's the background of "Demon Invasion".

Let's be honest.

This paragraph is deliberately set up to imitate articles such as the main station fantasy.

This kind of bridge section has only appeared in the section where Wu Tian returned from the Demon Realm and the Martial Immortal Stream Hall was blocked.

In the original outline, this paragraph was absent.

The original paragraph is also not in the outline.

Originally, Wu Tian came back from the universe calmly and quietly retreated on the island, well, it was the island where the spherical flying machine smashed a demon warrior.

Originally, Wu Tian came back from the Demon Realm calmly and quietly lived in seclusion in Wuxian Stream.

But at the end of the day, when the plot developed to this point, I couldn't help but make such an adjustment and add such a paragraph.

It's just to add a little bit of drama to the plot, add a little bit of fun, and create a little bit of emotion.

Maybe I messed it up.

has created such a background, but it still follows the previous rhythm, step by step, little by little, instead of immediately beating those demons to a pulp, and smashing the points that should be stepped on......

Something like that.

Perhaps it caused unpleasantness.

I don't seem to be very good at pacing this kind of plot.

But I'm really, really.

Wish the book could be a little better.

It's a little better-looking.

Write two chapters a day......

It's all stressful.

After all, the book has a good grade.

The editor said don't be pressured, write at your own pace, and you should be more motivated if your grades are so good.

But......

The motivation hasn't come before (laughs), but the pressure is still there every day.

What is my own rhythm?

I don't know.

Can you sum it up? You can leave a comment in the book review.

Every day when I open the word, I am afraid that this chapter will not be written well.

Often falls into self-doubt.

They all say that my book is against the sky, and it is awesome, you are terrible...... Something like that.

But I know my own business.

In my head and stomach, I don't really have much goods.

And the original way of the same people is relatively wild.,It's not easy to write a little better.。

In addition, Dragon Ball is full of loopholes and contradictions, and the original work is still framing you like a big sieve, and from time to time there are one or two setting party exams according to the party, and it is also very uncomfortable to point out here and teach a lesson there.

With such a little, can I write a full chapter?

When this kind of self-questioning is serious, it becomes ......

With such a little, how many words can be written in this book?

Sometimes I feel scared and don't know what will happen in the future.

Perhaps this is the reason why some people think that the content is watery.

I wanted to write out the plot I wanted to write in detail, but it caused a chapter to go down, and there weren't many so-called dry goods.

Maybe subconsciously, I want to write more.

Let this story stay with you a little longer.

I don't know very well.

……

The editor said that a chapter of 2,000 words, of course, no matter how you write it, some people will feel that it is watery.

When you think about it, it seems to make sense.

Maybe...... Is it better to go back to the previous kind of three thousand and one chapters?

Think about how tired my heart is (teary eyes).

……

This text in the middle of the night is also written in a mess.

I don't know if you guys have noticed.

It's all short sentences.

Party.

Another line.

Maybe this kind of writing will look less nagging and more neat?

(laughs)

……

It's a little self-review and reflection five days after it was put on the shelves.

In the next chapters, I will try to adjust and consider it as much as possible.

Accept criticism and improve slowly.

After all, it's all up to you to support you.

Without you, I'm nothing.

But of course, as you can see, I didn't sleep all night. I don't know if I'll doze off or something during the day, so maybe tomorrow, oh, today's update will be later, I can't say for sure, but it's going to be late.

In a word...... I keep writing, write well.

Do everything I can to satisfy you.

Have fun.

(laughs)

Above.

……

July 13, 2016 at 5:08 a.m

Wing Red Fire (To be continued.) )