[This chapter is all added, and it doesn't cost anything!]

In view of the fact that many friends have reported that the plot about the heroine in more than 70 chapters is a little abrupt, so Xiaotian spent a whole day today to change this paragraph, so that the part where the hero and heroine meet becomes smoother.

The specific chapters involved are:

The first volume, 38, 39, 40 "Suggestions" a large chapter, which tells the story of the male protagonist seeing the female protagonist's back at the gate of the Taishou Ya, and then meeting the female protagonist again in the restaurant.

Volume 1, Chapter 60 "Negotiation and Nightmare", in addition to the original negotiation of the share of Changshan Island between the various families, there is also a description of the male protagonist having a nightmare, which can be regarded as a foreshadowing for the remnants of the ancient civilization who later led to the cultivators.

Volume 1, Chapter 61 "The Beginning of a Glimpse", which adds a paragraph, the plot of the male protagonist and the female protagonist meeting on the dock of Xiashan Island, it is also here that the female protagonist reminisces about the male protagonist, and then leads to the next paragraph of "Qingbai Porcelain" copy.

At the same time, in the first volume, chapters 74 and 75 have modified some details to make the whole plot more compact, and in chapter 74, the male protagonist offers advice to the female protagonist and gives some guidance to the female protagonist's trip to Chang'an. In Chapter 75, some details of the male protagonist's encounter with the female protagonist's parents have also been modified accordingly.

Finally, in the first volume, chapters 83 and 84, an adjustment and modification was made at the end of the plot about the heroine, and the details were more harmonious.

In short, this plot is roughly modified like this!

In fact, when Xiaotian wrote this, he also felt it, and for me, for the heroine, such a setting can highlight the importance of the heroine!

I'm not used to treating the female protagonist as a supporting role for the male protagonist.,It's just a dispensable role.,Now this modification can be regarded as maximizing the retention of the heroine's independence.。

Alas...... It turns out that in the online text, the multi-angle narrative technique is indeed not suitable. The ambitions of the past have gradually been defeated by reality......

The book is now in a collection of almost 4,000, but the average order is still dismal......

It's been almost a year since I graduated, and I've experienced many setbacks, but now it's the most important thing to eat your stomach......

I will continue to work hard to write this book, retain my own characteristics to the greatest extent, and try to learn to write this book more refreshingly, so that book friends can read it more comfortably, so that there will be more rewards and subscriptions......

In addition, in the next period of time, I will take some time to re-examine this book from the beginning, revise some of the vulgar language, and hope to improve the level of this book, and if there are any major changes, I will also use this chapter to report to you.