The second part of "The First Intimate Contact" is mainly about the part where the ruffian Cai and Qingwu Feiyang meet and date. ◢ with ◢ dream ◢ small ◢ .lā

As always, the style, gags, all kinds of seemingly reasonable nonsense, and occasionally get in the car, but the romance and sweetness in it are more and more addictive.

This was originally a story about online dating in the last century, and the main characters were graduate students and college students.

But its plot is very realistic even now.

What is the most afraid of this kind of love story, and what I am most afraid of is that it can arouse empathy.

has earned enough feelings, attracting a large number of people to think back to what happened to them back then, how much they regret it, and how nostalgic they are. Immediately afterwards, a group of members of the FFF group were roasting the fire, clapping their hands and celebrating, and the division was good, no matter whether it was a real man!

Especially the perfume rain section, which romantically made many people run to try it at night, and then took photos and posted them on Weibo, gaining a lot of attention through the heat.

But then the person hiding behind the screen is feeling sorry for his perfume again, MMP, I knew that the water was coming, and it was cheap.

These refer to the good side, there are two sides to everything, and "First Close Encounter" is no exception.

However, the bad side is not in the quality, the readers of "Let's Listen" are not so demanding people, compared to other youth magazines, they seem to be far more tolerant.

It's mainly about some obvious foreshadowing in the plot.

Those small details are being picked up, and the most critical and obvious thing is the red on the neck of the ruffian Cai who saw the light dance and flying.

Such an obvious hint, as long as you are not a fool, you know what kind of transformation will follow.

As a result, a new round of crusade against the "warm old thief" is like a prairie fire, burning more and more.

"Mother, warm old thief, why don't you come out for me, you point to this line and tell me what it means!"

"I shouldn't have believed in the character of a warm old thief, and I actually fell into this bottomless pit again. ”

"It seems that the blades were sent too little last time, and this time we have to increase the amount. ”

"Don't panic, I have a wholesale of blades at home, you can crowdfund and send blades, how many come, I will send you in boxes. ”

"Add me one, how much does a blade cost?"

"I only sent one last time, so let's get two this time. ”

……

In addition to these comments that made Ning Yue very unhappy, there were still some comments that made her feel more or less gratified.

Although I had a vague premonition of what would happen next, I couldn't help but want to keep watching. This pair is so sweet, kneel and beg for mercy from the warm teacher!"

"Indeed, there is still an issue of content, I can't wait to see the following content, this time the treatment should not be as simple and crude as "Spirit Bead". ”

"This pit is too deep for me to get out. ”

"To be honest, this is also a feature of a warm teacher, although it makes people very sad to watch, but the plot can always make people have endless memories. ”

"I knew it was poison, but it tasted so good, I couldn't help but read it with tears in my eyes. ”

"Teacher Nuan, next time I write something sweet, I will be beaten if I am so abused. ”

Something strange seems to have come in.

No matter how much it is.

In short, Ning Yue is still very satisfied with these comments, this is a lovely reader.

Like the group of guys above, the first thing to correct is their title, a warm old thief, and they really don't know how to be polite at all.

There is also the matter of sending blades, which is a very serious problem, how can such a dangerous thing as a blade be transported in a box. And now there are a lot of scammers in online crowdfunding, and it is not possible to have a sharp eye without practice.

"You must have already written out the rest of the content, just send it to me. ”

"Vomit.jpg can you please not be disgusting, and besides, why do you think I've written out the rest of the content. Seeing that Yueguanghai unconsciously used a coquettish tone, Ning Yue unceremoniously replied with a vomiting expression.

"It turns out that you haven't finished writing it yet, but it doesn't matter, just tell me the general direction of the plot later. Moonlight replied.

"Don't even think about it, refuse to spoilers. ”

Ning Yue's attitude was resolute.

"Knowing the work of the author you are responsible for is what a good editor should do. ”

"But I never felt like you were a qualified editor, just honestly waiting for my next submission. Okay, I'm offline first. ”

Fingers flew on the keyboard, and after quickly typing this string of words and sending it out, Ning Yue was directly invisible.

She knows very well now that she can't use any connivance and concessions for the Moonlight Sea, this guy has an extremely bad personality, once the gap is opened, she will definitely have to move forward inch by inch, step by step.

Such a cold rejection is the best way to deal with it.

"The First Time has recently become a hot topic. QQ also came to Enron's words at this time.

"I'm afraid they're trying to shoot me to death now. Ning Yue replied with a smile on the corner of her mouth.

"When they see the final ending, they won't think so. "The First Time" is much more harmonious than "Lingzhu" in terms of plot development, there are a lot less blunt places, and it is also more touching, to be honest, it gives a much deeper impression, I have to say that Ning Yue, your ability to tell stories is getting better and better. An Ran typed a long string of texts.

"I'd be embarrassed to say that. ”

Ning Yue's face was slightly red.

"Lingzhu" is a work written by herself, and the general trend is actually borrowed from the fairy sword, so the control is not bad, but the ending is forcibly depressed, although it has been adjusted several times, it still seems a little blunt after all.

"First Close Contact" is different, this routine was very novel at the time and now in the world, especially the various nonsense of online chat, which looks fresh, and the promotion of the plot also has a natural sense of naturalness.

I have to say that the level is two grades higher than that of "Lingzhu".

"After the first time is written, will the new work under the pen name of Warm still be of this type?" Song Anran asked.

"I'm sure I'll write a warm short story for a transition. Ning Yue thought for a moment.

"Hey, can't wait to taste yours

It's a new work, and how is Ning Xue's writing?"

"Wow, after reading Ning Xue's new book, you are poisoned, and you often come up with words like this. ”

"No way, who asked Ning Xue to write so interesting. Delicious .jpg" An Ran's reply was a little playful.

"I'm afraid I'm going to disappoint you, Ning Xue basically hasn't written much recently, and there are still only two issues of content. ”

"Well, it's a bit of a disappointment. Be sure to tell me when you write it out later. ”

"Uh-huh. Ning Yue affirmed.

Treating Enron is naturally different from treating the Moonlight Sea.

However, the new book will not be released until the end of November, so it's still early, so don't rush it, take your time.